Brokeback Mountain Forum @ ennisjack.com

The Movie & Story => Characters, Quotes & Scenes => Topic started by: Angelove on Dec 30, 2005, 05:49 PM

Title: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Angelove on Dec 30, 2005, 05:49 PM
Hi everyone,

My name is Ryan.  Nice to meet everyone.  ^^

I didn't want to watch the movie when it first came out because I thought it was Hollywood's attempt to cash into the Pink Dollar. However, on boxing day, December 26th, I went to watch it with three of my friends. We decided to pick the 8pm showing at the Tinseltown Vancouver and it was jammed packed with people which was a surprise for me since the movie was released a week ago and I didn't expect to be such a huge turnout.

When the movie ended, I stood up, went home and called my boyfriend, who's studying many miles away abroad at this time, to tell him that even though my family and friends are in Vancouver, if I had to make a choice, I choose him.

You see, for the longest time, I always held my friends and family in priority over my boyfriend and I didn't think much of it even though I loved him. After all, my friends and family were there for me before I met JC and I felt wrong to put my boyfriend above people who I have been with all of my life. So it didn't feel right to abandon my life in Vancouver to move up there to live with him.

It was only after watching Ennis at the end of the movie that I realized how much I love JC and how much I would regret not being with him if he disappeared out of my life in the very moment. That the regret and pain I feel of not being with him outweighs that of not being with my family and friends.  It was in that instant, that I finally felt that I did truly love him.

What I took from the last words of the movie, Jack, I swear, was this, "Jack, I swear (that I will do right by you)" I spent the past three days thinking about the movie and feeling sad because of it. It took me until now to figure out why I couldn't get it out of my head. After all, Ennis is not the image of my ideal guy since I would like someone who spoke more than a few words each day.

However, whenever I imagine him, grieving over the loss of somebody so precious to him, my heart reaches out to him as if it recognizes the pain he was feeling. And then it struck me, it was the same feeling I had when my first love broke up with me when I was still very much in love with him.

He didn't tell me why he broke up with me and it took me a year before I matured and thought about my actions and apologized to him for what I thought I did wrong in the relationship. I then told him that because I could not undo the past and undo the hurt I have caused him, I could never fully forgive myself.

However, I also told him that I'm not going to live the rest of my life feeling guilty and that I will redeem myself by striving to not make the same mistakes I made with him, that I will do right by him. That's why I can identify with Ennis at the end of the movie. I know what it is like to lose somebody you love because of your stupid mistakes and although my ex is still alive and well, things can never be the same between us.

However, my heart goes out to Ennis because he could never apologize to Jack in real life any longer, that he will spend the rest of his life paying for his mistake, regretting that he didn't take up Jack's offer, and blaming himself for losing the first and perhaps last love of his life. I only went out with my good friend for four months after we have been friends for a year; I couldn't imagine the loss Ennis must have felt after loving Jack for twenty and not being able to say goodbye.

In a way, although the movie ended tragically, I can take to heart that at least Ennis came to the same conclusion that I did, that he will spend the rest of his life doing right by the person he loves and will always love. Because of that promise to himself, I believe Ennis will find some sort of solace from the ghosts of his past and that even though the movie ended on a tragic note, Ennis came out of it a better man.  I am sure that when love crosses his path again, he wouldn't make the same mistakes he did with Jack; he would cherish it. 

I hope that I did offend anybody from bringing my personal experiences into this thread.  I guess it's my way of coping with the movie, lol.  Take care and I look forward to reading some replies!

Ryan
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: ranchgal on Dec 30, 2005, 06:58 PM
Thank you for sharing-and reviewing---that is what this site is for, and listening is what webfriends do. :)
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Krispera on Dec 30, 2005, 07:00 PM
Nice thought  :o ! I never been so far in my reflexion! You make me think alot more about the love and futur years I have in front of me.. Wow you make me think alot! I know now, that I should not do the same thing as Ennis  :'( but show your love..
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Angelove on Dec 30, 2005, 07:32 PM
Thanks for the words of encouragement Ranchgal and Krispera.  ^^

I liked the ending because it hits home what is really important in your life, or rather who.  And yes, part of the message is about love.  However, I also believe that Ennis's last words are also about getting your priorities straight.  Instead of putting his work before his daughter, Ennis has learned from Jack to not take time for granted and to do what matters to him and get his priorities straight before it is too late.  He will not allow his daughter or any more of his love ones to slip away from his life like Jack did and I'm glad that he has a reminder of that in his closet. 

That's why it seems like a perfect fit, even though the quote is really open ended for any interpretation, that he swears that he'll do right by Jack.  He wouldn't want his death to be in vain.   
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: *Froggy* on Dec 30, 2005, 08:23 PM
When the movie ended, I stood up, went home and called my boyfriend, who's studying many miles away abroad at this time, to tell him that even though my family and friends are in Vancouver, if I had to make a choice, I choose him.

Wow, what a great proof of love...thank you sooo much for your thoughts and review...like Ranchgal and Krispera said you did a great job and i hope this board brings more threads like yours ;)
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: jackchristopher27 on Jan 18, 2006, 05:35 PM
This is an amazingly romantic story. I can completely agree with your take of the movie's ending.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: bhebbe on Jan 19, 2006, 06:21 PM
I found myself asking the same question. I didn't understand why the story made me feel the way it did, UNTIL I answered it. Until I answered it for myself, filling in the blanks.

"Jack I swear _____ _______ ________"

For me, Ennis said, "Jack I swear, I didn't mean what I said. I swear we would've worked somethin' out."

This was the only way I could deal with the feeling the story leaves with me.  Well almost...
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: bhebbe on Jan 20, 2006, 09:19 AM
For me, I had to brake the story into two stories.  That is, the good story of -- they were working it out.  They were on the right track -- twenty years behind them. 

Ennis was talking more, making more eye contact, speaking to Jack in a more affectionate manner.  Hec, Ennis was even asking -- how do you handle ...? or are you experiencing (such and such)?   They were even having cathartic discussions as most couples do when they are at the end of their ropes and need something to change.  Their relationship was going in a very positive direction. 

Ennis had a point, it wasn't working for him either.  I'm surprised he could get away as much as he did.  My employer today would never allow that.  Ennis' daughters were soon to be married.  I have a feeling in a few years, Ennis would have moved on.  He was just gearing up for it.

For me this was the happy part of the story, coming from that part of the country and growing up with men very confused, troubled, and over compensating.  To see a man change out of this character into his own really hits me hard in a good way.

I didn't want the sad story -- the unexpected death of a loved one -- to take away from the happy story.

In the sad story, Ennis says, "Jack I swear _____ _______ ________"

For me, Ennis said, "Jack I swear, I didn't mean what I said. I swear we would've worked somethin' out."

Once I had this in my mind, I have found it helps to put down the story (or leave the movie) before the sad part begins.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Angelove on Jan 20, 2006, 04:24 PM
Howdy bhebbe,

Hmmm, I didn't think of the story as having the two parts you described until you described it.  I didn't notice Ennis asking more questions in the movie or speaking more affectionately to Jack than he always have done.  I did noticed that he withdrew more and more into himself towards the end of the movie to the point it looks like it pains him to speak. 

But, I would agree with you that the relationship was going in a positive direction since Ennis decided to dump his second girlfriend after the last meeting with Jack.  I don't know whether he would ever dump Jack in years to come as all indications showed that not only he has spent the last twenty years seeing Jack, but he also looked quite excited to see Jack's final postcard. 

We are never given the reasons why Ennis decided to go cold turkey on his second girlfriend and like most of the movie, it is up to our interpretation.  My interpretation is that he didn't wish to live a lie anymore and hurt the people around him.  One would have thought that he would have learnt his lesson after Alma, but he went on dating a girl again.  We are also not told why he would do that, but perhaps he still has not learnt his lesson the first time.   However, there was something about his last meeting with Jack that made him change his mind regarding his relationship with the new girl in his life.  He didn't want to date her anymore. 

And we might never know why, whether it's because

- he wants to live more honestly.

- he realized that he does not need to lead life the way he's been told how and he began thinking outside the box.

- he wishes to spend the rest of his days with Jack and realizes that in order to do this, he needs to dump her.

- he realized that he cannot spend the rest of his life living the way he is now and needs to make some changes to improve his life and how he feels about himself.

- he can't bring himself to hurt people anymore after Jack expressed the pain and suffering caused by enduring the past twenty years, that he does not want another the same way he has hurt Jack, the one he truly loves. 

I'm leaning towards this last interpretation because I emphatize the pain other people experience, whether I like it or not. However, one thing is for change, after the last meeting with Jack, Ennis did change and this is reflected in his choice to quit the second girl like a bad habit.  How he changed is up to our interpretation. 

That brings me to ask, why do you think Ennis broke up with his second girlfriend?  Or more precisely, what do you think it was about his last meeting with Jack that made him change his mind to dump the girl?

Tell me what you think.   ;D

Ryan
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: greenfrog on Jan 20, 2006, 05:15 PM
I posted this awhile ago on IMDB (this version is updated a little) ...

Considering that this line comes from Ennis (Ennis being ... well Ennis) , I can't help but get the feeling that when he says "Jack' I swear" that he says it without really knowing how to finish it. In other words he is swearing to him, but he doesn't know why. After all he is just start to come out of denial in regards to his feeling for Jack and you know that feeling when you want to comfort someone, to tell them that everything is going to be alright but you can't find the words that you want to say to them? I think that's how he feels in that scene. He wants to swear something to Jack but can't find the word to say it.

Anybody?
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: dirtbiker on Jan 20, 2006, 05:44 PM
Exactly, he probably doesn't really know what he  meant to say. Maybe, just maybe, he was trying to say, "Jack I swear I don't know what I can say to change things, but I'm so sorry for pushing you out of my life and there is nothing now I can do to change that."
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: bhebbe on Jan 20, 2006, 06:46 PM
Hey.  Thanks for the feedback.

re: Us not knowing what he was going to say or not say -- You are exactly right!  We don't, and I only completed the sentence as if I were Ennis and given some of the clues in the previous scenes.

and

re: "That brings me to ask, why do you think Ennis broke up with his second girlfriend? 

I think Ennis gave us some clues.  He was asking Jack for ideas, sympathy, and his understanding in his last meeting with him.  He shared the reasons why real well, why August wasn't going to work.  He said some really great things about how the trip in November could be.  He said something real sweet to trigger Jack's memory before he drove off.  And lastly, he wrote the post card confirming the November meeting.  For me, and I'm not trying to convince anyone of anything, I believe Ennis was starting step up and become a more responsible partner.

I think Ennis knew big things had to change when he said he couldn't stand it any longer.  He only went off on the Mexico tangent because his old tapes played.  He was really just letting something out, making it get worse before it could get better.

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: coguaro on Jan 20, 2006, 07:37 PM
Hi to all.. just coming back from cinema to see BBM. This is the first day of film projection in Italy. Two cinema was full load!!! I had to change sale because of to much people.
I swear I think means.... "I swear that I never will mistake again!"

I love very much Ennis he is so fragile and he love so much Jack!

Coguaro
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: jimnick on Jan 20, 2006, 08:26 PM
Hi to all.. just coming back from cinema to see BBM. This is the first day of film projection in Italy. Two cinema was full load!!! I had to change sale because of to much people.
I swear I think means.... "I swear that I never will mistake again!"

I love very much Ennis he is so fragile and he love so much Jack!

Coguaro

Yes, Coguaro, yes!

Jim
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: francis.shim on Jan 22, 2006, 03:39 AM
Hi pardners!!!

You know when Ennis said those last words it was just so rightly placed: "Jack, I swear..."

He just finished talking with his daughter about making sure that the guy she wanted to marry was really and truly in love with her.  In a way, it was the closest to him ever coming out to his daughter (I might be wrong... he might have, but the movie didn't seem to indicate that).

Perhaps, Ennis after talking about the very topic of marriage may very well decided that he too wanted to marry the one person he knew he could also love: Jack.  Perhaps, Ennis in his very terse way of speaking said "Jack, I do.".  Perhaps, Ennis in his noble way wanted to answer the question he asked his daughter - with some adjustments - "Do I love Jack, does Jack love me?"... I think all our fill in the blanks are valid, because Ennis is truly very economical with his words and he probably means a WHOLE MOUNTAIN of things...

... but in the end, it was clear that he has come to some peace knowing that he does love Jack and that Jack really did love him.

Peace,
Frank
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: bhebbe on Jan 22, 2006, 10:13 AM
Frank!  Excellent!  Beautifully said:  "...he came to someplace where he knew..." and also the "....MOUNTIAN of things...".

You are leading me to think this is more of a beautiful story and less of a sad story.

What if, Ennis never came to that place?  What if that mountian of homophobia was never moved? Now, that would have been sad.

For me, when someone can change their view of their world that much, it is a very BIG and beautiful thing.

Thanks for your thoughts!
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: *Froggy* on Jan 22, 2006, 10:18 AM
You know when Ennis said those last words it was just so rightly placed: "Jack, I swear..."

He just finished talking with his daughter about making sure that the guy she wanted to marry was really and truly in love with her.  In a way, it was the closest to him ever coming out to his daughter (I might be wrong... he might have, but the movie didn't seem to indicate that).

Perhaps, Ennis after talking about the very topic of marriage may very well decided that he too wanted to marry the one person he knew he could also love: Jack.  Perhaps, Ennis in his very terse way of speaking said "Jack, I do.".  Perhaps, Ennis in his noble way wanted to answer the question he asked his daughter - with some adjustments - "Do I love Jack, does Jack love me?"... I think all our fill in the blanks are valid, because Ennis is truly very economical with his words and he probably means a WHOLE MOUNTAIN of things...

... but in the end, it was clear that he has come to some peace knowing that he does love Jack and that Jack really did love him.

Thankx Frank...it gives us hope for our Ennis..


You are leading me to think this is more of a beautiful story and less of a sad story.

It is (I believe) one of the most beautiful love story ever told.... :D
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: kcristob on Feb 01, 2006, 07:49 PM
I posted this awhile ago on IMDB (this version is updated a little) ...

Considering that this line comes from Ennis (Ennis being ... well Ennis) , I can't help but get the feeling that when he says "Jack' I swear" that he says it without really knowing how to finish it. In other words he is swearing to him, but he doesn't know why. After all he is just start to come out of denial in regards to his feeling for Jack and you know that feeling when you want to comfort someone, to tell them that everything is going to be alright but you can't find the words that you want to say to them? I think that's how he feels in that scene. He wants to swear something to Jack but can't find the word to say it.

Anybody?

YES!  yes yes.  He doesn't even know how to put his feelings into thoughts let alone words.   
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: ethan on Feb 01, 2006, 07:53 PM
(https://ennisjack.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fstatic.flickr.com%2F42%2F89354783_7fd88656a9.jpg&hash=d70b323f729f7d3b19f6a70799de748e154ec8ce)
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Toadily on Feb 01, 2006, 07:55 PM
Oh gosh, I didn't expect to see that, thanks Ethan!  Sob... :'(
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: ethan on Feb 01, 2006, 07:59 PM
Oh gosh, I didn't expect to see that, thanks Ethan!  Sob... :'(

Sob too. Seeing Ennis like this just breaks my heart every single time. "Jack, I swear...." Wish he had had a chance to say it to Jack in person.  :'( :'(
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Toadily on Feb 01, 2006, 08:02 PM
I sometimes think it took Jack's death to sort of jolt him out of his denial.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: ethan on Feb 01, 2006, 08:04 PM
I sometimes think it took Jack's death to sort of jolt him out of his denial.

Ain't it true? Always too late and too much. Ennis, I swear if I could shake you and wake you up, I would.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: francis.shim on Feb 01, 2006, 11:13 PM
Howdy...

I thought I would share with you what someone else said about Ennis' last line:

    "Jack, I swear..."

He said that in the Spanish speaking version, it was translated roughly to

   "Oh, Jack..." (literally in English)

So in a way, it is really is to show just how much stuff Ennis wanted to tell Jack... it simplies carries all that weight.

Peace,
Frank
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: *Froggy* on Feb 02, 2006, 07:46 PM
(https://ennisjack.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fstatic.flickr.com%2F42%2F89354783_7fd88656a9.jpg&hash=d70b323f729f7d3b19f6a70799de748e154ec8ce)

oh my....crying crying crying...cries!! :'(
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: coguaro on Feb 04, 2006, 04:35 AM
Frog... this picture is a blade in my heart...

 :'(

coguaro
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: JerBear418720 on Feb 04, 2006, 05:08 PM
Looking at the picture, you realize that there is much about the character of Ennis that resonates in a deeply personal way with Heath.  That scene, in particular, goes way beyond acting.  As Larry McMurtry has said, "that young man IS Ennis".  Even Annie has commented that Heath knew and understood Ennis better than she did - and she created the character! 
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: chameau on Feb 04, 2006, 05:12 PM
(https://ennisjack.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fstatic.flickr.com%2F42%2F89354783_7fd88656a9.jpg&hash=d70b323f729f7d3b19f6a70799de748e154ec8ce)

oh my....crying crying crying...cries!! :'(

Cannot stand seeing Ennis in tears, o.k. now need tissues. Baw!  :'( :'(
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: greenfrog on Feb 04, 2006, 05:59 PM
*Cries little heart out*  :'( :'( :'(
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: chameau on Feb 04, 2006, 06:03 PM
Shared!  :'( :'( :'(
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: pennyT on Feb 05, 2006, 06:43 AM
Saw the movie for the second time tonight and 'Jack I swear. . . . .' really stuck in my mind !  I hadn't seen the topic on here till now !

For me it was 'Jack I swear. . . . .I would have done it differently' if I could . . . . . Ennis is changing towards the end of the movie he had even made a commitment to his daughter over work. . . .The same think that stopped him from seeing Jack again.

I still cant help thinking about the emptiness that must Ennis have had in his life after Jack was gone there on his own it was almost like he was punishing himself for his mistakes.  Does anyone else feel thatthe letterbox featured in the end scene a lot ?  Was this to show that Ennis now had somewhere that he could be contacted at rather than the post office as before ?  or was this just because he had moved again ?  I  was still waiting for Jacks ashes to arrive in the post and for the movie to close with Ennis on the mountain for the last time putting Jack to rest. . . . .I HATE THE END. . . .it's just so numbing !!

Jack I swear . . . . . and that music starts again.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: francis.shim on Feb 05, 2006, 09:48 AM
Saw the movie for the second time tonight and 'I swear Jack. . . . .' really stuck in my mind !  I hadn't seen the topic on here till now !

For me it was 'I swear Jack. . . . .I would have done it differently' if I could . . . . . Ennis is changing towards the end of the movie he had even made a commitment to his daughter over work. . . .The same think that stopped him from seeing Jack again.

i still cant help thinking about the emptiness that must Ennis have had in his life after Jack was gone there on his own it was almost like he was punishing himself for his mistakes.  Does anyone else feel thatthe letterbox featured in the end scene a lot ?  Was this to show that Ennis now had somewhere that he could be contacted at rather than the post office as before ?  or was this just because he had moved again ?  I  was still waiting for Jacks ashes to arrive in the post and for the movie to close with Ennis on the mountain for the last time putting Jack to rest. . . . .I HATE THE END. . . .it's just so numbing !!

I SWEAR JACK. . . . . and that music starts again.

It be a lotta things, Miss Penny!!!  Lotta things undone!!!

But you gotta admit, Ennis' got the shirts and he dang now appreciate what Jack a did for him and all... he's got hope.

Peace,
Frank (Jack Nasty)
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: chameau on Feb 05, 2006, 10:46 PM
Saw the movie for the second time tonight and 'I swear Jack. . . . .' really stuck in my mind !  I hadn't seen the topic on here till now !

For me it was 'I swear Jack. . . . .I would have done it differently' if I could . . . . . Ennis is changing towards the end of the movie he had even made a commitment to his daughter over work. . . .The same think that stopped him from seeing Jack again.

i still cant help thinking about the emptiness that must Ennis have had in his life after Jack was gone there on his own it was almost like he was punishing himself for his mistakes.  Does anyone else feel thatthe letterbox featured in the end scene a lot ?  Was this to show that Ennis now had somewhere that he could be contacted at rather than the post office as before ?  or was this just because he had moved again ?  I  was still waiting for Jacks ashes to arrive in the post and for the movie to close with Ennis on the mountain for the last time putting Jack to rest. . . . .I HATE THE END. . . .it's just so numbing !!

I SWEAR JACK. . . . . and that music starts again.

It be a lotta things, Miss Penny!!!  Lotta things undone!!!

But you gotta admit, Ennis' got the shirts and he dang now appreciate what Jack a did for him and all... he's got hope.

Peace,
Frank (Jack Nasty)


Ditto!
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: rane99 on Feb 06, 2006, 07:32 PM
After seeing the movie, and in light of the previous scene with his daughter and asking her if Troy loves her, then he finds her sweater, he kisses it, opens the closet and see the shirts... his thought process is on love... and now he sees the shirts and says "Jack I swear..."  and is thinking "Jack I swear I love you."
not LOVED. Love.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: chameau on Feb 06, 2006, 07:39 PM
After seeing the movie, and in light of the previous scene with his daughter and asking her if Troy loves her, then he finds her sweater, he kisses it, opens the closet and see the shirts... his thought process is on love... and now he sees the shirts and says "Jack I swear..."  and is thinking "Jack I swear I love you."
not LOVED. Love.

You got me  :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'(

send tissues please
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: CherryCake on Feb 06, 2006, 08:12 PM
After seeing the movie, and in light of the previous scene with his daughter and asking her if Troy loves her, then he finds her sweater, he kisses it, opens the closet and see the shirts... his thought process is on love... and now he sees the shirts and says "Jack I swear..."  and is thinking "Jack I swear I love you."
not LOVED. Love.

please pass the tissues...
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: francis.shim on Feb 07, 2006, 01:14 AM
After seeing the movie, and in light of the previous scene with his daughter and asking her if Troy loves her, then he finds her sweater, he kisses it, opens the closet and see the shirts... his thought process is on love... and now he sees the shirts and says "Jack I swear..."  and is thinking "Jack I swear I love you."
not LOVED. Love.

please pass the tissues...

Jack Nasty tissues... coming right up!!!... but I gotta use them first...

Peace,
Frank (aka Jack Nasty)
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: garymcd on Feb 07, 2006, 01:32 AM
for what it's worth,  ms proulix writes   "jack, i swear-"  he said, though jack had never asked him to swear anything and was himself not the swearing kind.

not "jack, i swear..."
subtle but there is no continuation,  ie ...
the entire book has these subtle nuances.  your thoughts?
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: CherryCake on Feb 07, 2006, 01:35 AM
for what it's worth,  ms proulix writes   "jack, i swear-"  he said, though jack had never asked him to swear anything and was himself not the swearing kind.

not "jack, i swear..."
subtle but there is no continuation,  ie ...
the entire book has these subtle nuances.  your thoughts?

That true... makes it more  poignant that Ennis could not complete the sentence...or needed to.
Title: Jack, I swear...
Post by: jozsan on Feb 07, 2006, 01:22 PM
what is that? what does ennis mean by that?
Title: Re: Jack, I swear...
Post by: *Froggy* on Feb 07, 2006, 01:33 PM
You might want to read this thread:

Ennis: Jack I swear thread (http://www.ennisjack.com/index.php?topic=1056.0)
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Cowboy Cody on Feb 07, 2006, 05:14 PM
Ennis doesn't need to complete it, the tears and statement are enough for us to know.  :'( :'( :'( :'(
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: chameau on Feb 07, 2006, 07:12 PM
Ennis doesn't need to complete it, the tears and statement are enough for us to know.  :'( :'( :'( :'(

Ditto!  :'(
Title: "Jack, I swear....
Post by: Rod on Feb 08, 2006, 01:18 AM
Wonder what the rest of that sentence would be:
"Jack, I swear" I will always love you.
My friend Rod thought it would be..."Jack, I swear I did everything I could for you, I just couldn't do what you needed.

What do others think?


<topic merged>
Title: Re: "Jack, I swear....
Post by: ethan on Feb 08, 2006, 01:23 AM
Hi Rod...welcome to the forum.

HERE (http://www.ennisjack.com/index.php?topic=242.0) is a topic for it. Enjoy!
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: garymcd on Feb 08, 2006, 01:41 AM
Ennis doesn't need to complete it, the tears and statement are enough for us to know.  :'( :'( :'( :'(

hey cowboy,  i agree. it is a statement.  "jack, i swear- "   
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: coguaro on Feb 08, 2006, 04:44 PM
..I cant see this picture so many times...   :'( :'( :'(

coguaro
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: brian2006 on Feb 09, 2006, 03:35 AM
Jack, I swear...  I love you much more than i can said and i even can do anything to make u still by my side...
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: lowpro on Feb 13, 2006, 12:22 PM
Ennis is such a survivor!  Forever! I don't know whether I could do it.

Jack, I swear...  that's the best I could do
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Leo on Feb 13, 2006, 01:19 PM
As many here have pointed out the Jack I Swear line is very open-ended. It can very easily mean different things to different people and yet still mean all of those things at once. . . . yet I have always had a question about the short story and am wondering what you folks think.

In Annie's book she says:
He stepped back and looked at the ensemble through a few stinging tears.
"Jack, I swear -- " he said, though Jack had never asked him to swear anything and was himself not the swearing kind.

It's that line that I have put here in red that has me wondering, and I have never come up with an answer for myself as to what exactally it means.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: ethan on Feb 13, 2006, 03:12 PM
Leo,

Below are some topics with the same discussion which could help answer your question.

http://www.ennisjack.com/index.php?topic=1056.0
http://www.ennisjack.com/index.php?topic=725.0
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Titus on Feb 14, 2006, 06:22 PM
I was just rewatching Ravenus' "Immortal" video.  The look on Ennis' face when he discovers the shirts, his inside of Jack's with the sleeves pulled inside one another (how symbolic is that?).  That just screams "I love you" and "I care for you, I'll hold you forever"  all that from 1963.  Love expressed by hanging on a coat hanger.  Ennis realises at that moment that Jack has really, absolutely loved him all those years, even though they never said it.  This "thing" they had was real love.

So when Ennis hangs up the postcard and reverses the order of the shirts, he is saying "I love you" to Jack.  That's what "I swear" says to me.  Anybody got any Kleenex?  I'm drowning over here! :'(  :'( Titus.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: aimi15 on Feb 14, 2006, 06:24 PM
I was just rewatching Ravenus' "Immortal" video.  The look on Ennis' face when he discovers the shirts, his inside of Jack's with the sleeves pulled inside one another (how symbolic is that?).  That just screams "I love you" and "I care for you, I'll hold you forever"  all that from 1963.  Love expressed by hanging on a coat hanger.  Ennis realises at that moment that Jack has really, absolutely loved him all those years, even though they never said it.  This "thing" they had was real love.

So when Ennis hangs up the postcard and reverses the order of the shirts, he is saying "I love you" to Jack.  That's what "I swear" says to me.  Anybody got any Kleenex?  I'm drowning over here! :'(  :'( Titus. :'(
:'( :'( :'( :'( :'(
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: camom on Feb 14, 2006, 07:01 PM
As many here have pointed out the Jack I Swear line is very open-ended. It can very easily mean different things to different people and yet still mean all of those things at once. . . . yet I have always had a question about the short story and am wondering what you folks think.

In Annie's book she says:
He stepped back and looked at the ensemble through a few stinging tears.
"Jack, I swear -- " he said, though Jack had never asked him to swear anything and was himself not the swearing kind.

It's that line that I have put here in red that has me wondering, and I have never come up with an answer for myself as to what exactally it means.


I think it means exactly what you said--different things, and all of them together.  Jack, I love you...Jack, if I could do it over again, it would be different...Jack, I'm sorry...Jack, I'll never forget you...

The added part in the story ("...though Jack had never asked him to swear anything...") indicates to me that part of "Jack, I swear--" was an actual oath on Ennis' part, though what exactly we don't know.  All the things I've said above, plus "Jack, I'll be faithful forever"?  I don't know; my personal opinion is that Ennis won't go looking for another intimate relationship, although he might be able to find some happiness in the relationship he has with his daughters.

camom
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: onebroken on Feb 15, 2006, 12:21 PM
My take on it has been the same each and every time I've seen the movie.
"Jack, I swear...I love you and there will never be another."

 :'( :'( :'( :'( :'(  May I have some tissues too?  That pic Ethan posted... :'( :'( :'( :'(

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: madisondel on Feb 15, 2006, 01:29 PM
Saw the movie for the second time tonight and 'Jack I swear. . . . .' really stuck in my mind !  I hadn't seen the topic on here till now !

For me it was 'Jack I swear. . . . .I would have done it differently' if I could . . . . . Ennis is changing towards the end of the movie he had even made a commitment to his daughter over work. . . .The same think that stopped him from seeing Jack again.

I still cant help thinking about the emptiness that must Ennis have had in his life after Jack was gone there on his own it was almost like he was punishing himself for his mistakes.  Does anyone else feel thatthe letterbox featured in the end scene a lot ?  Was this to show that Ennis now had somewhere that he could be contacted at rather than the post office as before ?  or was this just because he had moved again ?  I  was still waiting for Jacks ashes to arrive in the post and for the movie to close with Ennis on the mountain for the last time putting Jack to rest. . . . .I HATE THE END. . . .it's just so numbing !!

Jack I swear . . . . . and that music starts again.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: madisondel on Feb 15, 2006, 01:32 PM
Saw the movie for the second time tonight and 'Jack I swear. . . . .' really stuck in my mind !  I hadn't seen the topic on here till now !

For me it was 'Jack I swear. . . . .I would have done it differently' if I could . . . . . Ennis is changing towards the end of the movie he had even made a commitment to his daughter over work. . . .The same think that stopped him from seeing Jack again.

I still cant help thinking about the emptiness that must Ennis have had in his life after Jack was gone there on his own it was almost like he was punishing himself for his mistakes.  Does anyone else feel thatthe letterbox featured in the end scene a lot ?  Was this to show that Ennis now had somewhere that he could be contacted at rather than the post office as before ?  or was this just because he had moved again ?  I  was still waiting for Jacks ashes to arrive in the post and for the movie to close with Ennis on the mountain for the last time putting Jack to rest. . . . .I HATE THE END. . . .it's just so numbing !!

Jack I swear . . . . . and that music starts again.

I know! It's like everytime I've seen it I keep thinking it will end differently! I want it to so badly! I have often thought of the meaning behind the mailbox! There is something there! Nothing in this movie is just for show! It's all so much deeper!!
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: ethan on Feb 15, 2006, 02:39 PM
After viewing the movie many times and reading these posts,

I tend to leave "Jack I swear..." just like that.

It is meant to be personal - only Ennis knows and should know what he means for Jack.

Here are the tissues for everyone.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: francis.shim on Feb 15, 2006, 04:22 PM
Howdy.

Thanks for the tissues, ethan...

I was thinking that maybe another way of looking at the "Jack, I swear-" line is to imagine Ennis doing exactly what he did during that scene, but here is the twist (no pun intended): what if he did not say it at all?  What does the line add that was not there?

Ennis is a man who does not waste words... so we know that when he said those words he was declaring something MASSIVE.  We know it was deeply personal and we know that it has to do with Jack.  We know that he reversed the shirts (his is now over Jack's).  We know that he has a postcard of Brokeback Mountain.  We know that the shirts were *nailed* to a *CLOSET* door.  Yet here we have a man who does not say much to anybody and he says "Jack, I swear-" to the shirts and the postcard.  Why say it just after the announcement of his daughter's wedding?

Ennis could never commit fully to Jack before and somehow he had to say the words.

I can only imagine the outpouring of love as Ennis said it, because Jack was his true love.  I can only imagine how agonizing it was for Ennis as he misses his Jack so much that he can hardly stand it.

I think it was a powerful declaration of his love for Jack and he did not have to say any more, because Jack already knew.

Peace,
Frank (aka Jack Nasty)
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: aimi15 on Feb 15, 2006, 04:25 PM
No words just  :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'(
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: jimmypage on Feb 16, 2006, 10:57 AM
How I like this unfinished phrase,
much more than any other  more explicit one, like  "jack, I love you"...
It's so powerfull, it hits me  straight in the heart... the mortal blow.
 :-*
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: BBBOY on Feb 16, 2006, 09:39 PM
Howdy.

Ennis is a man who does not waste words... so we know that when he said those words he was declaring something MASSIVE.  We know it was deeply personal and we know that it has to do with Jack.  We know that he reversed the shirts (his is now over Jack's).  We know that he has a postcard of Brokeback Mountain.  We know that the shirts were *nailed* to a *CLOSET* door.  Yet here we have a man who does not say much to anybody and he says "Jack, I swear-" to the shirts and the postcard.  Why say it just after the announcement of his daughter's wedding?

Ennis could never commit fully to Jack before and somehow he had to say the words.

I can only imagine the outpouring of love as Ennis said it, because Jack was his true love.  I can only imagine how agonizing it was for Ennis as he misses his Jack so much that he can hardly stand it.

I think it was a powerful declaration of his love for Jack and he did not have to say any more, because Jack already knew.


I think you are so right about this.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: romeshvr on Feb 17, 2006, 05:36 AM
you are so right... bbboy and francis.shim...

reading your note francis made me cry... it also made me remember this line from the last argument ennis and jack had...

Tell you what, we could a had a good life together, a fu**in real good life. You wouldn’t do it, Ennis, so what we got now is Brokeback Mountain. Everthing built on that. It’s all we got, boy, fu**in all, so I hope you know that if you don’t never know the rest.

ennis never knew the rest...so all he got is brokeback mountain.... :'(
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Titus on Feb 17, 2006, 09:07 AM
Quote
ennis never knew the rest

Oh, I think he had a very good idea.  Remember him sitting there as old man Twist practically machine-gunned him with the revelation that Jack was planning on bringing Randall Malone up to Lightning Flats to build a cabin.  Here Ennis is confronted by the knowledge that Jack had seriously entertained the idea (in response possibly to "Why can't you just leave me be!") of sharing the rest of his life with another man.  OUCH!

In Jack's bedroom Ennis realises how very much he meant to Jack, how sacred was the love he felt for Ennis.  Ennis finally understood that he was the obstacle to the happiness that could (and should) have been theirs.  It's that self-knowledge that enables him to say "Jack, I swear..."  A very painful lesson and one that was learnt too late.  All those years after Jack came up to Wyoming when Ennis told him about the divorce.  All those years living with the disappointment that Ennis didn't love him enough to find the courage to be together always.  That's the lesson for us. 

When I met my Peter I wasn't really sure what to do about it as I was in the middle of being selected or rejected for the ministry.  My Mama, who has never been one for good advice, said to me "Baby, the brass ring only comes around once and you'd better grab it with both hands!"  I did and I rejoice in that everyday of my life. So dig deep and find that courage and live life in all its fullness.  I bid you peace, Titus.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: BBBOY on Feb 17, 2006, 06:31 PM
Quote
ennis never knew the rest

Oh, I think he had a very good idea.  Remember him sitting there as old man Twist practically machine-gunned him with the revelation that Jack was planning on bringing Randall Malone up to Lightning Flats to build a cabin.  Here Ennis is confronted by the knowledge that Jack had seriously entertained the idea (in response possibly to "Why can't you just leave me be!") of sharing the rest of his life with another man.  OUCH!

In Jack's bedroom Ennis realises how very much he meant to Jack, how sacred was the love he felt for Ennis.  Ennis finally understood that he was the obstacle to the happiness that could (and should) have been theirs.  It's that self-knowledge that enables him to say "Jack, I swear..."  A very painful lesson and one that was learnt too late.  All those years after Jack came up to Wyoming when Ennis told him about the divorce.  All those years living with the disappointment that Ennis didn't love him enough to find the courage to be together always.  That's the lesson for us. 

When I met my Peter I wasn't really sure what to do about it as I was in the middle of being selected or rejected for the ministry.  My Mama, who has never been one for good advice, said to me "Baby, the brass ring only comes around once and you'd better grab it with both hands!"  I did and I rejoice in that everyday of my life. So dig deep and find that courage and live life in all its fullness.  I bid you peace, Titus.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: BBBOY on Feb 17, 2006, 06:35 PM
Quote
ennis never knew the rest

Oh, I think he had a very good idea.  Remember him sitting there as old man Twist practically machine-gunned him with the revelation that Jack was planning on bringing Randall Malone up to Lightning Flats to build a cabin.  Here Ennis is confronted by the knowledge that Jack had seriously entertained the idea (in response possibly to "Why can't you just leave me be!") of sharing the rest of his life with another man.  OUCH!

In Jack's bedroom Ennis realises how very much he meant to Jack, how sacred was the love he felt for Ennis.  Ennis finally understood that he was the obstacle to the happiness that could (and should) have been theirs.  It's that self-knowledge that enables him to say "Jack, I swear..."  A very painful lesson and one that was learnt too late.  All those years after Jack came up to Wyoming when Ennis told him about the divorce.  All those years living with the disappointment that Ennis didn't love him enough to find the courage to be together always.  That's the lesson for us. 
When I met my Peter I wasn't really sure what to do about it as I was in the middle of being selected or rejected for the ministry.  My Mama, who has never been one for good advice, said to me "Baby, the brass ring only comes around once and you'd better grab it with both hands!"  I did and I rejoice in that everyday of my life. So dig deep and find that courage and live life in all its fullness.  I bid you peace, Titus.


I couldn't agree with you more. I think Ennis was saying so many things in those three word, he was declaring his love, his regret and his pain. That's a lot to put into 3 little words.
Title: What is the meaning of the end: "If you're gone, I swear..."????
Post by: johnvn on Feb 26, 2006, 11:44 AM
First, Give a gratitude to Ang Lee because he created a very romantic story that i've never seen before. Thank you.

I've seen this film several times (i dont remember how many times), remember each scene, each place and each voice of two cowboys.
Really sad when the film gone to the end.

But i dont know what Ennis means when he said at the last scene. He said : "If you're gone, i swear..."
What he means?
I think he will not bring the clothes back to Brokeback Mountain and he will lead his life alone until the death, is it right?
Or he will be back to the Brokeback Mountain where the story is started and end up it, and get married with some one (Jack will understand for Ennis in this case)
But i think the first ending is better than the other right?
Let me see your opions
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: ethan on Feb 26, 2006, 01:35 PM
johnvn, welcome and thanks for the post.

Do you mean "Jack, I swear" ?

There has been a discussion about Ennis's last line and I am going to merge your topic with that topic. Hope it helps you answer your question.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: rebecca on Feb 27, 2006, 01:32 PM
it"s a promise. Ennis loves jack forever.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Feb 27, 2006, 03:49 PM

Einsam steigt er dahin, in die Berge des Ur-Leids.
Und nicht einmal sein Schritt klingt aus dem tonlosen Los.

Aber erweckten sie uns, die unendlich Toten, ein Gleichnis,
siehe, sie zeigten vielleicht auf die Kätzchen der leeren
Hasel, die hängenden, oder
meinten den Regen, der fällt auf dunkles Erdreich im Frühjahr.

Und wir, die an steigendes  Glück
denken, empfänden die Rührung,
die uns beinah bestürzt,
wenn ein Glückliches fällt.




He climbs alone, on the mountains of primal grief.
And not once do his footsteps sound from his silent fate.

But if the endlessly dead woke a symbol in us,
see, they would point perhaps to the catkins,
hanging from bare hazels, or
they would intend the rain, falling on dark soil in Spring-time.

And we, who think of ascending
joy, would feel the emotion,
that almost dismays us,
when a joyful thing falls.




- Rilke (Die zehnte Elegie)
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: matsuki33 on Mar 02, 2006, 12:30 AM
For me, I had to brake the story into two stories.  That is, the good story of -- they were working it out.  They were on the right track -- twenty years behind them. 

Ennis was talking more, making more eye contact, speaking to Jack in a more affectionate manner.  Hec, Ennis was even asking -- how do you handle ...? or are you experiencing (such and such)?   They were even having cathartic discussions as most couples do when they are at the end of their ropes and need something to change.  Their relationship was going in a very positive direction. 

Ennis had a point, it wasn't working for him either.  I'm surprised he could get away as much as he did.  My employer today would never allow that.  Ennis' daughters were soon to be married.  I have a feeling in a few years, Ennis would have moved on.  He was just gearing up for it.

For me this was the happy part of the story, coming from that part of the country and growing up with men very confused, troubled, and over compensating.  To see a man change out of this character into his own really hits me hard in a good way.

I didn't want the sad story -- the unexpected death of a loved one -- to take away from the happy story.

In the sad story, Ennis says, "Jack I swear _____ _______ ________"

For me, Ennis said, "Jack I swear, I didn't mean what I said. I swear we would've worked somethin' out."

Once I had this in my mind, I have found it helps to put down the story (or leave the movie) before the sad part begins.
I personally think that What Ennis was trying to do is at least be able to have his daughters older to be able to understand him in the short story is said that after the thanksgiving issue he didn't visit them because he was worried about them. and when you see his daugther talking with the bar lady (sorry dear forgot your name :P) you see that his daughter was looking like she knew something bet she knew. well back to the point i think that What jack was trying to swear in the movie was that he was not going to let the time pass again because he was not going to assist to his daugther wedding then he changes and why he did the same to jack and that cost him never seing him again. so he decide to not let the things pass.

Enis to me says "Jack I swear That from now on i won't let the time pass by"
Title: Ennis: "Jack, I Swear..."
Post by: Jay-ee on Mar 04, 2006, 02:28 AM
What do u think, guyz, was Ennis thinking when he said this line?!... or what does he really mean by that line?!... coz i think it's too complicated to comprehend or understand... Sorry..C= Loved it though!... The Best Movie Ever!... Like/Love all the scenes, dialogues/ quotes, emotions and aLL!... Thankz!C=
Title: Re: Ennis: "Jack, I Swear..."
Post by: *Froggy* on Mar 04, 2006, 10:28 AM
Hi you might want to check this thread

http://www.ennisjack.com/index.php?topic=1896.0

(Tip: also check the Index (http://www.ennisjack.com/index.php?topic=1504.0) thread.)
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: matsuki33 on Mar 04, 2006, 11:37 PM
I have read the story and I have seing the movie twice, as matter of fact I went to see for the 2nd time today, and I might need to say that I truly have the belief the Ennis change through all the movie from that person that was kinda cold to that warm person, and i say warm because in a certain way I think that Jack woke up in his heart that part that not much of us have feelings, because we can say that we have feelings when we don't truly have them. because having feelings are not just showing sadness, fear, happiness, etc, in fact it is something more deeply. because you realize what is truly have feelings when you meet that person that make you loose your mind, that person that you don't stop thinking and for which you'll do everything and would like to show him /her that.

To me Ennis liked Alma but he really Loved Jack and all of us agreed that but it was more deep Jack was the person that share that link those feelings that none other was. throught the movie you see Ennis being showing a lot of joy and feelings when he was with Jack more that the ones he showed with Alma, and i say Alma. Ennis was the kind of person that put a protective shell to hide from the world and Jack broke it, he entered in his heart and stayed there forever. Some people said that it was all sex, but i need to tell you something Waiting four years to hear of some sign of live, indeed is not just for sex it was Love. The way that he hug jack in that aggressive way was not in that way he was so full of joy, rage and love. When he kissed him it was saying in corporal language "I love you and I'll forever will". Ennis was himself with jack it was the only person that saw him smiling more than other they shared toguetter his feelings. Jack teached Ennis to be himself, but Ennis was not prepared to be able to be with jack because eventhough that he loved him he was scared of everything. it is like those little puppies that when they are separated from their mother and you bring them to your home they try to hide themselves because they are scare and they don't know what to expect. that is what ennis was he was scared of being killed or discoverded and i think that it was not for him it was more for Jack he was worried of loosing it. you see that in all the movie he start worrying for jack and jack was indeed was in his hear.

Jack broke his shell  and in wrote with blood in his heart his name, he was part of him he was his other half when you see the scene in which they talk about mexico you discover for the first time that Ennis was capable of being Jealous and that in fact he was afraid of loosing jack and not being able to have a part of jack. he was in that scene scared of jack experiences he was scare that jack may not feel the same for him. he was hurted, it is hard to discover that the person you love is not a 100% with you. to him was hard to believe that jack was with other men, he could stand women (which is weird to me) but not men, because that was just between them.

Ennis last word to Jack was It is because of you that i'm like that, not what he really wanted to say but it could be part of his sadness that his last words hurted his last one. he knew that jack loved him but he was scared and hurt. And when he realizes that he was dead his mind start to blame him it was because of him it was his fault. maybe if he hadn't cancel august maybe he still alive, or maybe that when he went to his house he should have accept him inn, but there were a lot of things that may have make him feel. the person he loved for all his live was dead.

whe you read the short story you see that at the end he growed up as a person because he lost his job and was up the point of being in a bad situation but just because Jack Twist was in his dreams he was happy. he truly grew up as a person and in the short story you understand that he was able at the end for showing his feelings with his loved ones.

the same in the movie, to me Alma Jr always knew that he loved jack because whe you see her talking with the bar lady you realized she knew something because she said maybe he's not the marrying kind and she grew up seeing ennis and jack and may have heard her mother saying something and i think that was the one more closest to him. and when she visit him it was in a way really emotive she always managed to talk with his father and share her feelings with him. her face when he said that he was not going was valuable without any word she said dad i'll be sad if you are not there dad please, and ennis realized that he let that happen before that he lost jack because he canceled him his meeting. he realize that when you love someone you never let that person alone you are with that person in the good one and the bad ones.

and when he open the closet and saw his shirt and jack's shirt as one skin, he knew that like in Jack's house he have Ennis under his as a way of saying that Ennis was in his heart he was with Jack under his because it was Jack that was on his heart.

and when he said "Jack I swear" he may have said Jack" I swear that I'm sorry for not leting you be with me but you must never think that i never loved you because I do and will always love you Little darlin"
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: chameau on Mar 05, 2006, 12:06 AM
Quote
and when he said "Jack I swear" he may have said Jack" I swear that I'm sorry for not leting you be with me but you must never think that i never loved you because I do and will always love you Little darlin"

 :'( :'( :'(

You got me matsuki33


Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: *Froggy* on Mar 05, 2006, 07:51 AM
and when he said "Jack I swear" he may have said Jack" I swear that I'm sorry for not leting you be with me but you must never think that i never loved you because I do and will always love you Little darlin"

(https://ennisjack.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi47.imagethrust.com%2Fi%2F295712%2Fsmileypleure.gif&hash=87cb2cdc2a0c6861707bc4fce1aef96c9b5eda2d) got me too!
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: coguaro on Mar 05, 2006, 02:31 PM
yeah thats correct  :-\  :'(

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: n061857 on Mar 07, 2006, 05:25 PM
Quote
ennis never knew the rest

When I met my Peter I wasn't really sure what to do about it as I was in the middle of being selected or rejected for the ministry.  My Mama, who has never been one for good advice, said to me "Baby, the brass ring only comes around once and you'd better grab it with both hands!"  I did and I rejoice in that everyday of my life. So dig deep and find that courage and live life in all its fullness.  I bid you peace, Titus.

What a wonderful story.  You are so blessed to have such a wise and caring mother. :)                     - Nancy
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: francis.shim on Mar 08, 2006, 04:33 PM
Howdy.

I jus' love some of the beautiful perspectives that all of you revealed.  I hope I can add some of mine.

I decided to go back to Annie Proulx's short story and put some more context to Ennis' last line "Jack, I swear-".  In Annie Proulx's short story, it ended with a reflection on Ennis seeing Jack in his dreams and about Ennis' state of mind and heart.  Then it closed with something I though was very stoic and significant about the Ennis' ambiguous "Jack, I swear-".  Here is the paragraph:

    There was some open space between what he knew and what he tried to believe,
    but nothing could be done about it, and if you can't fix it you've got to stand it.

First, remember the movie version closed on a view through a window onto the "vast northern plains" which is like the "open space" between what Ennis knew (in this case, stuff in his "closet" and "trailer", physical symbols of what he knew) and what he tried to believe.  So what was it, that Ennis "tried to believe"?  Could it have been his dreams?  His love for Jack?  That it was the tire iron used to kill his beloved?  That he could get Jack's ashes?  There are no truly obvious answers.  It is ambiguous; however, just like Ennis, we the reader/audience want to believe for the best(?) or the truth(?) and so I felt a very tight empathy for Ennis.  It was agony... that open space was ambiguous, vast and bleak.  I thought that Ennis' helplessness was brutally bared, raw and unhealing to the open.  Is it no wonder that Ennis could not say anything more?  It is already a wonder that Ennis could say anything.  Everything he said must have hurt like rubbing more salt on the open wound.

Next, Ennis also believed that nothing could be done about it.  He could not fix it.  So he had to stand it.  What exactly is itIt must be the problem that he 'b]wants[/b] to fix, but he is helpless.  The problem was his situation, his current stage in life, his loss of Jack, his fear of others knowing about him and Jack, his fear of their fears, his fear that he would be killed if they found out... it just keeps going on.  All that "open space" was not empty, it was filled with the immensity of these fears.  For Ennis, who has lost so much to the fierceness of these fears, is it no wonder that he is still able to stand it?

Jack was in his dreams again.  So I think we can safely say that Ennis still loves Jack and he knows that Jack loved him.  What I thought that Ennis might also be promising is that he was going to continue to stand it, it was the only remaining option that such a bleak reality allowed him.  So Ennis continues and will have Jack in his dreams, because they were truly in love.

Peace,
Frank (aka Jack Nasty)
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: matsuki33 on Mar 08, 2006, 05:40 PM
 :'( :'( :'( :'(
that is so true, you got it deeply
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: chameau on Mar 08, 2006, 06:48 PM
Francis, you got me...  :'( :'( :'(

I just read again the short story yesterday.

 :'(

Thanks for this great posting.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: n061857 on Mar 08, 2006, 08:11 PM
Hey Frank,  Thanks for a wonderful post.  I had wondered about those lines in the story.  I could not have put it more eloquently.      - Nancy
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: madisondel on Mar 11, 2006, 04:36 PM
okay...I am not tyring to oversimplify such an important statement in the movie, but I am a Southern girl and sometimes I say "I swear" when I can't think of anything else to say! When I'm mad or sad or both,when my emotions are running way too deep for words and I could never, ever get them all out anyways, I will just say "I swear"!! and that in itself usually gets my point across to whoever is listening or not listening! I have been listening to southerners say that all my life.
Annie Proulx is such a genious! Leaving so much for us to discuss and ponder on our own! That one statement leaves a whole world worth of wondering!
I love reading each and every thought that is ever on this board and am so glad I am not the only with BBM constantly on my mind.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: siredevienne38 on Mar 12, 2006, 03:49 PM
"I swear, you will always be on my mind". I love the way he closes the buttons of Jack's shirt...... it is as if carressing his lover, to protect him, to take care of him.... feelings he could not show him in real life anymore, since he had been too confused and full of self-hatred and doubts whenever they had met.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: *Froggy* on Mar 12, 2006, 04:29 PM
"I swear, you will always be on my mind". I love the way he closes the buttons of Jack's shirt...... it is as if carressing his lover, to protect him, to take care of him.... feelings he could not show him in real life anymore, since he had been too confused and full of self-hatred and doubts whenever they had met.

thank you...I love the way Ennis bottons the shirt too.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: *Froggy* on Mar 25, 2006, 11:48 AM
Thank you Patriot1 x
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: *Froggy* on Mar 25, 2006, 02:21 PM
I am very very very sorry.  I quess the joke was in poor taste.  I truly apologize to all. :( :( :( :-X

ohhhhhhhhh x ;)
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: *Froggy* on Mar 25, 2006, 02:58 PM
Am I allowed to delete that?  I really would like to.

Its up to you x
Title: Question About Last Scene
Post by: Prepster on Apr 21, 2006, 11:49 PM
I JUST watched Brokeback for the first time like an hour ago and was wondering if someone could clarify what Ennis says in the last scene. I'm pretty sure it's the last spoken part of the movie and it's when he's holding up Jack's shirt & coat. Is it "I'm not a queer"? I couldn't tell.

Btw - I'm new here. I'm 15 and LOVEEE Jake Gyllenhaal. :)
Title: Re: Question About Last Scene
Post by: ethan on Apr 21, 2006, 11:57 PM
Hello Prepster, welcome.

Jack, I swear......, said Ennis.

You can read a lot of great posts from the members. Also, there is an index page which shows all the topics of discussions. Have a good browse and enjoy your time here.

http://www.ennisjack.com/index.php?topic=1896.0
http://www.ennisjack.com/index.php?topic=1056.0
Title: Re: Question About Last Scene
Post by: Prepster on Apr 22, 2006, 12:07 AM
oOo. Thank you soo much. lol I feel so stupid now.

Oh and sorry for not searching! I forgot about that :)
Title: Re: Question About Last Scene
Post by: ethan on Apr 22, 2006, 12:18 AM
No worries. I am merging this one with the other existing threads.

Here is the index page. It is also located in the news box.

http://www.ennisjack.com/index.php?topic=1504.0
Title: Re: Question About Last Scene
Post by: Patriot1 on Apr 22, 2006, 12:19 AM
I JUST watched Brokeback for the first time like an hour ago and was wondering if someone could clarify what Ennis says in the last scene. I'm pretty sure it's the last spoken part of the movie and it's when he's holding up Jack's shirt & coat. Is it "I'm not a queer"? I couldn't tell.

Btw - I'm new here. I'm 15 and LOVEEE Jake Gyllenhaal. :)

Hello Prepster,

The last words spoken in the movie were, "Jack, I swear..." and were spoken by Ennis in his trailer home. The two shirts ( now reversed with his over Jack's) were hanging on a nail on the inside of his closet door. 

However, you said Ennis was holding the shirt and jacket.  That wasn't the last scene in the movie.  Ennis was holding Jack's shirt and his own shirt that he wore on Brokeback Mountain some 20 years before and which Jack stole (both on the same hanger) in Jack's closet at his parent's home.  While there, some of us heard Ennis say, "I love you." 

Title: Re: Question About Last Scene
Post by: Prepster on Apr 22, 2006, 05:00 PM
Thank you for the clarification  :)
Title: Re: Question About Last Scene
Post by: Sassenach on Apr 22, 2006, 05:09 PM
Love your signature Prepster  :D
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: My Man Jack on Apr 29, 2006, 06:08 AM

There certainly are some wonderful suggestions as to what Ennis Del Mar might have said that finish his, "Jack, I swear..." statement.  I would like to offer yet another one for your consideration.

"Jack, I swear...someday I will get your ashes and will take you back to Brokeback Mountain as you wanted."  The reason I think that is because he then touches the post card of Brokeback Mountain and straightens it and because he says it with determination.

Just my $.75.  [Inflation you know]

MMJ
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: siredevienne38 on Jun 12, 2006, 05:28 PM
i THINK YOU HAVE TO SEE it in a wider context including the prior scene with Alma jr. Ennis was close to tears when he asked her weather she loves Curtn and she said "Yess"... He still had problems to show his true feelings, but finally he succeeded and promised to take part in her wedding ceremony. And this leads directly to the final closet scene which is some kind of coming out of the closet to Jack...he still cannot express it in full what he feels but he is close to it!

IMO the phrase should go: "Jack, I swear, I 'll never stop loving you" or:" ......., in my next life I will do everything right that I have done wrong here on earth with regard to you" or "..., I would like the whole world to know how much I love you"
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Jun 12, 2006, 06:00 PM
IMO the phrase should go: "Jack, I swear, I 'll never stop loving you"...

I have come to believe that this is so.  He will love him for the rest of his life. 

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: shieldmaid on Jun 12, 2006, 09:25 PM
IMO the phrase should go: "Jack, I swear, I 'll never stop loving you"...

I have come to believe that this is so.  He will love him for the rest of his life. 



I agree, absolutely.  Especially now that I've seen the extra 3 seconds of Ennis sobbing with the shirts in Jack's closet.  :(
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Jun 13, 2006, 07:26 AM
IMO the phrase should go: "Jack, I swear, I 'll never stop loving you"...

I have come to believe that this is so.  He will love him for the rest of his life. 



I agree, absolutely.  Especially now that I've seen the extra 3 seconds of Ennis sobbing with the shirts in Jack's closet.  :(

It is a tough scene to watch.  But that deleted scene does affirm Ennis's love for Jack in no uncertain terms.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: mrskutz on Jun 13, 2006, 07:44 PM
"Jack, I swear..."

 "If it could have been....had it been,  different, (a different time, a different place, with different circumstances, different childhood) we would have been together.  I swear....

Jack, I swear...
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Patriot1 on Jun 13, 2006, 10:13 PM

Or how about, "Jack I swear..." if it takes me the rest of my life I will get your ashes and will take you back to Brokeback as you wanted.

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Valandil Eluch on Jun 13, 2006, 10:28 PM

Or how about, "Jack I swear..." if it takes me the rest of my life I will get your ashes and will take you back to Brokeback as you wanted.



 :\'( :\'( :\'( :\'( you got me
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: gimmejack on Jun 14, 2006, 03:53 AM
Regarding the movie...Ennis quote "Jack, I swear"

Jack never said "I love you" although he showed it in many ways...his stares, touches and especially when he suggested that both of them leave their current lives and ranch up together and share a sweet life. 

In Jack's closet (significance to the closet?) Ennis is overwhelmed by the realization that Jack truly fell in love with him on the mountain that summer and Ennis is finally able to admit to himself that he truly fell in love with him there as well.  The significance of Jacks shirt over Ennis shirt does signify and solidify Jacks love surrounding him in Ennis mind at that moment...not just a 20 year affair, but true love.

Ennis is lost in emotion and holding the shirt, whispers "I love You".

The next time you see the shirts hanging in Ennis closet, Ennis shirt now protectively covering Jacks and he says..."Jack, I swear"  to me is simply a continuance of the "I love you" in Jacks closet.

"I love you...Jack, I swear" 


Next time you watch the movie, listen to his tone and the continuity of his words as if there were no other seen between Ennis finding the shirts and the final scene....His last words to Jack,  "I love you....  Jack, I swear"

In my mind, I simply continued the first shirt scene to the last.

Did anybody else get that impression or am I way off ???
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Jun 14, 2006, 06:54 AM
"Jack, I swear—” he said, though Jack had never asked him to swear anything and was himself not the swearing kind.

For me, he indeed swears that he loves him.

Ennis makes the commitment.


Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: welshwitch on Jun 14, 2006, 11:09 AM
I'd like to think that he swears as well never to forget what he's learned, not to be as he was but to change, never to forget or diminish waht they had on Brokeback.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Twisted on Jun 14, 2006, 03:36 PM
I think that when Ennis says Jack, i swear, he means that he loves him to the day he die, and swears not to take anyone else in his life. IMO. :)
Title: "I SWEAR..."
Post by: Glynn on Jun 20, 2006, 02:27 PM
Hiya....

In what way do you all interpret the "I swear..." part of the film...that he regretted not going with Jacks idea when they first met...or I swear I love you forever...

glynn
Title: Re: "I SWEAR..."
Post by: aimi15 on Jun 20, 2006, 02:49 PM
Many different interpretations depending on my mood  ;)

But the one i always come back to, my favourite, is 'I swear i'll love you forever'.

 :\'( :\'( :\'(
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: NoReins on Jun 25, 2006, 04:11 PM
Never had any doubts or any alternate interpretations - for me, it's always been (and will always be) Jack, I swear I will love you till the day I die

It breaks my heart every time, and I've got tears in my eyes typing this :\'( :\'(
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: KatKat on Jun 25, 2006, 10:28 PM
I think he means.."Jack, i swear I will know how to love my loved ones now.", which means attending Junior's wedding
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: frances on Jun 27, 2006, 06:57 AM
"Jack, I swear I will always love you."

"Jack I swear to be loyal to you."

What impressed me during my last vision of BBM is that the only person we hear Ennis swear to in the movie is Jack.
During his marriage to Alma , the preacher never actually says the "swear" part (at least we don't hear that part). He pronounces them husband and wife and then makes the joke about kissing the bride. I think it re-enforces the power of that final "I swear..."


Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Jun 27, 2006, 07:04 AM
"Jack, I swear I will always love you."

"Jack I swear to be loyal to you."

What impressed me during my last vision of BBM is that the only person we hear Ennis swear to in the movie is Jack.
During his marriage to Alma , the preacher never actually says the "swear" part (at least we don't hear that part). He pronounces them husband and wife and then makes the joke about kissing the bride. I think it re-enforces the power of that final "I swear..."

I certainly agree.  And to reserve the use of the word "love" to this final scene reinforces it further.

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Glynn on Jun 27, 2006, 08:12 AM
hiya

such an emotional scene...so overpowering....I also feel it means Jack I swear I am sorry....how I would change things now...I miss you....

glynn xx
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: welshwitch on Jun 27, 2006, 09:01 AM
Yes, and Ennis has just asked the question "Does he love you?" , which id the one he should long ago have asked himself and answered positively. Maybe "I swear" ties up with the fact that he could now answer the question and swear to Jack as Alma Jr is going to swear to Kurt, " until death us do part".
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Glynn on Jun 27, 2006, 09:42 AM
hiya

how sad...he is also now torn to pieces and alone....though he has family there is this distance...it is like what does he do now....

I also note that the caravan he ends up in is like the one where he met jack for work the first time they met...the same steps up to the door....

god this guy ennis is totally gutted and so alone....I see parts of my self in Ennis that are hard to change...and yet I look back on certain life events and people and it is like how come I never did this or that...or why did I act like that...but I come to an understanding now that as one gets older one also sees things differently and becomes less of a drama queen...lol...

I totally feel for ennis...but like him it is like well how do you change things...he did in a way by opening up to his daughter and her life...but I still think there would be the loneliness seeing her happy together would still make him aware of being alone....

Jack, I swear....then it is like no words (though some say they here say I love you...) as though it is action that is needed not words...Jack I swear I will prove with what I do in life...my love for you will continue through my actions....

okay wheres the tissues....lol... :d)

love glynn xx
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Jun 27, 2006, 10:04 AM
hiya

how sad...he is also now torn to pieces and alone....though he has family there is this distance...it is like what does he do now....

I also note that the caravan he ends up in is like the one where he met jack for work the first time they met...the same steps up to the door....

god this guy ennis is totally gutted and so alone....I see parts of my self in Ennis that are hard to change...and yet I look back on certain life events and people and it is like how come I never did this or that...or why did I act like that...but I come to an understanding now that as one gets older one also sees things differently and becomes less of a drama queen...lol...

I totally feel for ennis...but like him it is like well how do you change things...he did in a way by opening up to his daughter and her life...but I still think there would be the loneliness seeing her happy together would still make him aware of being alone....

Jack, I swear....then it is like no words (though some say they here say I love you...) as though it is action that is needed not words...Jack I swear I will prove with what I do in life...my love for you will continue through my actions....

okay wheres the tissues....lol... :d)

love glynn xx

Thanks Glynn for sharing.  It is a tough scene to watch, even though some of it was meant to be comforting...

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: KatKat on Jun 27, 2006, 10:45 AM
"Jack, I swear I will always love you."

"Jack I swear to be loyal to you."

What impressed me during my last vision of BBM is that the only person we hear Ennis swear to in the movie is Jack.
During his marriage to Alma , the preacher never actually says the "swear" part (at least we don't hear that part). He pronounces them husband and wife and then makes the joke about kissing the bride. I think it re-enforces the power of that final "I swear..."



thanks! I haven't noticed  that before . interesting
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Valandil Eluch on Jun 27, 2006, 02:27 PM
"Jack, I swear I will always love you."

"Jack I swear to be loyal to you."

What impressed me during my last vision of BBM is that the only person we hear Ennis swear to in the movie is Jack.
During his marriage to Alma , the preacher never actually says the "swear" part (at least we don't hear that part). He pronounces them husband and wife and then makes the joke about kissing the bride. I think it re-enforces the power of that final "I swear..."




Frances you hit me again!!
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: that_gal on Jun 27, 2006, 02:30 PM
Ennis saying, :Jack, I swear", to me is Ennis' way of saying," Jack I swear that I loved you with all of my heart and soul. You were my best friend and my lover. If only I had the courage to tell you that while you were alive, I would not be standing here holding our 2 shirts, I would be standing there holding you."   
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: lamusica on Jun 27, 2006, 02:46 PM
I think Ennis is saying "I swear...I never meant for things to turn out this way, with you dead and us separated forever."  I think he was sorry for not going along with Jack's early idea of ranching together, but it's all too late now.  I think this is his last avowal of his true feelings for Jack and he says what he neveer said to Jack's face; i.e.  I love you and I was wrong to keep us apart.
     What's so great about every scene in this movie is that there are so many interpretatiions. All of us can see the same scene and never see it the same way.  That's the true "art" of BBM, I think.  That's why it is so interesting to read what others think on this forum.  Great ideas, guys.   IMO, those who don't like this movie have no imagination and no desire to think about emotions and their affects on our lives.  I feel so sorry for them!!!
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: shieldmaid on Jun 27, 2006, 05:47 PM
I love all these ideas and am so glad I came back to this thread again.   %)  I especially cherish the idea that Ennis is making the vows to Jack here that he never could during his lifetime.  He swears to honor, protect, and love him--but way beyond "till death do us part."  He swears that his shirt will always cradle Jack's, that he'll look at the love that his daughter has for her family and remember his love with Jack, that he'll remember and love and dream about Jack always.

Breaks my heart.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Valandil Eluch on Jun 30, 2006, 08:58 PM
I think Ennis is saying "I swear...I never meant for things to turn out this way, with you dead and us separated forever."  I think he was sorry for not going along with Jack's early idea of ranching together, but it's all too late now.  I think this is his last avowal of his true feelings for Jack and he says what he neveer said to Jack's face; i.e.  I love you and I was wrong to keep us apart.
     What's so great about every scene in this movie is that there are so many interpretatiions. All of us can see the same scene and never see it the same way.  That's the true "art" of BBM, I think.  That's why it is so interesting to read what others think on this forum.  Great ideas, guys.   IMO, those who don't like this movie have no imagination and no desire to think about emotions and their affects on our lives.  I feel so sorry for them!!!

 :\'( :\'( :\'( :\'(
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Jul 01, 2006, 08:25 PM
I think Ennis is saying "I swear...I never meant for things to turn out this way, with you dead and us separated forever."  I think he was sorry for not going along with Jack's early idea of ranching together, but it's all too late now.  I think this is his last avowal of his true feelings for Jack and he says what he neveer said to Jack's face; i.e.  I love you and I was wrong to keep us apart.
     What's so great about every scene in this movie is that there are so many interpretatiions. All of us can see the same scene and never see it the same way.  That's the true "art" of BBM, I think.  That's why it is so interesting to read what others think on this forum.  Great ideas, guys.   IMO, those who don't like this movie have no imagination and no desire to think about emotions and their affects on our lives.  I feel so sorry for them!!!

 :\'( :\'( :\'( :\'(

This thread keeps on coming back to haunt us...

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: welshwitch on Jul 02, 2006, 06:27 AM
It suddenly occurred to me that this is probably the only time Ennis has ever said this - although the marriage service involves promises, it doesn't use the word " swear" which to me at least has all sorts of legal connotations. I wonder if Ennis used it as the strongest form of affirmation he could ?
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Glynn on Jul 02, 2006, 07:51 AM
hiya

does it mean I swear I am sorry....that Ennis is filled with guilt that he blames himself for his death...had he taken Jack up on his offer he might still be with him....

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: welshwitch on Jul 02, 2006, 08:12 AM
Implicit in the unspoken rest of the sentence is any other valid interpretation we want - that's why BBM is a work of art. Art loves ambiguity and leaves the possibliities to the  interpretatio of the reader/viewer.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Jul 02, 2006, 10:54 AM
Implicit in the unspoken rest of the sentence is any other valid interpretation we want - that's why BBM is a work of art. Art loves ambiguity and leaves the possibliities to the  interpretatio of the reader/viewer.

It is an artful, intentional ambiguity.  IN this case, less is indeed more...

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: rane99 on Aug 05, 2006, 11:44 PM
Though we may not know Ennis rest of the sentence, his feelsing are not ambiguous.  He loved Jack.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: aintfoolin on Aug 08, 2006, 06:00 AM
To me this scene is the "deepest" It goes deep into the heart of the veiwer, When Jack and Ennis were on Brokeback one thing Ennis seemed to love about Jack was his practical joking. Now don't get me wrong, but the irony of the whole thing! Wow...Who would"ve believed Jack Twist WOULD'NT be around at the end of the movie? He was so full of life. I think Ennis was in awe of this and loved Jack more for it , so for Jack ,the, teacher, the guider,the lover, the one who opened up a whole new world of possibilty for Ennis would be "first to go", and push him into "if only I.....scenerios. Him saying " I swear"  means that he swears that Jack really got him this time.It's a sad thing but Jack did leave the shirts as a testament of his love. Only then did Ennis know how much. 
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: EnnisTwist on Oct 19, 2006, 07:22 AM
Has anyone ever viewed the "Jack I swear" part as a sort of commitment / maybe even marriage vow? With Alma Jr. just telling him she's going to marry and him therefore reflecting his life with Jack and particularly the summer up on brokeback it would make sense..
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Oct 19, 2006, 07:42 AM
Has anyone ever viewed the "Jack I swear" part as a sort of commitment / maybe even marriage vow? With Alma Jr. just telling him she's going to marry and him therefore reflecting his life with Jack and particularly the summer up on brokeback it would make sense..

Yes, it was discussed in one of the earliest threads.  I shall give you the link if I can find it.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Oct 19, 2006, 07:59 AM
Has anyone ever viewed the "Jack I swear" part as a sort of commitment / maybe even marriage vow? With Alma Jr. just telling him she's going to marry and him therefore reflecting his life with Jack and particularly the summer up on brokeback it would make sense..

Yes, it was discussed in one of the earliest threads.  I shall give you the link if I can find it.

I am sure there are many references throughout the forum.  At least I can remember mine.  ;) 

My second post (I first hinted this here):

http://www.ennisjack.com/index.php?PHPSESSID=ffd58bd4b64b627b77cdac60a789ebab&topic=1056.msg1439#msg1439

and more explicitly here:

http://www.ennisjack.com/index.php?PHPSESSID=ffd58bd4b64b627b77cdac60a789ebab&topic=304.msg78278#msg78278

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: welshwitch on Oct 19, 2006, 08:25 AM
And it's so typical of ennis that his feelings are so inchoate that he can't put them into words but leaves the sentence hanging in mid-air.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Mars on Oct 20, 2006, 12:37 PM
And it's so typical of ennis that his feelings are so inchoate that he can't put them into words but leaves the sentence hanging in mid-air.
Ditto!
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: aintfoolin on Nov 05, 2006, 12:14 AM
Or he could be saying Jack, I swear to give love and take love in honor of what we had. I've learned to love unconditionally because of you. Damn I'm tearing up damn. Deep!
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Nov 06, 2006, 08:52 AM


WHat a marvelous ending for the movie.  Yes, it is deep.

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: lamusica on Jan 06, 2007, 04:44 PM
This week I watched Lonesome Dove -- all four parts.  Twice, there were scenes in which a character just said, "I swear...."  Nothing more.  Both times that avowal could have meant:  good-bye; I'll miss you.  I am leaning to believe that "I swear" was sort of a generic phrase meaning just that -- good-bye and I'll miss you.  This hit me hard since we have discussed this phrase from Ennis so thoroughly.  Here it was again.  Again it was out west, spoken by cowboys who were on the point of leaving others to go their way.  Just caught my interest.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Jan 08, 2007, 11:27 AM
This week I watched Lonesome Dove -- all four parts.  Twice, there were scenes in which a character just said, "I swear...."  Nothing more.  Both times that avowal could have meant:  good-bye; I'll miss you.  I am leaning to believe that "I swear" was sort of a generic phrase meaning just that -- good-bye and I'll miss you.  This hit me hard since we have discussed this phrase from Ennis so thoroughly.  Here it was again.  Again it was out west, spoken by cowboys who were on the point of leaving others to go their way.  Just caught my interest.

It's not strange at all, this parallel use of the phrase, no?  Proulx and McMurty probably understood that something lay deeper underneath the convention.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: aintfoolin on Jan 09, 2007, 03:10 PM
I look at it as  in sort of a "confirming" sense. The phrase "don't that just beat all I've ever seen " is another way of looking at it, expressing one's opinion of a whole set of circumstances or series of events. I think Ennis was expressing himself this way over the irony of events that took place in his life concerning Jack including his death. "never thought I'd see the day" also applies. In my experiences these are terms mostly used in the southern states or people who come from a predominatly country or western background.  Am I making sense?
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: welshwitch on Jan 09, 2007, 03:18 PM
Yes, they also come from a pre-mass-media era before even rural people's habits of speeh were affected by TV and to some extent radio. For some reason the digital/mass-communication era doesn't like things left hanging and unfinished - it likes definte answers and neatly tied-off endings.

There are other phrases too - "Well, if that don't beat all..." or "Well, I don't know.." - many that have the same sort of lack of conclusion about them.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Jan 09, 2007, 03:22 PM
I think it was as much an affirmation as a confirmation.  There is a subtle difference.  :)
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: aintfoolin on Jan 09, 2007, 03:38 PM
I totally agree with you tpe on this and also WW you are also so right about these phrases being "oldschool" and inconclusive, but you only have to look at Ennis's sad demeanor to understand what he means when he says this. It's obvious that he's learned a valuable , sad but important lesson.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Jan 09, 2007, 03:44 PM
I totally agree with you tpe on this and also WW you are also so right about these phrases being "oldschool" and inconclusive, but you only have to look at Ennis's sad demeanor to understand what he means when he says this. It's obvious that he's learned a valuable , sad but important lesson.

Will he be able to apply it again?  Probably not, no?  He will be faithful to Jack.  It was perhaps a conscious choice to suffer -- a form of penance.  By suffering, he will never forget.  By never forgetting, he will suffer till death.   
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: aintfoolin on Jan 09, 2007, 03:53 PM
And this  my freind ,is the essence of Ennis. To punish himself is natural and easy for him to do. I agree wholeheartly.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Jan 09, 2007, 03:57 PM
If Ennis were not as faithful to Jack, perhaps he would have led a happier life, trying to apply the lesson learned.  Alas, he could not be unfaithful.  That is why he is great.

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: manhattangirl on Jan 16, 2007, 06:22 AM


With his shirt on the outside, and Jack's shirt on the inside.   Jack will always be inside him, in his heart, soul and his dreams, and I like to think that's what he swears to.


Manhattangirl
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Jan 16, 2007, 08:32 AM

With his shirt on the outside, and Jack's shirt on the inside.   Jack will always be inside him, in his heart, soul and his dreams, and I like to think that's what he swears to.


Manhattangirl

THat's right.  The shirts are a physical manifestation of the vow.

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: welshwitch on Jan 16, 2007, 09:58 AM
And perhaps a demonstration of the fact that he'd have liked to protect Jack but in the end couldn't.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Jan 16, 2007, 10:19 AM
And perhaps a demonstration of the fact that he'd have liked to protect Jack but in the end couldn't.

So true.  It was perhaps a symbol of remorse at not having been able to protect him...

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: babytammy7 on Nov 25, 2007, 08:59 AM
Well the Jack I swear can be means almost anything we feel that it is in Ennis’ heart, like:

I won’t forget you; I loved you and I’ll always love you; I won’t make the same mistake; If I had known it, things would have been different……

But for me it have always mean: “Jack I swear…. I shouldn't a let you out of my sights." ‘Cause this is what Ennis always thought during the four years they were apart, and also during his whole life; and in the SS it was the most powerful declaration of love that Ennis did to Jack!!!

But yesterday I was writing in another thread about this film dubbing into Spanish, and suddenly I remember something……

As I said yesterday Spanish people watch the films dubbed into Spanish. My country has a deep tradition in dubbing  and the professionals in the matter makes an amazing and stunning work, really perfect, translating even the most extremely low sound. So when I saw BBM in Spanish I heard a lot more words and sounds (like whispers and snorts....) than when I saw it in original version (for example when Ennis arrives injured after his meeting with the bear, I heard more words in Spanish that in English Ennis and Jack seemed not to say…). The whole translation of BBM is completely faithful to the original, word by word, except the Jack I swear!!!

I saw BBM 4 times before I saw it in original version. When I heard that Ennis' sentence I was stunned…… ‘cause in Spanish he says : Jack, hay que ver. I don’t know how to translate it into English…..it’s literally “There’s something to see”, or something like "Jack, what things", but I don’t believe that it means the same thing…..I've looked for that in my dictionary and I've found something likes this: Jack, well I never……
I don’t know if that makes the same sense…  :-\\

That made me think……..We all see that Ennis was clearly impressed with the Junior’s declaration “yeah, he loves me” and that it made him think about Jack and his relationship, not only about his love for Jack and Jack’s love, but also about how ironic life was, ‘cause Alma had 19 years when she was so sure about Kurt’s love and her very love…..; the same age as Ennis when he met Jack, when he didn’t know what love meant. So thinking about this and since A.P. never says that he is talking about love, I think that it could be that Ennis was thinking how tough and strange and ironic life was: one day he was 19, he had Jack and a life in front of him, and the next day he was alone in his trailer, without Jack, with 20 heavy years of regret over his back, seeing that his little girl is now a woman and she knows what love is and she is not afraid of it. I think he is thinking out loud how life changes and how different you see things when it’s always too late.

I don’t know if this makes sense; my English is so limited and I can not express my thoughts as I would like. I know that in the Midwest people say I swear all the time. Here in Spain it's a very familiar term and it can means a whole host of things, depending on the situation; so maybe he wasn't vowing anything, just commenting on how moved he was with Junior’s declaration and that it was for him a powerful revelation in order to name what he have been feeling his whole life: Love!!! At that point, he was aware of a lot things that he didn't know before, so he probably was thinking/saying, I just didn't understand....

Really I don’t know…What a mess!!!!  (^)
But maybe Ennis was thinking about what a wise man said: Life goes on with or without us, huh?



(https://ennisjack.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi230.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fee199%2Fsepptember%2Fsmileys_allgemein-129.gif%3Ft%3D1196012035&hash=2a5538c442aa64c4d655425510475c83bf41610e)

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: jackster on Nov 25, 2007, 09:32 AM

That made me think……..We all see that Ennis was clearly impressed with the Junior’s declaration “yeah, he loves me” and that it made him think about Jack and his relationship, not only about his love for Jack and Jack’s love, but also about how ironic life was, ‘cause Alma had 19 years when she was so sure about Kurt’s love and her very love…..; the same age as Ennis when he met Jack, when he didn’t know what love meant. So thinking about this and since A.P. never says that he is talking about love, I think that it could be that Ennis was thinking how tough and strange and ironic life was: one day he was 19, he had Jack and a life in front of him, and the next day he was alone in his trailer, without Jack, with 20 heavy years of regret over his back, seeing that his little girl is now a woman and that she knows what love is and she is not afraid of it. I think he is thinking out loud how life changes and how different you see things when it’s always too late.


Very beautifully (and clearly) said here babytammy.
Makes me wonder what would have happened if someone had asked Ennis, back in ’63 “Does he love you?”
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Nov 26, 2007, 08:29 AM
Well the Jack I swear can be means almost anything we feel that it is in Ennis’ heart, like:

I won’t forget you; I loved you and I’ll always love you; I won’t make the same mistake; If I had known it, things would have been different……

But for me it have always mean: “Jack I swear…. I shouldn't a let you out of my sights." ‘Cause this is what Ennis always thought during the four years they were apart, and also during his whole life; and in the SS it was the most powerful declaration of love that Ennis did to Jack!!!

But yesterday I was writing in another thread about this film dubbing into Spanish, and suddenly I remember something……

As I said yesterday Spanish people watch the films dubbed into Spanish. My country has a deep tradition in dubbing  and the professionals in the matter makes an amazing and stunning work, really perfect, translating even the most extremely low sound. So when I saw BBM in Spanish I heard a lot more words and sounds (like whispers and snorts....) than when I saw it in original version (for example when Ennis arrives injured after his meeting with the bear, I heard more words in Spanish that in English Ennis and Jack seemed not to say…). The whole translation of BBM is completely faithful to the original, word by word, except the Jack I swear!!!

I saw BBM 4 times before I saw it in original version. When I heard that Ennis' sentence I was stunned…… ‘cause in Spanish he says : Jack, hay que ver. I don’t know how to translate it into English…..it’s literally “There’s something to see”, or something like "Jack, what things", but I don’t believe that it means the same thing…..I've looked for that in my dictionary and I've found something likes this: Jack, well I never……
I don’t know if that makes the same sense…  :-\\

That made me think……..We all see that Ennis was clearly impressed with the Junior’s declaration “yeah, he loves me” and that it made him think about Jack and his relationship, not only about his love for Jack and Jack’s love, but also about how ironic life was, ‘cause Alma had 19 years when she was so sure about Kurt’s love and her very love…..; the same age as Ennis when he met Jack, when he didn’t know what love meant. So thinking about this and since A.P. never says that he is talking about love, I think that it could be that Ennis was thinking how tough and strange and ironic life was: one day he was 19, he had Jack and a life in front of him, and the next day he was alone in his trailer, without Jack, with 20 heavy years of regret over his back, seeing that his little girl is now a woman and she knows what love is and she is not afraid of it. I think he is thinking out loud how life changes and how different you see things when it’s always too late.

I don’t know if this makes sense; my English is so limited and I can not express my thoughts as I would like. I know that in the Midwest people say I swear all the time. Here in Spain it's a very familiar term and it can means a whole host of things, depending on the situation; so maybe he wasn't vowing anything, just commenting on how moved he was with Junior’s declaration and that it was for him a powerful revelation in order to name what he have been feeling his whole life: Love!!! At that point, he was aware of a lot things that he didn't know before, so he probably was thinking/saying, I just didn't understand....

Really I don’t know…What a mess!!!!  (^)
But maybe Ennis was thinking about what a wise man said: Life goes on with or without us, huh?



(https://ennisjack.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi230.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fee199%2Fsepptember%2Fsmileys_allgemein-129.gif%3Ft%3D1196012035&hash=2a5538c442aa64c4d655425510475c83bf41610e)



babytammy7, thank you.  This difference in the Spanish version is quite interesting.  I am thinking of the thought process of the Spanish traslators, on why they selected this expression, in particular.  I have always understood this phrase to imply an imperative -- you have to go and see, as in: "that you have to go and see before you die." (que hay que ver antes de morir).

Very beautifully (and clearly) said here babytammy.
Makes me wonder what would have happened if someone had asked Ennis, back in ’63 “Does he love you?”

jackster, I think it would have made a world of difference, had he heard this early on from someone else.

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: babytammy7 on Nov 26, 2007, 08:50 AM
babytammy7, thank you.  This difference in the Spanish version is quite interesting.  I am thinking of the thought process of the Spanish traslators, on why they selected this expression, in particular.  I have always understood this phrase to imply an imperative -- you have to go and see, as in: "that you have to go and see before you die." (que hay que ver antes de morir).

jackster, I think it would have made a world of difference, had he heard this early on from someone else.



Well Thomas, that spanish expression don't imply an imperative, it's more like "see what kind of things happens" or "it's incredible" or " to see to believe". Because of that I think Ennis was telling Jack how life changes and how ironic life is.

 *o) Beautiful spanish friend!!!  :clap:

Very beautifully (and clearly) said here babytammy.
Makes me wonder what would have happened if someone had asked Ennis, back in ’63 “Does he love you?”

Thank you so much Jackster!!!  Yeah, I wonder that too, everyday.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Nov 26, 2007, 09:05 AM
Well Thomas, that spanish expression don't imply an imperative, it's more like "see what kind of things happens" or "it's incredible" or " to see to believe". Because of that I think Ennis was telling Jack how life changes and how ironic life is.

 *o) Beautiful spanish friend!!!  :clap:

Thank you so much Jackster!!!  Yeah, I wonder that too, everyday.

babytammy7, it is really interesting then, the way they tranliterated the phrase.  There certainly seems to be more irony in the Spansh version than in the English original.  Perhaps it is too matter of fact, no?  Still, the effect must have been completely different.  I can only imagine how you felt when you discovered the difference when you saw the original for the first time...

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: babytammy7 on Nov 26, 2007, 09:25 AM
babytammy7, it is really interesting then, the way they tranliterated the phrase.  There certainly seems to be more irony in the Spansh version than in the English original.  Perhaps it is too matter of fact, no?  Still, the effect must have been completely different.  I can only imagine how you felt when you discovered the difference when you saw the original for the first time...



Yeah Thomas!!! I was stunned...  (t) (t) (t) Confused.... And because of that I'm wondering so hard now what is the meaning of that phrase.

But whatever, I prefer the original version: I LOVE THE JACK, I SWEAR!!!  <^(  <^(  <^(
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Nov 26, 2007, 09:29 AM
Yeah Thomas!!! I was stunned...  (t) (t) (t) Confused.... And because of that I'm wondering so hard now what is the meaning of that phrase.

But whatever, I prefer the original version: I LOVE THE JACK, I SWEAR!!!  <^(  <^(  <^(

I think the original is more tantalizing -- and not matter of fact.  I wonder if the Spanish translators modified it because they thought it was too ambiguous.

Thanks, babytammy7, for bringing this up.  This is indeed a very big difference!

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: myprivatejack on Nov 27, 2007, 01:22 PM
I think the original is more tantalizing -- and not matter of fact.  I wonder if the Spanish translators modified it because they thought it was too ambiguous.

Thanks, babytammy7, for bringing this up.  This is indeed a very big difference!


A person who knows the world of translation in dubbed movies told me about this-because for me it´s a nonsense and I let her know...-that sometimes they modify some phrases in order they remain more proper to lips movement and that,of course,in this sense was more similar to the original English "Jack,I swear..." the "Jack,hay que ver..." than the "...te juro"-that was the literal translation- that requires a very different lips movement when pronounce it.
Nevertheless,for me it really deprives of meaning the final phrase,whose main reason,IMO,is remain open to each one´s interpretation;and,of course,I can´t understand the possibility that,as you say Thomas,they had modified because they thought it was too ambiguous... ^*) They are nobody to change a masterpiece acording to their personal opinionˇ.Well,Spanish are good inventor,but I don´t believe they´re too muchˇ ;D
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Nov 27, 2007, 01:51 PM
A person who knows the world of translation in dubbed movies told me about this-because for me it´s a nonsense and I let her know...-that sometimes they modify some phrases in order they remain more proper to lips movement and that,of course,in this sense was more similar to the original English "Jack,I swear..." the "Jack,hay que ver..." than the "...te juro"-that was the literal translation- that requires a very different lips movement when pronounce it.
Nevertheless,for me it really deprives of meaning the final phrase,whose main reason,IMO,is remain open to each one´s interpretation;and,of course,I can´t understand the possibility that,as you say Thomas,they had modified because they thought it was too ambiguous... ^*) They are nobody to change a masterpiece acording to their personal opinionˇ.Well,Spanish are good inventor,but I don´t believe they´re too muchˇ ;D

This makes perfect sense, although I don't know if all the trouble taken was worth it.  But yes, it does sound like "I swear", no?  It makes perfect sense!

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: lamusica on Nov 27, 2007, 04:04 PM
In Ennis's last scene when he is looking at the postcard of BBM, what does the Spanish dubbing say?  Te juro? or Jack, hay que ver....?  The former seems to be in the meaning of the movie, and the latter seems to be unrelated to the meaning.  Am I right with that translation?  I swear to you = Te juro.

I do think the voice is extremely important in this movie and others.  It HAS to be Ennis's voice to carry the full meaning of his lines.  No other voice is similar enough to Ennis's to pull that off.  I love his voice, and find that to be one of his most attractive and endearing traits.  I can't imagine some other voice uttering those final words.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: myprivatejack on Nov 27, 2007, 05:18 PM
In Ennis's last scene when he is looking at the postcard of BBM, what does the Spanish dubbing say?  Te juro? or Jack, hay que ver....?  The former seems to be in the meaning of the movie, and the latter seems to be unrelated to the meaning.  Am I right with that translation?  I swear to you = Te juro.

I do think the voice is extremely important in this movie and others.  It HAS to be Ennis's voice to carry the full meaning of his lines.  No other voice is similar enough to Ennis's to pull that off.  I love his voice, and find that to be one of his most attractive and endearing traits.  I can't imagine some other voice uttering those final words.
In Spanish version Ennis says "Jack,hay que ver..."-if he says "...te juro", there´d be no problem,because it´d be the same than in the original version...-If you fix well in the phonetic ,you´ll see as the sound is more similar,of course rather more than "te juro".This doesn´t mean that I agree with this solution,because,as you say very well,there´s no the same meaning if you say one thing or the other.  :i
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: babytammy7 on Nov 27, 2007, 05:55 PM
Well, for me that translation makes perfect sense since we all don't know for sure what is the meaning of Ennis words!!!

I wrote my post not to talk about that phrase dubbing into spanish but 'cause I found a new and different sense of the Jack, I swear, after thinking about it from another point of view, taking other possibilities and not only the typical Jack, I'll always love you and phrases like that!!!

I quoted myself to show again what I think could be the meaning of Ennis afirmation. I would like to know what you think about it, and what you think Ennis is saying!!!

Thank you so much!!!  ^f^


Well the Jack I swear can be means almost anything we feel that it is in Ennis’ heart, like:

I won’t forget you; I loved you and I’ll always love you; I won’t make the same mistake; If I had known it, things would have been different……

But for me it have always mean: “Jack I swear…. I shouldn't a let you out of my sights." ‘Cause this is what Ennis always thought during the four years they were apart, and also during his whole life; and in the SS it was the most powerful declaration of love that Ennis did to Jack!!!

But yesterday I was writing in another thread about this film dubbing into Spanish, and suddenly I remember something……

We all see that Ennis was clearly impressed with the Junior’s declaration “yeah, he loves me” and that it made him think about Jack and his relationship, not only about his love for Jack and Jack’s love, but also about how ironic life was, ‘cause Alma had 19 years when she was so sure about Kurt’s love and her very love…..; the same age as Ennis when he met Jack, when he didn’t know what love meant. So thinking about this and since A.P. never says that he is talking about love, I think that it could be that Ennis was thinking how tough and strange and ironic life was: one day he was 19, he had Jack and a life in front of him, and the next day he was alone in his trailer, without Jack, with 20 heavy years of regret over his back, seeing that his little girl is now a woman and she knows what love is and she is not afraid of it. I think he is thinking out loud how life changes and how different you see things when it’s always too late.

I don’t know if this makes sense; my English is so limited and I can not express my thoughts as I would like. I know that in the Midwest people say I swear all the time. Here in Spain it's a very familiar term and it can means a whole host of things, depending on the situation; so maybe he wasn't vowing anything, just commenting on how moved he was with Junior’s declaration and that it was for him a powerful revelation in order to name what he have been feeling his whole life: Love!!! At that point, he was aware of a lot things that he didn't know before, so he probably was thinking/saying, I just didn't understand....

Really I don’t know…What a mess!!!!  (^)
But maybe Ennis was thinking about what a wise man said: Life goes on with or without us, huh?



(https://ennisjack.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi230.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fee199%2Fsepptember%2Fsmileys_allgemein-129.gif%3Ft%3D1196012035&hash=2a5538c442aa64c4d655425510475c83bf41610e)


Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Tony on Nov 27, 2007, 10:36 PM
   Hi, BabyTammy!  Your question is a tough one.  In foreign language classes, sometimes the assignment was to translate a very difficult phrase
into English.  Here, it's actually....explaining the English into.....further English.    Because you are a student of language, will not shy from
being technical.
   The phrase is suggestive, not declarative.  So, the meaning goes further than the words said, in and of themselves.  that can be 1) internal,
as in pregnant with interior meaning, or, 2) external, when further words are implied but dropped off because it is more powerful to imply them
than to say them.
   I think its- #2, a longer statement shortened to give it more power.  "...you meant so much to me..." is the easiest extension that would have
been dropped off, and, because of the context, that's what I think the extended meaning was.
  But, given the difficulty they both had in saying the "L" word, following close behind, I would vote for the extended statement..."I loved you.."
since he dropped a powerful extension back to a shorter phrase.
   But am absolutely sure, he did NOT mean---life goes on.  No possible way.
Very technical---but I love those words and your question was waving a red flag in front of a bull.  Other Brokies--please forgive.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: aintfoolin on Nov 27, 2007, 11:11 PM
 Stemming from his "enlightenment" resulting frm his conversation with Alma Jr, I think he meant "Jack, after all is said and done you  have still found a way to have the last word ". "Regardless of my denials during our time together, you were showing me what love is all along. I know what you were doing  now and why." That's my interpretation, though there is much to be read into his words "Jack, I swear" more of a summation of the past and thinking in the present.
He is now aware of why Jack could'nt just leave him be and could'nt figure out how to just quit him after 20 years. A serious deep love for him.  My take.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Nov 28, 2007, 09:24 AM


First I agree with Tony's comment that brevity in this case adds greater power.  This connects smoothly with aintfoolin's observation that this is a moment of enlightenment.  It is very much is the spirit of Zen/Chan "satori", no?  I would like to think that this was in the aithor's mind all along.  It was a moment of enlightenment for Ennis as well as for us, the readers/viewers.

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: lamusica on Nov 28, 2007, 12:21 PM
Babytammy, Tony, Aint and Tpe _ Your explanations are all apropos, in my opinion.  We can take Ennis's words to mean what feels right to us.  The words, combined with the tears in Ennis's eyes, is all that is needed to convey a great depth of feeling for Jack.  That's really all that is important.  What he never said in life ( I love you) was conveyed by those two words, with the tears, and the timbre of his aching voice.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: manhattangirl on Nov 28, 2007, 05:46 PM
I don't know for me it was like a covenant Ennis made with Jack, someone he loved more than he loved himself.   Like AP wrote these men never swore anything to each other.  But Ennis swore to Jack, and  remember, soon after that Jack returned to him in his dreams. 

Ennis did the one thing that he couldn't do while Jack was alive, acknowledge  and accept his love for Jack, and understand and honor Jack's love for him.  Then the battle within him ceased, wounded, bloodied, dealing with something he couldn't change, but promised the one thing he had to offer at that shrine he created,  he'll always love him.

That's how I like to think of that moment.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Tony on Nov 28, 2007, 07:06 PM
     Am always willing to change my mind, if someone gives a strong version that works.  Manhattengirl did.  It WAS a covenant oath, I think.
He was saying, I'll never forget this love, ever.  That fits bullseye, for me, instead of what I wrote above.  That alters the power of the ending
even more---an oath.  The very words of an oath, exactly, and the oath itself shortened to convey more power.  I'll never forget this love---
Jack,... I swear.......
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Nov 28, 2007, 07:16 PM
I don't know for me it was like a covenant Ennis made with Jack, someone he loved more than he loved himself.   Like AP wrote these men never swore anything to each other.  But Ennis swore to Jack, and  remember, soon after that Jack returned to him in his dreams. 

Ennis did the one thing that he couldn't do while Jack was alive, acknowledge  and accept his love for Jack, and understand and honor Jack's love for him.  Then the battle within him ceased, wounded, bloodied, dealing with something he couldn't change, but promised the one thing he had to offer at that shrine he created,  he'll always love him.

That's how I like to think of that moment.

Thanks manhattangirl.  I do also think of it in terms of a covenant, as someone who promises a faithfulness unto death.

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: lancecowboy on Dec 01, 2007, 07:16 AM
I don't know for me it was like a covenant Ennis made with Jack, someone he loved more than he loved himself.   Like AP wrote these men never swore anything to each other.  But Ennis swore to Jack, and  remember, soon after that Jack returned to him in his dreams. 

Ennis did the one thing that he couldn't do while Jack was alive, acknowledge  and accept his love for Jack, and understand and honor Jack's love for him.  Then the battle within him ceased, wounded, bloodied, dealing with something he couldn't change, but promised the one thing he had to offer at that shrine he created,  he'll always love him.

That's how I like to think of that moment.

That's beautiful, manhattangirl. :t) :ghug: :^^)
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Marge Innavera on Dec 22, 2007, 03:02 PM
I look at it as  in sort of a "confirming" sense. The phrase "don't that just beat all I've ever seen " is another way of looking at it, expressing one's opinion of a whole set of circumstances or series of events. I think Ennis was expressing himself this way over the irony of events that took place in his life concerning Jack including his death. "never thought I'd see the day" also applies.

I know this is reviving a semi-inactive thread, but every time I view the last scene there's something I always wonder about:

The decision to attend Alma Junior's wedding can't be an easy one for Ennis. Even if Jack were still alive, it's a situation where he'll have to interact with Alma at least a few times and, after all, Alma is one one that Ennis knows for a fact "knows" -- unlike the people out "on the pavement" that he might imagine knows (but probably don't).  The decision to go ahead and attend, come what may, is something I can't see Ennis deciding to do earlier in the film.

What connection do y'all think that has with the loss of Jack, and with his final "I swear" statement?
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: chameau on Dec 23, 2007, 01:11 AM
Interesting point you brought Marge about Ennis having to interact with Alma at Junior's wedding.  Despite this perspective he decides to go.  He deceived so many people in the past, Alma, Cassie and finally Jack.  I would say he's trying to pay back for the errors he commited and about Jack I swear... From this perspective I would say I swear I had another chance, go back and have this sweet life with you.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: lancecowboy on Dec 23, 2007, 03:21 AM
Interesting point you brought Marge about Ennis having to interact with Alma at Junior's wedding.  Despite this perspective he decides to go.  He deceived so many people in the past, Alma, Cassie and finally Jack.  I would say he's trying to pay back for the errors he commited and about Jack I swear... From this perspective I would say I swear I had another chance, go back and have this sweet life with you.


I am glad you all re-activated this topic, because in fact, I had thought about this wedding and how Ennis would be when the time comes. In my never to be published screen play for the sequel, Ennis returns to Lightning Flat for Thanksgiving and Christmas with Jack's Ma and Old Man Twist. He furthers his growth emotionally, and strengthen his bond with Jack's Ma, and finding reconciliation with the Old Man. I think having a family again will transform Ennis even more, making him less concerned with the opinions of the pink elephant in the room (society and conventional customs), and more concerned with the people who care and accept him.

We have to remember that even at this point in the movie, we are still only in the mid-eighties, which is suffering from the backlash of the AIDS epidemic, etc. Rural people especially are not yet that accepting of gay people. We are decades away from Will and Grace, the fab four, etc.

Old Man Twist was always disappointed that Jack never grew up to be more of a cowboy like him. Ennis would show him during his visits that he could indeed help out around the ranch, and be the cowboy son that the old man always wanted. And the new Ennis would be able to stand up to the Old Man without getting angry, just by standing tall and standing firm, and he did when he said "Yes Sir", his last words before leaving, and saying "Thanks for this" privately to Jack's Ma when he was out the door.

I think that by Christmas, after visiting Lightning Flat a couple more times, Ennis would come out to his girls, and apologize to Alma for the deception all those years. He would no longer fear the pink elephant, but welcome the opportunity to talk with the people important in his life. Of course, Alma Jr. would be supportive and loving. Jenny would become closer to Ennis. Alma may even forgive him, now that he accepts himself, and not blame the divorce on Alma. In any case, he would have the strength and courage to face Alma, because he gained it from Jack's Ma love and acceptance, as I acquired mine from the love and acceptance in this forum. Alma may not be the forgiving kind. No sting like a woman scorned, etc. In any case, that would be Alma's problem, once Ennis raised the courage and self-acceptance to be who he is truly, and reached out to her.

Then by the time of the wedding, in June, Ennis would have made plans to move out to Lightning Flat. He would meet Cassie again, being a small town and all, Alma Jr would invite Cassie as her friend, or perhaps as a date for one of Kurt's friends. In any case, Ennis would apologize to her as well, and tell her about Jack. Ennis would find that she is now happily engaged to a man who adores her. She still has feelings for him, but wishes him all the best, especially now that she gets him.

That's just what I would like to see happen, but naturally, it is my own alternate universe. I have no doubt that others will want their own particular version that suites their own needs. The story goes on for quite a bit after the wedding, and the new baby, ... I have it going on for another twenty thirty years, with over thirty scenes.

As for the three words, Jack, I swear. I can think of only one reason, especially as Ennis brush gently the post card with his thumb. To me, the three words meant that Ennis will return Jack's ashes from the family plot to Brokeback Mountain.  As was said in the short story, Ennis can't imagine leaving Jack in the grieving desolate plain in Lightning Flat, where a single road heads out to no where. Ennis was, as manhattangirl said, making a covenant with Jack that he will fulfill the one wish that Ennis could deliver, that Jack asked of him, other than the sweet life that is now gone forever. Again, just my humble opinion.

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Dec 26, 2007, 08:37 AM
What connection do y'all think that has with the loss of Jack, and with his final "I swear" statement?

I think the connection was that Ennis no longer took things for granted -- espeically those whom he loved.  He had gained a renewed perspective: that love is something to be cherished, and not something that had to be hidden under a bushel.

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: bdihigo on Jan 04, 2008, 01:09 PM
okay...I am not tyring to oversimplify such an important statement in the movie, but I am a Southern girl and sometimes I say "I swear" when I can't think of anything else to say! When I'm mad or sad or both,when my emotions are running way too deep for words and I could never, ever get them all out anyways, I will just say "I swear"!! and that in itself usually gets my point across to whoever is listening or not listening!

As another southern girl (Tennessee), I'm going to jump on the bandwagon here and say I completely agree. When the words fail me (for better or worse) and I can't articulate my feelings, saying "I swear" is about the only thing I can do. I also believe that the statement is a response to an earlier scene with Jack (in the motel). It's like Ennis is basically saying in agreement yeah, "Jack, I swear...Brokeback got us good, don't it?" and it did. It will have him until the day he dies and he knows it.

*Sigh* lump in my throat let the cryfest begin... :\'( :\'( :\'( :\'(
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: FlwrChild on Jan 04, 2008, 02:47 PM
Aww, that's beautiful. Well said. :\'(  <^(
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Jan 04, 2008, 03:34 PM
As another southern girl (Tennessee), I'm going to jump on the bandwagon here and say I completely agree. When the words fail me (for better or worse) and I can't articulate my feelings, saying "I swear" is about the only thing I can do. I also believe that the statement is a response to an earlier scene with Jack (in the motel). It's like Ennis is basically saying in agreement yeah, "Jack, I swear...Brokeback got us good, don't it?" and it did. It will have him until the day he dies and he knows it.

*Sigh* lump in my throat let the cryfest begin... :\'( :\'( :\'( :\'(

How interesting.  I had never thought about this.  In the motel, Ennis gave Jack a simple nudge by way of response.    Looking at it the way you propose intrigues me. 

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Tony on Jan 04, 2008, 04:14 PM
    Am interested in these posts that have brought up the southern dialect. In fact, it's what I grew up with, too, so I know it's true, the two
words are used exactly as reported in the posts above.  And was almost about to reverse course from agreeing with Manhattangirl that it
was a covenant oath.  Until I remembered the accent marks and the intensity of the words.  In the South, it means one thing if you accent the
word "swear" and tone upwards, and means another if you accent the "I" slightly and go downwards with the "swear".  The first means-
"can you believe THAT?", the second has a wide range, including agreeing with someone over some nuisance, for example.
   The above posts are correct, in so far as they go, but they are omitting the accent marks (I believe, downwards, if I recall right), which opens
up anything, and forget the electrical intensity, which is NOT to be found  frequently.
   Yes, it's a common saying. But rise and fall of the sounds, and, in this case, intensity, allow for a common saying, frequently used, being
bumped up to something much, much more meaningful.  I loved those posts for pointing out what they did, but as a Southerner, myself,
and a language student, am sorry----there's more there.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: bdihigo on Jan 04, 2008, 04:45 PM
You know friend...you're right. There is more. And "fast or slow, I like the direction you're going."  ;)
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: heatherh7878 on Jan 29, 2008, 09:27 PM
Hi everyone....i'm new to this forum and BBM. I've enjoyed reading everyone's thoughts and opinions on the "Jack, I swear..." thread :t)

I believe it's an oath as well. I makes so much sense to me. Or maybe it's the best way for me to cope with my sadness for these two characters. My heart breaks for Ennis, in this scene. He has found what so many seek, yet never find (even in today's society) and that is true love, only it's too late.

 :\'( :\'( :\'( need to get my tissues
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Jan 30, 2008, 08:19 AM
Hi everyone....i'm new to this forum and BBM. I've enjoyed reading everyone's thoughts and opinions on the "Jack, I swear..." thread :t)

I believe it's an oath as well. I makes so much sense to me. Or maybe it's the best way for me to cope with my sadness for these two characters. My heart breaks for Ennis, in this scene. He has found what so many seek, yet never find (even in today's society) and that is true love, only it's too late.

 :\'( :\'( :\'( need to get my tissues

Welcome, heatherh7878.  :)

I think the taking of oaths is a deep way of reassuring oneself against the vagaries/cruelties of fate.  It is a heart of any marriage vow to reassure oneself and each other that no matter what misfortunes may come along in the futire, one is resolved to carry on. 

I do think this was the way for Ennis to keep himself tru to the memory of Jack and their love.  True, it was too later -- bit perhaps it now means much more to Ennis (and to us): that he resolves to stay true to something even though all is lost.

 
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: FlwrChild on Jan 30, 2008, 08:31 AM
That's beautifully put tpe. ^f^

And maybe that makes the vow even more powerful, because it's a much more difficult one both to keep and to endure.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Jan 31, 2008, 08:10 AM
Yes, I think the vow is more powerful because it is devoid of hope. 

There is nothing to make him keep it.  There is a lifetime to endure.



Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: jackster on Jan 31, 2008, 08:31 AM
. . . this was the way for Ennis to keep himself true to the memory of Jack and their love . . . . . he resolves to stay true to something even though all is lost.

Yes, very wonderfully put thomas.
This is at the heart of Ennis isn't it? For all his faults and foibles, he was if nothing else, faithful, faithful to the end.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: lancecowboy on Jan 31, 2008, 10:42 AM
Yes, very wonderfully put thomas.
This is at the heart of Ennis isn't it? For all his faults and foibles, he was if nothing else, faithful, faithful to the end.

Yes, I think the vow is more powerful because it is devoid of hope. 

There is nothing to make him keep it.  There is a lifetime to endure.

That's beautifully put tpe. ^f^

And maybe that makes the vow even more powerful, because it's a much more difficult one both to keep and to endure.

Thanks, Jackster, tpe, FlwrChild, you all have captured the essence of why Ennis' last scene was so poignant and powerful for me... :\'(

He was faithful. He could endure the unendurable. He could stand what couldn't be fixed. He could change into a man in touch with his own feelings. He found peace even when he was in pain, but I think, he also held on to hope, caressing Brokeback Mountain with his thumb, hoping one day, to spend eternity with Jack there.

That's the image that has been holding me together this last week. I'd be lost like a ship without a rudder without this other gift from Heath. The man was amazing, endlessly.

(https://ennisjack.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi218.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fcc126%2Flancecowboy%2FEnnis-last-scene.jpg&hash=255f9b7196273de0814ffa5c57ae13bbbdf04f7d)
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: jackster on Jan 31, 2008, 10:49 AM
That's the image that has been holding me together this last week. I'd be lost like a ship without a rudder without this other gift from Heath. The man was amazing, endlessly.

(https://ennisjack.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi218.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fcc126%2Flancecowboy%2FEnnis-last-scene.jpg&hash=255f9b7196273de0814ffa5c57ae13bbbdf04f7d)


Yeah LC, I guess in some ways this past week we all see ourselves standing there looking at a picture of Heath with tears in OUR eyes.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: babytammy7 on Jan 31, 2008, 06:33 PM
Andrew, Jackster, that's so beautiful friends..... :\'( :\'( :\'(

Thank you so much!!!
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Feb 01, 2008, 08:27 AM
Yes, very wonderfully put thomas.
This is at the heart of Ennis isn't it? For all his faults and foibles, he was if nothing else, faithful, faithful to the end.

If there is something that he was consistent throughout, it was indeed faithfulness.  It is a faithfulness that transcended death.  For Ennis, his faithfulness was inseparable from his love.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Feb 01, 2008, 08:34 AM
He was faithful. He could endure the unendurable. He could stand what couldn't be fixed. He could change into a man in touch with his own feelings. He found peace even when he was in pain, but I think, he also held on to hope, caressing Brokeback Mountain with his thumb, hoping one day, to spend eternity with Jack there.

Hope plays such constrasting roles in the lives of Jack and Ennis, and there is a subtle irony that Jack, who was the carrier of that hope early on in the relationship, probably lost it in the end, whereas Ennis, who could not believe in hope early on, would finally be the refuge of that hope after Jack's death.

I don't think this is unintentional.  I think it is the bridge on whcih one thing is passed from one to the other.

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: myprivatejack on Feb 01, 2008, 11:56 AM
Hope plays such constrasting roles in the lives of Jack and Ennis, and there is a subtle irony that Jack, who was the carrier of that hope early on in the relationship, probably lost it in the end, whereas Ennis, who could not believe in hope early on, would finally be the refuge of that hope after Jack's death.

I don't think this is unintentional.  I think it is the bridge on whcih one thing is passed from one to the other


Yes,Thomas,again there's an irony,I don't know if subtle,but that now gets the dimension of tragic.I also believe that the main irony-inhumane in this case-is that the character that embodied the guarantee of this final hope,has lost the man who gave it life;whereas the character who lost his hope and his life at the end,is being embodied by a man who I do hope will be alive and well during years and years...
For me,this scene has now a complete new meaning,another dimension-also and too tragic-and I'll never watch it in the same way again.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Feb 01, 2008, 03:50 PM
Yes,Thomas,again there's an irony,I don't know if subtle,but that now gets the dimension of tragic.I also believe that the main irony-inhumane in this case-is that the character that embodied the guarantee of this final hope,has lost the man who gave it life;whereas the character who lost his hope and his life at the end,is being embodied by a man who I do hope will be alive and well during years and years...
For me,this scene has now a complete new meaning,another dimension-also and too tragic-and I'll never watch it in the same way again.

Which goes back to what I said a few posts back -- nothing is more poigniant than a vow taken in the face of tremendous loss.  It becomes infinitely more meaningful.  It is as close as you will ever get to truth.

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: myprivatejack on Feb 06, 2008, 12:40 PM
It's sure that Ennis last words were mainly a vow of love and the commitment he hadn't got when Jack was alive;but it has been said also that is a phrase open to many interpretations and meanings.In this sense,I wonder if this was a kind of saying that he was to begin a new life,accepting himself just like he was.It's said that we don't know what we have until we lose it;and we know then what we have,WHAT WE ARE AND WHAT WE FEEL...Does Ennis mean that he has came to terms with his own sexuality and he is able to live it in a not so guilty way?.More concretely,would Ennis be able to open himself enough as to have a relationship with another man in the future?.
Well,in the s.s. beginning we see He's alone several years after Jack's death;and that he's united emotionally to his lover's memories,who is alive and by his side only in his dreams.He's alone,yes,but in this very moment of the story;had he could have a relationship,even if it was only a mere sexual relief,as Jack's Mexican hustlers?Or,on the contrary,this irony we talked about with Thomas,could make him being more closed,protected into his shield?.The irony of protecting themselves against being murdered by their sexuality by ending in the same way however,is a way of telling Ennis he was right? Or a way to telling him "do as you please because you have only one life and you must live it by yourself before it's too late?".
We've seen also how Ennis lives a kind of "coming out" precisely with the persons whose reaction could have been more violent:Jack's wife and parents.And he feels as more free,more himself than ever before...So,I ask:could it be his last phrase like-"Jack,I swear...I'm going to be myself from now onwards.I'm going to live as I feel,faithful to your memory,but in the way you taught me I was"?.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Feb 07, 2008, 08:18 AM
It's sure that Ennis last words were mainly a vow of love and the commitment he hadn't got when Jack was alive;but it has been said also that is a phrase open to many interpretations and meanings.In this sense,I wonder if this was a kind of saying that he was to begin a new life,accepting himself just like he was.It's said that we don't know what we have until we lose it;and we know then what we have,WHAT WE ARE AND WHAT WE FEEL...Does Ennis mean that he has came to terms with his own sexuality and he is able to live it in a not so guilty way?.More concretely,would Ennis be able to open himself enough as to have a relationship with another man in the future?.
Well,in the s.s. beginning we see He's alone several years after Jack's death;and that he's united emotionally to his lover's memories,who is alive and by his side only in his dreams.He's alone,yes,but in this very moment of the story;had he could have a relationship,even if it was only a mere sexual relief,as Jack's Mexican hustlers?Or,on the contrary,this irony we talked about with Thomas,could make him being more closed,protected into his shield?.The irony of protecting themselves against being murdered by their sexuality by ending in the same way however,is a way of telling Ennis he was right? Or a way to telling him "do as you please because you have only one life and you must live it by yourself before it's too late?".
We've seen also how Ennis lives a kind of "coming out" precisely with the persons whose reaction could have been more violent:Jack's wife and parents.And he feels as more free,more himself than ever before...So,I ask:could it be his last phrase like-"Jack,I swear...I'm going to be myself from now onwards.I'm going to live as I feel,faithful to your memory,but in the way you taught me I was"?.

You know, I have thought about the dream sequences many times in conjunction with the "I swear" scene where Ennis takes his vow.  From the dream sequences (apparently) years later, it would seem that Ennis had become more withdrawn into his own world, living in a world of dreams, so to speak.   And yet, we can't also resist the temptation of interpreting these sequences as a kind of inner "liberation" for Ennis -- that he is no longer afraid to dream, even if sometimes, he wakes up in tears.    Surely, the good and the bad loom large in those dreams, but it is perhaps one manifestation of how Ennis kept his vow to Jack: that by keeping him alive inside, he remains faithful to his memory and to their love.

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Halenfarewell on Feb 07, 2008, 11:25 PM
I love what you have written Ryan and agree with you completely. 
Ann
(formerly of Vancouver, WA)
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: myprivatejack on Feb 08, 2008, 04:29 AM
You know, I have thought about the dream sequences many times in conjunction with the "I swear" scene where Ennis takes his vow.  From the dream sequences (apparently) years later, it would seem that Ennis had become more withdrawn into his own world, living in a world of dreams, so to speak.   And yet, we can't also resist the temptation of interpreting these sequences as a kind of inner "liberation" for Ennis -- that he is no longer afraid to dream, even if sometimes, he wakes up in tears.    Surely, the good and the bad loom large in those dreams, but it is perhaps one manifestation of how Ennis kept his vow to Jack: that by keeping him alive inside, he remains faithful to his memory and to their love.

Yes,he promised to remain faithful to Jack's memory and to their love,you're right.And this promise comes from Ennis half-liberation of his feelings about him.I say "half" because we see how he "comes out",I repite,before the persons who could feel more aggressive against him and the relationship they could guess he had with their son and husband,respectively.Isn't it a great step to do for Ennis?-bearing in mind his fears-.But I think Ennis always had allowed himself to dream with Jack,even with this "sweet life" together,because it's what he wished,but never did he allow himself to let these dreams turn into relativity's his,their tragedy-.But,I keep on asking:Do you think this means Ennis really come to terms with his sexuality,as to make it become a real chance in his day-to-day life?

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Feb 08, 2008, 08:20 AM
MPJ, would you think that the scene in the closet in Jack's room could be interpreted as the first "I swear" scene -- or at least the wordless precursor?    And if I understand what you say here, the last "I swear" scene is only half the story -- that it was made only possible by what happened in LF...

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: myprivatejack on Feb 08, 2008, 09:54 AM
MPJ, would you think that the scene in the closet in Jack's room could be interpreted as the first "I swear" scene -- or at least the wordless precursor?    And if I understand what you say here, the last "I swear" scene is only half the story -- that it was made only possible by what happened in LF...

Well,in some way not only the closet scene,but all the sequence in Twists home could be seen as a precursor of the last "I swear...".Ennis has begun a journey to his self-knowledge and acceptation,that never could be made being Jack's alive-or at least,never had been posed seriously...-.The rest of Ennis´story without Jack begins,obviously,with this last vow and we only pretend to know how this vow can be applied in his day-to-day life.For this reason,I asked in my former post if it could be like a promise to Jack's memory,but also to himself to live as he learned to be thanks to Jack;or it would be only a way to promise him eternal love,but hidden as ever.I mean,not being a real "wind of change" in Ennis way of seeing and living his sexuality.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Feb 11, 2008, 08:51 AM
Well,in some way not only the closet scene,but all the sequence in Twists home could be seen as a precursor of the last "I swear...".Ennis has begun a journey to his self-knowledge and acceptation,that never could be made being Jack's alive-or at least,never had been posed seriously...-.The rest of Ennis´story without Jack begins,obviously,with this last vow and we only pretend to know how this vow can be applied in his day-to-day life.For this reason,I asked in my former post if it could be like a promise to Jack's memory,but also to himself to live as he learned to be thanks to Jack;or it would be only a way to promise him eternal love,but hidden as ever.I mean,not being a real "wind of change" in Ennis way of seeing and living his sexuality.

I do think that the simple fact of finally getting himself to go to LF signals a major change within Ennis.  Jack had of course wanted all along for Ennis to come with him to LF.  As you imply, perhaps this is a posthumous acknowledgement on Ennis's part -- an acknowledgement that finally comes to words in the final "jack, I swear..."?

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: aintfoolin on Feb 12, 2008, 11:08 PM
 Been lurking again ,but I agree with this, Ennis is finally  finding out that Jack was not only offering him love but a  second chance at having  a family.  He found Mrs. Twist inviting,  accepting, even invited him back.  Mr. Twist...well maybe with a little mutual understanding , he would have been able to at least respect his son's choices , as long he was allowed to think he was still  in charge  of the place, and that they were not  going to force the relationship down his throat. Time can change things, and  slowly chip away  at  walls. I feel Ennis may have eventually gained his respect if not fully accepting two men being partners. (cringe, did I say that?) These two stubborn mules were more alike in their way of thinking than not. He now realizes that coming to LF with Jack , might not have been so dreadful after all. He knows how much Jack hoped to have him there.  Now he knows the possibilities have been lost, what might have been..  What he found there, was something he could work with and  maybe live with after all. Am I wrong here?

 He could have easily said * Damn Jack, had I known then what I know now, I would have thought twice about it*  "Jack, I swear", You knew it all along..  Too bad Jack had to die for him to realize it. 2 cents.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Feb 19, 2008, 09:31 AM
Been lurking again ,but I agree with this, Ennis is finally  finding out that Jack was not only offering him love but a  second chance at having  a family.  He found Mrs. Twist inviting,  accepting, even invited him back.  Mr. Twist...well maybe with a little mutual understanding , he would have been able to at least respect his son's choices , as long he was allowed to think he was still  in charge  of the place, and that they were not  going to force the relationship down his throat. Time can change things, and  slowly chip away  at  walls. I feel Ennis may have eventually gained his respect if not fully accepting two men being partners. (cringe, did I say that?) These two stubborn mules were more alike in their way of thinking than not. He now realizes that coming to LF with Jack , might not have been so dreadful after all. He knows how much Jack hoped to have him there.  Now he knows the possibilities have been lost, what might have been..  What he found there, was something he could work with and  maybe live with after all. Am I wrong here?

 He could have easily said * Damn Jack, had I known then what I know now, I would have thought twice about it*  "Jack, I swear", You knew it all along..  Too bad Jack had to die for him to realize it. 2 cents.

I do think that it was at LF that Ennis got to know what a "life together" really meant.  The discover of the shirts pretty much told him what it meant to Jack, most certainly...

It must have somehow hit Ennis really hard in the end -- this realization of what he had pushed away for so long until it was too late.  Somehow, I think Jack's mother felt what Ennis was feeling, and tried to reach out.

The "I swear" is an affirmation of this belated realization, the same way that the simple act of taking the shirts stood for an affirmation -- an affirmation that I think Mrs. Twist understood.

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Matt Nasty on Feb 19, 2008, 11:44 AM
hi i thought this line was so sad i dint really understand fully i mean what was he swearing? but anyway you can tell the emotion in the words so the meaning was still there
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: myprivatejack on Feb 20, 2008, 09:38 AM
hi i thought this line was so sad i dint really understand fully i mean what was he swearing? but anyway you can tell the emotion in the words so the meaning was still there
IMO,this line is the confirmation of Ennis commitment he never had being Jack still alive;a commitment with himself to change his way of seeing and living life,a kind of find himself in the end.But, as you've could see before and as so many scenes of the movie,the interpretation is open to each one's opinion and feelings.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: heathlover1 on Mar 04, 2008, 04:36 AM
IMO,this line is the confirmation of Ennis commitment he never had being Jack still alive;a commitment with himself to change his way of seeing and living life,a kind of find himself in the end.But, as you've could see before and as so many scenes of the movie,the interpretation is open to each one's opinion and feelings.

For me, the last line of "Jack, I swear," was just short for, "Jack, I swear, if I had only known, I would have done it all differently. He realized what a huge mistake he made all of those years. And if he had one more chance, he would do it all different." , but he didn't know how much Jack really loved him or how much he loved Jack until it was too late; nor could he ever have imagined how painful it would be knowing that he would never see him again. .

I never really questioned that line too much, because I felt certain that's what he meant.

We'll never know.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Matt Nasty on Mar 04, 2008, 07:23 AM
its great how we all ahve such varying opinions but all make so much sense  :)
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: myprivatejack on Mar 04, 2008, 07:40 AM
its great how we all ahve such varying opinions but all make so much sense  :)

And I think it has been made intentionally,because they are some words opened to as many interpretations as viewers can have.Everyone has their own ,according to their feelings and their way of being and living life and each one of them has a very complete and logical sense.But if we look at them,we'll see as their final result is that Ennis swears to change his behaviour;both if he could  have another opportunity then, or from this very moment onwards. :c)
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Matt Nasty on Mar 04, 2008, 07:41 AM
im listening to the sountrack right now so listening to some of these posts make me so sad im nearly crying lol
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: heathlover1 on Mar 04, 2008, 07:45 AM
im listening to the sountrack right now so listening to some of these posts make me so sad im nearly crying lol

I know the feeling.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Matt Nasty on Mar 04, 2008, 07:59 AM
I know the feeling.

i think most people here do thats one of the wonders of the forum :)

to me the significanse of the comment of "jack i swear..." is that ennis has finally commited himself to jack in someway even if we cant be sure what way that is he finally swore something to jack a promise i dont think ennis ever did that before.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: heathlover1 on Mar 04, 2008, 08:01 AM
i think most people here do thats one of the wonders of the forum :)

to me the significanse of the comment of "jack i swear..." is that ennis has finally commited himself to jack in someway even if we cant be sure what way that is he finally swore something to jack a promise i dont think ennis ever did that before.

Kind of a version of my thoughts.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Matt Nasty on Mar 04, 2008, 08:03 AM
Kind of a version of my thoughts.

:)

you see i told you i was mature for my age and not a kid  ;) lol only joking im over that now :)
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: heathlover1 on Mar 04, 2008, 08:05 AM
:)

you see i told you i was mature for my age and not a kid  ;) lol only joking im over that now :)

Actually, I told you that you were mature for your age! ;)
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Matt Nasty on Mar 04, 2008, 08:08 AM
Actually, I told you that you were mature for your age! ;)

oh well never mind the details lol.

anyway we better get back on topic, oops its so easy for you to feel what you are saying is connected to the topic when it isnt :P
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: heathlover1 on Mar 04, 2008, 08:09 AM
oh well never mind the details lol.

anyway we better get back on topic, oops its so easy for you to feel what you are saying is connected to the topic when it isnt :P

We are off topic with two posts and two sentences. We should be allowed a couple slips!
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: athena0204 on Mar 13, 2008, 09:45 AM
When Ennis says, "Jack...I swear...", he means that he wishes he could turn back time, or he wishes he could have another chance, and start over, this time, he would do things right. This time, he would listen to Jack. This time, he would never let Jack out of his sight, he would always be with him. This time, he wouldn't live in sorrow and despair all those years, wishing he could be free, but always afraid of taking that chance.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: myprivatejack on Mar 13, 2008, 09:59 AM
When Ennis says, "Jack...I swear...", he means that he wishes he could turn back time, or he wishes he could have another chance, and start over, this time, he would do things right. This time, he would listen to Jack. This time, he would never let Jack out of his sight, he would always be with him. This time, he wouldn't live in sorrow and despair all those years, wishing he could be free, but always afraid of taking that chance.

Yes,it's what I said in a former post;no matter which interpretation each one of us give to this phrase.The final result is an Ennis commitment with himself and with Jack's memory to change his patterns of life;he would have changed them if he could turn back time,or he would change from this moment onwards.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Matt Nasty on Mar 13, 2008, 11:56 AM
i think it would be impossible to know for sure what ennis was swearing to jack it could have been "jack i swear, if i go thte chance i would do things differently", "jack i swear, i have always loved you", "jack i swear, i wish you were here with me".
we will never know what he was swering it could be anything but at the end of it all i think the words are not the point the real point is the emotion on some level ennis' "jack i sewar..." was some form of emotional commitment something ennis never gave to jack in life.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: athena0204 on Mar 13, 2008, 02:28 PM
i think it would be impossible to know for sure what ennis was swearing to jack it could have been "jack i swear, if i go thte chance i would do things differently", "jack i swear, i have always loved you", "jack i swear, i wish you were here with me".
we will never know what he was swering it could be anything but at the end of it all i think the words are not the point the real point is the emotion on some level ennis' "jack i sewar..." was some form of emotional commitment something ennis never gave to jack in life.

Yeah, it means all those things. It just sums up all the powerful emotions Ennis was feeling, knowing he'd truly loved Jack since the day they'd met all those years ago, knowing he would do things right if he had another chance, knowing that he'd lost the one person he truly loved and regretting that he never told Jack exactly how much he meant to him...although I know Jack knew how much Ennis loved him.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: Matt Nasty on Mar 13, 2008, 06:13 PM
Yeah, it means all those things. It just sums up all the powerful emotions Ennis was feeling, knowing he'd truly loved Jack since the day they'd met all those years ago, knowing he would do things right if he had another chance, knowing that he'd lost the one person he truly loved and regretting that he never told Jack exactly how much he meant to him...although I know Jack knew how much Ennis loved him.

yes jack did no that is one thing that never botherd me i knew ennis never said to jack the words "i love you" but jack just new ennis did i mean it was clear even if ennis didnt admit it to himself in the beggining
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: B_Mountain_Girl on Mar 13, 2008, 07:21 PM
Ennis left Jack’s parent house holding the shirts, the expression of eternal love for him, more important than Jack’s remains.
He had something real to touch and to hold until the end of days.

In my heart I believe “Jack, I swear” means that when Ennis would die, he and those shirts would be cremated and the ashes scattered on BBM as Jack’s final wish, finally together.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Mar 14, 2008, 09:08 AM
Ennis left Jack’s parent house holding the shirts, the expression of eternal love for him, more important than Jack’s remains.
He had something real to touch and to hold until the end of days.

In my heart I believe “Jack, I swear” means that when Ennis would die, he and those shirts would be cremated and the ashes scattered on BBM as Jack’s final wish, finally together.


This is a very romantic interpretation.

But who would scatter their ashes?  Would it be Jr.?

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: myprivatejack on Mar 14, 2008, 10:31 AM
Ennis left Jack’s parent house holding the shirts, the expression of eternal love for him, more important than Jack’s remains.
He had something real to touch and to hold until the end of days.

In my heart I believe “Jack, I swear” means that when Ennis would die, he and those shirts would be cremated and the ashes scattered on BBM as Jack’s final wish, finally together.
This is a very romantic interpretation.

But who would scatter their ashes?  Would it be Jr.?

Wonderful and romantically sadˇ Who did it? Jr. or someone of Ennis relatives who knew his wishes,of course.And maybe he dared to confess the truth at the same time; and Jr. understood it and respected it...
Title: Jack, I swear....
Post by: jedibarrister on Jul 08, 2009, 09:32 PM
Both the story and the screenplay had this as the closing of the saga.  AP says that Jack never asked him to swear and that Ennis wasn't the swearing kind.  Clearly she didn't mean they didn't cuss...cuz they did.  So by "swear", what did AP mean?

Swear has other definitions, including solemn declaration/oath, to give evidence, or testify.  Is this Ennis finally almost saying, for the first time, out loud that he loves Jack?  Or is he promising that he'll never live in fear again?  Or is he promising him that he'll try to live for once?
Title: Re: Jack, I swear....
Post by: lancecowboy on Aug 05, 2009, 10:55 PM
Both the story and the screenplay had this as the closing of the saga.  AP says that Jack never asked him to swear and that Ennis wasn't the swearing kind.  Clearly she didn't mean they didn't cuss...cuz they did.  So by "swear", what did AP mean?

Swear has other definitions, including solemn declaration/oath, to give evidence, or testify.  Is this Ennis finally almost saying, for the first time, out loud that he loves Jack?  Or is he promising that he'll never live in fear again?  Or is he promising him that he'll try to live for once?

I am not sure, but I believe this discussion has been covered in another thread. Perhaps someone can find the appropriate thread and a moderator can merge them.

In short, I recall there was much discussion on the topic.

As you said, the meaning of swearing is not necessary profanity. It could be a solemn promise, an oath even. I think it means a solemn promise because to cowboys like Ennis and Jack, their words were sufficient, without any swearing. To swear, is to signify an importance that transcends over all else.

To me, "I swear" refers to Ennis' declaration to do right by Jack, to take his ashes one day back to Brokeback Mountain, despite his old man's objection. It is Ennis' way of making up to Jack, for rejecting his sweet life, so that one day, he and Jack can share sweet eternity together on Brokeback Mountain.

Just my two bits worth.
Title: Re: Jack, I swear....
Post by: jackster on Aug 06, 2009, 05:22 AM
To me, "I swear" refers to Ennis' declaration to do right by Jack, to take his ashes one day back to Brokeback Mountain, despite his old man's objection. It is Ennis' way of making up to Jack, for rejecting his sweet life, so that one day, he and Jack can share sweet eternity together on Brokeback Mountain.

Beautifully put Andrew (as usual). And yes, this topic has been discussed a lot at http://ennisjack.com/index.php?topic=4966.210 (http://ennisjack.com/index.php?topic=4966.210). You might want to take a peek at the beginning of this thread LC as it was started early, 30 Dec 2005, by a Vancouverite, with a very touching essay that en capsules the way this movie has touched so many of our lives.
Title: Re: Jack, I swear....
Post by: lancecowboy on Aug 06, 2009, 09:58 AM
Beautifully put Andrew (as usual). And yes, this topic has been discussed a lot at http://ennisjack.com/index.php?topic=4966.210 (http://ennisjack.com/index.php?topic=4966.210). You might want to take a peek at the beginning of this thread LC as it was started early, 30 Dec 2005, by a Vancouverite, with a very touching essay that en capsules the way this movie has touched so many of our lives.

Thanks, Jackster, for the kind words, and the direction to that thread. I am late to the movie (Sept, 2007) and this forum. There are still threads that I have not fully explored. Looking at that thread, I realized that during 'em early days of PBS, I only touched on it briefly. It's good to revisit with a fresh and more relaxed attitude.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: lancecowboy on Aug 06, 2009, 10:12 AM
Thanks, Jackster, for pointing out this thread and this post in particular. However, as I tried posting to it, I got the following message:
Quote
The topic or board you are looking for appears to be either missing or off limits to you.

So I am posting my reply here instead:

Howdy bhebbe,

Hmmm, I didn't think of the story as having the two parts you described until you described it.  I didn't notice Ennis asking more questions in the movie or speaking more affectionately to Jack than he always have done.  I did noticed that he withdrew more and more into himself towards the end of the movie to the point it looks like it pains him to speak. 

But, I would agree with you that the relationship was going in a positive direction since Ennis decided to dump his second girlfriend after the last meeting with Jack.  I don't know whether he would ever dump Jack in years to come as all indications showed that not only he has spent the last twenty years seeing Jack, but he also looked quite excited to see Jack's final postcard. 

Yes! Now that you mentioned it, Ennis was happy, and "quite excited" walking out of the post office with that postcard. The subtle body language of Heath's performance at that moment, light on his feet, with a spring in his step, a hint of a smile walking into the sunlit afternoon promised a happy time. The contrast, as the significance of that word stamped on the card, as we see his shoulders hunched and collapsed, held deathly still, shocked, makes the preceding moment of hope and desires coming to a crashing halt. It was genius.

We are never given the reasons why Ennis decided to go cold turkey on his second girlfriend and like most of the movie, it is up to our interpretation.  My interpretation is that he didn't wish to live a lie anymore and hurt the people around him.  One would have thought that he would have learnt his lesson after Alma, but he went on dating a girl again.  We are also not told why he would do that, but perhaps he still has not learnt his lesson the first time.   However, there was something about his last meeting with Jack that made him change his mind regarding his relationship with the new girl in his life.  He didn't want to date her anymore. 

And we might never know why, whether it's because

1 - he wants to live more honestly.

2 - he realized that he does not need to lead life the way he's been told how and he began thinking outside the box.

3 - he wishes to spend the rest of his days with Jack and realizes that in order to do this, he needs to dump her.

4 - he realized that he cannot spend the rest of his life living the way he is now and needs to make some changes to improve his life and how he feels about himself.

5 - he can't bring himself to hurt people anymore after Jack expressed the pain and suffering caused by enduring the past twenty years, that he does not want another the same way he has hurt Jack, the one he truly loves. 

I'm leaning towards this last interpretation because I emphatize the pain other people experience, whether I like it or not. However, one thing is for change, after the last meeting with Jack, Ennis did change and this is reflected in his choice to quit the second girl like a bad habit.  How he changed is up to our interpretation. 

I am of the opinion that the reasons are closer to 3 and 4. There may be elements of 5 as well, but his ignoring her messages and notes, avoiding her calls, hurt her just as much. If he was truly concerned for Cassie, he would have been more straight forward with Cassie and broke off with her. Then again, it may be simply his way, and she got the message in any case, and it still hurt her.


That brings me to ask, why do you think Ennis broke up with his second girlfriend?  Or more precisely, what do you think it was about his last meeting with Jack that made him change his mind to dump the girl?

Tell me what you think.   ;D

Ryan


It's why I lean towards 3 and 4. The final confrontation made him more aware of his love for Jack. With the child support payment, the money he spent with Cassie makes it even more difficult for him to get away with Jack to some place warm. Ennis was ready to move closer to Jack. But he moves slowly, as Jack knew so well in those twenty years.
Title: Re: Jack, I swear....
Post by: ethan on Aug 06, 2009, 10:50 AM
Beautifully put Andrew (as usual). And yes, this topic has been discussed a lot at http://ennisjack.com/index.php?topic=4966.210 (http://ennisjack.com/index.php?topic=4966.210).

The quoted thread has been merged with this thread. LC, the post jackster referred to is the first post of this thread. Thanks!
Title: Re: Jack, I swear....
Post by: lancecowboy on Aug 06, 2009, 01:39 PM
The quoted thread has been merged with this thread. LC, the post jackster referred to is the first post of this thread. Thanks!

Thanks, Ethan. It's amazing reading my own words from not so long ago. It's like a life time away.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: jedibarrister on Aug 06, 2009, 02:55 PM
I posted this awhile ago on IMDB (this version is updated a little) ...

Considering that this line comes from Ennis (Ennis being ... well Ennis) , I can't help but get the feeling that when he says "Jack' I swear" that he says it without really knowing how to finish it. In other words he is swearing to him, but he doesn't know why. After all he is just start to come out of denial in regards to his feeling for Jack and you know that feeling when you want to comfort someone, to tell them that everything is going to be alright but you can't find the words that you want to say to them? I think that's how he feels in that scene. He wants to swear something to Jack but can't find the word to say it.

Anybody?

I subscribe to this to an extent.  Because at that point, what promises can he make Jack that will mean anything?  The time to come through and make/keep promises were in the past.  All he had now were memories and a crappy trailer he'd be losing b/c the job that he wouldn't give up for more time with Jack was giving him up instead.  So there were many ways to finish the sentence: Jack, I swear...


But does it matter what he would've said?  Or does it matter that Jack will never hear him say it?
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Aug 07, 2009, 06:56 AM
I subscribe to this to an extent.  Because at that point, what promises can he make Jack that will mean anything?  The time to come through and make/keep promises were in the past.  All he had now were memories and a crappy trailer he'd be losing b/c the job that he wouldn't give up for more time with Jack was giving him up instead.  So there were many ways to finish the sentence: Jack, I swear...

  • I did love you
  • I am sorry
  • I'd do things differently
  • I'll never forget you

But does it matter what he would've said?  Or does it matter that Jack will never hear him say it?

I agree to this, except with the "did" in "I did love you". 

In a way, it mattered more to say it to himself (i.e., Ennis).  Likewise, Jack must have known it all along.   
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: jedibarrister on Aug 19, 2009, 11:42 PM
MPJ, would you think that the scene in the closet in Jack's room could be interpreted as the first "I swear" scene -- or at least the wordless precursor?    And if I understand what you say here, the last "I swear" scene is only half the story -- that it was made only possible by what happened in LF...

Was that scene a meta-statement?  Did Ennis show real depth of love and emotion for Jack because he was "in the closet" and hence safe from public scrutiny and view?
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: lancecowboy on Aug 20, 2009, 01:18 AM
Was that scene a meta-statement?  Did Ennis show real depth of love and emotion for Jack because he was "in the closet" and hence safe from public scrutiny and view?

That's an interesting point of view. I had thought of that, in the sense that the two shirts were "in the closet", but I think Ennis wasn't hiding the two shirts, as Jack did, in a hidden corner of the closet, but in plain view, next to a postcard of Brokeback Mountain.

I don't recall if he opened the closet in that scene, but he put away Junior's sweater in it. Presumably, when Junior comes to visit again, he would fetch the sweater, and the shirts would be visible to Junior in that tiny trailer. I suspect Ennis wasn't hiding his love for Jack anymore, but simply keeping it private, without trumpeting it to the whole world, but also not denying it from his loved ones.

There is probably an unspoken understanding between him and Junior that he and Jack worked together one summer on Brokeback Mountain, and their relationship meant a lot to him. As others pointed out, "This Kurt, does he love you?" conveyed automatically to Junior that Ennis was also thinking of the love he lost.

So, in response to your question, I think that scene is indeed a meta-statement on the closet, and the state of Ennis being out of the closet to himself and his loved ones. The love and acceptance from Jack's Ma gave him strength, and comfort to be the man that he is, loving Jack. The fact that the door can still be closed to the outside world, is a statement that Ennis is not out, in the sense of joining the Pride parade anytime soon.

I don't know if that makes sense.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Aug 20, 2009, 06:45 AM
Was that scene a meta-statement?  Did Ennis show real depth of love and emotion for Jack because he was "in the closet" and hence safe from public scrutiny and view?

Interesting.

Extending the metaphore, I would think that he was in an "open" closet.  I think he was out of public "scrutiny", and yet he probably was at the point of not caring as much.  I think his decision to ask for the shirts would have signaled something in this direction.  He could have chosen not to have taken them -- the significance would have perhaps been known to Mrs. Twist, in not John Twist (although both may have had an inkling).  But he did.  And when he faced the Twists, it was clear that he had been weeping.  At that point, perhaps he didn't really care to show his emotions?

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: vedrana on Aug 20, 2009, 07:43 AM
Interesting.

Extending the metaphore, I would think that he was in an "open" closet.  I think he was out of public "scrutiny", and yet he probably was at the point of not caring as much.  I think his decision to ask for the shirts would have signaled something in this direction.  He could have chosen not to have taken them -- the significance would have perhaps been known to Mrs. Twist, in not John Twist (although both may have had an inkling).  But he did.  And when he faced the Twists, it was clear that he had been weeping.  At that point, perhaps he didn't really care to show his emotions?

I think so too!

IMO, after Jack died, the priorities in his life changed forever. He treasured the memory of Jack without any fear, or hiding, which was his main preoccupation, when Jack was alive and when someone could've discover about two of them. Now, even if anyone knew something, it was a part of his past and couldn't hurt him/or Jack any more.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Aug 24, 2009, 07:11 AM
I think so too!

IMO, after Jack died, the priorities in his life changed forever. He treasured the memory of Jack without any fear, or hiding, which was his main preoccupation, when Jack was alive and when someone could've discover about two of them. Now, even if anyone knew something, it was a part of his past and couldn't hurt him/or Jack any more.


Yes, I do believe that there was a fundamental shift within Ennis after Jack's death.  The "I swear..." part is a significant though tantalizing hint of this shidt, and I tend to think that it was for the better, rather than for the worse...

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: vedrana on Aug 24, 2009, 07:35 AM
Yes, I do believe that there was a fundamental shift within Ennis after Jack's death.  The "I swear..." part is a significant though tantalizing hint of this shidt, and I tend to think that it was for the better, rather than for the worse...



Would you say that the meaning of it was in fact the love statement... it was always my impression!
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Aug 31, 2009, 07:42 AM
Would you say that the meaning of it was in fact the love statement... it was always my impression!

I've always interpreted it as a kind of marriage vow.  :)

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: vedrana on Aug 31, 2009, 07:50 AM
I've always interpreted it as a kind of marriage vow.  :)



Oh!

Hm... it could be a vow, but marriage vow.. :s)

Maybe a vow of eternal fidelity and devotion of any kind?
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: myprivatejack on Aug 31, 2009, 10:38 AM
Oh!

Hm... it could be a vow, but marriage vow.. :s)

Maybe a vow of eternal fidelity and devotion of any kind?

IMO,these words mean a lot of things,both referring to Jack and to Ennis future change of behaviour.As regards to this "marriage vow",even if it couldn't be a real one,why couldn't it be in an emotional sense?.Why couldn't Ennis make a vow of faithfulness and eternal love and care,just like the husband and wife make in a conventional wedding?.What really matters is not the ceremony,nor the papers,but LOVE.And this was present between them and in Ennis forever... :\'(
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: vedrana on Aug 31, 2009, 11:02 AM
IMO,these words mean a lot of things,both referring to Jack and to Ennis future change of behaviour.As regards to this "marriage vow",even if it couldn't be a real one,why couldn't it be in an emotional sense?.Why couldn't Ennis make a vow of faithfulness and eternal love and care,just like the husband and wife make in a conventional wedding?.What really matters is not the ceremony,nor the papers,but LOVE.And this was present between them and in Ennis forever... :\'(

MPJ  :ghug:!

Yes, that was my point exactly. LOVE statement coming form Ennis, sad and exhausted by a lonely life, feeling partially guilty for losing Jack and finally realizing that he had actually loved Jack all those years and that he will love him forever!!! That kind of love statement, in the case of strong and enduring character like Ennis was /is, can also mean a vow of devotion and fidelity forever! And if we really want to translate that into the words of marriage vows- they are the same vows ... if not Ennis's "I swear" even more powerful!  <^( <^( <^(
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: myprivatejack on Aug 31, 2009, 11:07 AM
MPJ  :ghug:!

Yes, that was my point exactly. LOVE statement coming form Ennis, sad and exhausted by a lonely life, feeling partially guilty for losing Jack and finally realizing that he had actually loved Jack all those years and that he will love him forever!!! That kind of love statement, in the case of strong and enduring character like Ennis was /is, can also mean a vow of devotion and fidelity forever! And if we really want to translate that into the words of marriage vows- they are the same vows ... if not Ennis's "I swear" even more powerful!  <^( <^( <^(

Yes,and as you say,in the case of persons like Ennis,this means a stronger and never endless feeling.That's the power of loveˇ-even if it's too late...-.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Sep 01, 2009, 08:38 AM
Oh!

Hm... it could be a vow, but marriage vow.. :s)

Maybe a vow of eternal fidelity and devotion of any kind?

Well, this was exactly what I was getting at.  ;)  But I would like to use the image of a marriage, given the context of that scene (Jr's marriage.)

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: vedrana on Sep 03, 2009, 02:13 AM
Well, this was exactly what I was getting at.  ;)  But I would like to use the image of a marriage, given the context of that scene (Jr's marriage.)



I see what you mean - that he was influenced by Junior's news and made a vow to Jack himself.... That's also acceptable.

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Sep 03, 2009, 06:55 AM
I see what you mean - that he was influenced by Junior's news and made a vow to Jack himself.... That's also acceptable.

OT: although that last scene was not in the ss, I found it incredibly crafted -- certainly an addition that does full justice to the original.

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: vedrana on Sep 03, 2009, 07:17 AM
OT: although that last scene was not in the ss, I found it incredibly crafted -- certainly an addition that does full justice to the original.



I see much more things to add to the original... ::)

Yet, we have to cope with what we have.  :-\\
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Sep 04, 2009, 07:16 AM
I see much more things to add to the original... ::)

Yet, we have to cope with what we have.  :-\\

In any case, I think that the use of the words "I swear..." after a scene revolving around love, commitment, and marriage, is very strongly suggestive suggestive, don't you agree?  ;)


Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: myprivatejack on Sep 04, 2009, 10:59 AM
In any case, I think that the use of the words "I swear..." after a scene revolving around love, commitment, and marriage, is very strongly suggestive suggestive, don't you agree?  ;)

I agree,yes...These two words are taking inside them a lot of love and commitment;always and forever,although their greatest contradiction-tragic contradiction-is that they're a post-mortem vow... :\'( :\'( :\'(
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: athena0204 on Sep 05, 2009, 02:53 PM
"Jack, I swear that I've always loved you, and I always will."
"Jack, I swear that if I could start over, I would do things differently this time, I would listen to my heart."
Ennis finally realizes that his fear kept him a prisoner all those years, and kept him miserable, living only for the few weeks every year he would be with Jack. He realizes that Jack was right, they didn't have to accept and feel trapped. That it could be like this, always, just like Jack had said. He finally gets the courage, but it's too late Jack is gone from this world. But there would be a day where they would reunite in a better place and be together forever this time without all the pain and heartache and cruelty of this world. After all they suffered, they deserve that eternal happiness. And their love transcends just one life and one world, it is eternal, their souls are forever bonded. "Jack, I swear this love is eternal."
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: jstephens9 on Sep 05, 2009, 03:11 PM
"Jack, I swear that I've always loved you, and I always will."
"Jack, I swear that if I could start over, I would do things differently this time, I would listen to my heart."
Ennis finally realizes that his fear kept him a prisoner all those years, and kept him miserable, living only for the few weeks every year he would be with Jack. He realizes that Jack was right, they didn't have to accept and feel trapped. That it could be like this, always, just like Jack had said. He finally gets the courage, but it's too late Jack is gone from this world. But there would be a day where they would reunite in a better place and be together forever this time without all the pain and heartache and cruelty of this world. After all they suffered, they deserve that eternal happiness. And their love transcends just one life and one world, it is eternal, their souls are forever bonded. "Jack, I swear this love is eternal."

Is this what the window looking out into the field represents that one day they will reunite in a better place. That last scene looking out into that field through the window has always baffled me. It seems to represent something very important.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: vedrana on Sep 05, 2009, 03:46 PM
"Jack, I swear that I've always loved you, and I always will."
"Jack, I swear that if I could start over, I would do things differently this time, I would listen to my heart."

Ennis finally realizes that his fear kept him a prisoner all those years, and kept him miserable, living only for the few weeks every year he would be with Jack. He realizes that Jack was right, they didn't have to accept and feel trapped. That it could be like this, always, just like Jack had said. He finally gets the courage, but it's too late Jack is gone from this world. But there would be a day where they would reunite in a better place and be together forever this time without all the pain and heartache and cruelty of this world. After all they suffered, they deserve that eternal happiness. And their love transcends just one life and one world, it is eternal, their souls are forever bonded. "Jack, I swear this love is eternal."

Beautifully said Athena! Especially the red part! You melt my heart!  <^( <^( <^( <^( <^( (t)
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: vedrana on Sep 05, 2009, 03:50 PM
Is this what the window looking out into the field represents that one day they will reunite in a better place. That last scene looking out into that field through the window has always baffled me. It seems to represent something very important.

Yes, I tend to accept that! Looking farther than the trailer window, much much farther - to another space and time, the one where and when they'll finally be one!  <^(
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: athena0204 on Sep 05, 2009, 10:59 PM
Is this what the window looking out into the field represents that one day they will reunite in a better place. That last scene looking out into that field through the window has always baffled me. It seems to represent something very important.

Yes, that scene is very poignant. I feel that's what it represents too. That one day, far beyond this world, in another time and in another place they will be together again. Their love is truly eternal, and you know that Ennis will live out the rest of this life looking forward to the day he will be reunited with his soulmate.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: ethan on Sep 05, 2009, 11:01 PM
you know that Ennis will live out the rest of this life looking forward to the day he will be reunited with his soulmate.

This line just brings tears in my eyes. It didn't have to be that way.  :\'(
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: athena0204 on Sep 05, 2009, 11:13 PM
This line just brings tears in my eyes. It didn't have to be that way.  :\'(

It could have been different in this life, but their love surpasses and transcends far beyond this world and this life, and Ennis would always take comfort in knowing that he would see his beloved Jack again.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: jstephens9 on Sep 06, 2009, 09:47 AM
I am glad others of you see this scene looking out the window that way too. When I first saw it I thought it meant that Jack was still out there somewhere alive. But in a way it does mean that, but possibly it is his spirit that is still alive especially in Ennis' heart.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: athena0204 on Sep 06, 2009, 10:21 AM
The scene is one of looking away into a far-off place, transcending that field, that horizon, and this world. In this world, Jack is gone, but his spirit remains in Ennis's heart. But somewhere out there in another world, another plane, another dimension,  Jack is alive and waiting for Ennis to join him again. And the same goes for Ennis, in that wherever Jack is, Ennis is in his heart as well, and they are both waiting for the time when they will be reunited.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: jstephens9 on Sep 06, 2009, 12:58 PM
The scene is one of looking away into a far-off place, transcending that field, that horizon, and this world. In this world, Jack is gone, but his spirit remains in Ennis's heart. But somewhere out there in another world, another plane, another dimension,  Jack is alive and waiting for Ennis to join him again. And the same goes for Ennis, in that wherever Jack is, Ennis is in his heart as well, and they are both waiting for the time when they will be reunited.

I don't think you could have expressed that any better. No only do I think that is true, but the way you put it is abolutely incredible. You're bringing tears to my eyes  :\'(
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: myprivatejack on Sep 07, 2009, 11:08 AM
I don't think you could have expressed that any better. No only do I think that is true, but the way you put it is abolutely incredible. You're bringing tears to my eyes  :\'(

What he saidˇ :\'(  Yes,is something we have discussed in the thread that treats about the kind of comfort Ennis could find in the memories of having lived such a great love and the hope of finding his beloved one more time in a place when they would be happy and free in the end.However,it's something very sad that they hadn't found this happiness together in this world...
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Sep 08, 2009, 07:28 AM
I agree,yes...These two words are taking inside them a lot of love and commitment;always and forever,although their greatest contradiction-tragic contradiction-is that they're a post-mortem vow... :\'( :\'( :\'(

Yes.  It must have made Ennis feel a little bitter to see/hear his daughter make an avowal that he himself couldn't do in jack's lifetime.  But perhaps bitterness is not the correct way of describing something that is closer to the feeling of regret...

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: athena0204 on Sep 08, 2009, 09:17 AM
Yes.  It must have made Ennis feel a little bitter to see/hear his daughter make an avowal that he himself couldn't do in jack's lifetime.  But perhaps bitterness is not the correct way of describing something that is closer to the feeling of regret...



Yeah I don't think it was bitterness, just a lot of sorrow and regret. It's clear he's thinking about Jack, and feeling miserable that he hadn't listened to Jack and listened to his heart all those years ago when he could have belonged to his dreams. He's thinking "I should have told Jack how much I loved him", but of course surely he knew that Jack had known all along how much Ennis loved him. But there is definitely a lot of sorrow and regret and sadness that Ennis feels because he realizes things could have been different, that he didn't have to let his fear keep him a prisoner.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: lancecowboy on Sep 08, 2009, 10:28 AM
Yeah I don't think it was bitterness, just a lot of sorrow and regret. It's clear he's thinking about Jack, and feeling miserable that he hadn't listened to Jack and listened to his heart all those years ago when he could have belonged to his dreams. He's thinking "I should have told Jack how much I loved him", but of course surely he knew that Jack had known all along how much Ennis loved him. But there is definitely a lot of sorrow and regret and sadness that Ennis feels because he realizes things could have been different, that he didn't have to let his fear keep him a prisoner.

I agree with you 100%, Athena. Ennis was overwhelmed with a yearning to love Jack, to show Jack what he felt all those years, but was too afraid, like hugging him face-to-face, which he could only do now with the shirts.

Bitterness has the connotation of resentment, which, in my opinion, is not in Ennis, the man who could stand it, who was happy with beans. Jack was bitter and resentful, especial in his older years, when he lost hope of changing his conditions. Ennis was bitter in the final confrontation, responding to Jack's "I wish I knew how to quit you." But Ennis was past bitterness when he sent and received that postcard, when he phoned Loreen, when he went to visit Lightning Flats. When he sat at that kitchen table facing the old man, he was desperate to hold on to something of Jack. The depth of his grief made the gift of the shirts by Jack's Ma all the more powerful, and life-changing. From the moment Ennis descended those stairs with their own rhythm, he was a changed man.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Sep 09, 2009, 06:59 AM

Yes, thinking about this right now, I do feel that bitterness is not the correct way to describe it.  It is a deep and profoundly felt sadness that comes from an equally deep and profoundly felt regret.  And in the midst of that deep sadness, there is the glimmer of a newfound hope.

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: lancecowboy on Sep 09, 2009, 09:10 AM
Yes, thinking about this right now, I do feel that bitterness is not the correct way to describe it.  It is a deep and profoundly felt sadness that comes from an equally deep and profoundly felt regret.  And in the midst of that deep sadness, there is the glimmer of a newfound hope.

I love that phrase. It reminds me of Romeo and Juliet...what light through yonder window breaks?  <^(
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Sep 10, 2009, 07:17 AM
I love that phrase. It reminds me of Romeo and Juliet...what light through yonder window breaks?  <^(

Thanks lance!  Now that you mentioned it -- it certainly does!  :)

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: lancecowboy on Sep 10, 2009, 08:28 AM
Thanks lance!  Now that you mentioned it -- it certainly does!  :)

It has a rhythm all its own, like those rickety stairs up the Twist house in Lightning Flats.

What light through yonder window breaks
In that empty trailer outside Riverton
The glimmer of a new found hope, I swear.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: atalley on Sep 10, 2009, 11:34 PM
I agree with you 100%, Athena. Ennis was overwhelmed with a yearning to love Jack, to show Jack what he felt all those years, but was too afraid, like hugging him face-to-face, which he could only do now with the shirts.

Bitterness has the connotation of resentment, which, in my opinion, is not in Ennis, the man who could stand it, who was happy with beans. Jack was bitter and resentful, especial in his older years, when he lost hope of changing his conditions. Ennis was bitter in the final confrontation, responding to Jack's "I wish I knew how to quit you." But Ennis was past bitterness when he sent and received that postcard, when he phoned Loreen, when he went to visit Lightning Flats. When he sat at that kitchen table facing the old man, he was desperate to hold on to something of Jack. The depth of his grief made the gift of the shirts by Jack's Ma all the more powerful, and life-changing. From the moment Ennis descended those stairs with their own rhythm, he was a changed man.

I love this!  Here come the tears...
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: tpe on Sep 11, 2009, 06:59 AM
It has a rhythm all its own, like those rickety stairs up the Twist house in Lightning Flats.

What light through yonder window breaks
In that empty trailer outside Riverton
The glimmer of a new found hope, I swear.

OT: perhaps it is time for you to get back into the pix and poems thread!  :)

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: lancecowboy on Sep 11, 2009, 07:17 AM
OT: perhaps it is time for you to get back into the pix and poems thread!  :)

Double OT: I've stayed out of that thread for precisely the same reason that I stay out of other threads that bring on PBS. Enough tears already. I am taking a break from the pain, and basking for a while in the joy and the sun.

Perhaps later in the winter season when depression hits, and my mood is blue again, the therapeutic process of putting words to feelings will help lift the blues.  :cb: :cr)
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: rdx on Mar 28, 2010, 01:58 PM
Just another € 0.02 worth of information..

In my country the movies on TV are subtitled (thank god) and the translator has had some artistic freedom while typing the last line. Translating it back to English it goes: "Jack, I wish you knew.." [or word by word "Jack, if only you knew.."]. In my mother tongue it makes perfect sense while still leaving the meaning somewhat open and lets the viewer make his/her own conclusions.

***

Someties while watching the film I occasionally put on the French subtitles..Jack saying all the time "M*rde!" and Ennis "On fait quoi maintenant, hein?".

Just to have a little bit of fun with this remarkable and profound film that has affected / will affect so many...
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: lancecowboy on Mar 29, 2010, 07:01 PM
Now you make me very curious about your language, but I also understand your preference for privacy. With the smaller populations in some countries in the north, it is wise.

And to give you back the two cents worth (keeping the difference  :P between cents and Euro) while I appreciate the version "Jack, if only you knew..." I prefer the simpler, yet richer "Jack I swear."

The translator's version points to the past only, and is more restricted than the movie's version, which can also imply a commitment for the future. The more ambiguous version is also consistent with Ang Lee's decision to leave out Jack's murder sequence, except as "thoughts" by Ennis.

This ambiguity allows the audience to choose their own interpretation, and make the movie great. Too much detail can prune out more meaningful possibilities and starve the audience imagination. I think Brokeback Mountain is great art precisely because it stimulates the audience to think, and imagine the meaning behind every word, every scene, every little element in each scene, every word in the scanty dialog.

Welcome rdx and I look forward to more of your thoughts on the movie.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: rimasworld on Mar 29, 2010, 09:11 PM
I agree Lance, I don't think any other movie has ever made me wonder and think as much as this one has. Also, I go back and forth thinking it was this way, no it was that way about so many scenes and what people said, their body language and what was never really ever said but can be interpreted so many different ways. Great work of art.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: lancecowboy on Mar 30, 2010, 07:49 AM
Yes, and I think it is the nature of great art that it captures the essence of the human condition, and giving us BOTH this way AND that way, because truth includes BOTH, and not necessarily one OR the other.

"Jack, I wish you knew..." says so much about the anguish and regret from Ennis...the driving force that is in the heart of his grief.

"Jack, I swear I will never..." also says so much about the potential and possibilities from Ennis...the determination to never make the same mistake, hiding his love for another, and to always hold Jack in memory, to keep faith with his one and only love.

What we see is often one side of the coin, and seeing both sides gives us a more complete picture.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: rdx on Mar 30, 2010, 10:39 AM
Thanks lancecowboy and rimasworld!

The real greatness of the film is as you described: it makes you wonder and it leaves you thinking in a profound manner. After my second time I saw the film, it was on my mind for many many days: not just the last 30 minutes but the whole film.

About the translated line I mentioned earlier: the verb is in the present tense in my mother tongue. That makes perfect sense and expresses Ennis' continuous feelings towards Jack...was/is/will be.

And don't your worry about my language..all in a good time.O0


"I'll just roll up out here, grab 40 winks...and I'll ride out at first light."
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: myprivatejack on Mar 30, 2010, 11:11 AM
Yes,doubtless the story greatness is let an open window to each viewer interpretation,not only in this concrete scene.It's so deep that no matter how "strange" a translation could seem,you will always find a meaning that will makes you think over.In this case,and as LC has said,the Norther European translator has remarked a regret for a past behaviour that was all the contrary to Ennis wishes.In the movie,these enigmatic words look more to the future,when this past behaviour will be changed as a consequence of a bitter and rough learned lesson.Even the strangest Spanish translation (difficult to do it,by the way;Tammy translated into "Jack,there's something to see"...) can reflect Ennis sorrow by seeing time's passing -his daughter is already an adult woman at the point of marrying-and knowing that he won't be able to share it with Jack anymore... :_( 
Anyhow,it's always a good disquisition about love,tolerance,and,above all,human contradictions and behaviour in general.A masterpiece,in sum.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: lancecowboy on Mar 30, 2010, 12:25 PM
Yup. After all these years, still the greatest movie ever made and still learning something new. Thanks rdx.  :c) :t)
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: rdx on Apr 01, 2010, 03:19 PM
Even the strangest Spanish translation (difficult to do it,by the way;Tammy translated into "Jack,there's something to see"...) can reflect Ennis sorrow by seeing time's passing -his daughter is already an adult woman at the point of marrying-and knowing that he won't be able to share it with Jack anymore... :_( 
Anyhow,it's always a good disquisition about love,tolerance,and,above all,human contradictions and behaviour in general.A masterpiece,in sum.

"Jack,there's something to see"...

I think this is a brilliant translation. It's like Jack is reaching to Ennis..telling him what to do. Beautiful!

Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: WildCatIsle on Jul 17, 2010, 08:30 AM
I thought  "Jack, I  swear", in the context of the very end scene.

Alma Jr. announces her marriage  and wishes that Ennis goes wedding. How always, Ennis says NO, but what sees Ennis in Alma Jr. eyes? :  letdown that so many times saw in those of Jack. Ennis does something unusual for his personality, give up its job, to hell!!!, does not want missing few happy moments  gives  life him.

I thought here Ennis does his inside of; now he accepts what never he accepted; he accepts himself.

By this Ennis can swear to Jack; perhaps always he wanted to swear and never he could.
Title: Re: Ennis's last words "Jack, I swear . . . "
Post by: myprivatejack on Jul 19, 2010, 11:35 AM
I thought  "Jack, I  swear", in the context of the very end scene.

Alma Jr. announces her marriage  and wishes that Ennis goes wedding. How always, Ennis says NO, but what sees Ennis in Alma Jr. eyes? :  letdown that so many times saw in those of Jack. Ennis does something unusual for his personality, give up its job, to hell!!!, does not want missing few happy moments  gives  life him.

I thought here Ennis does his inside of; now he accepts what never he accepted; he accepts himself.

By this Ennis can swear to Jack; perhaps always he wanted to swear and never he could.

I completely agree with you WiC ˇ For me this has always been one of the multiples interpretations each one of us can give to these enigmatic words-and also to some other scenes and phrases from the movie-.The one of Ennis commitment with Jack beyond death,in the sense that he wasn't going to repeat one of the mistakes he committed with him;the one of letting him down,of destroying his hopes and happiness with a "no".Mistakes that he compromised not to reapeat with his daughter or any other beloved being anymore.

I have also liked what you have said about Ennis change;; now he accepts what never he accepted; he accepts himself. Yes,that's so true,IMO ˇ.He now comes in terms with himself his faults and his needs,more than never before.That's the only "positive" lesson he could have from having lost what he had loved the most in his life;as it usually happens with all of us,it's such a pity that he had to lose him to realise a lot of realities...