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Offline Gwyllion

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11970 on: Feb 18, 2011, 04:59 PM »
Ennis wakes up in the pup tent.  Something is wrong.  He shivers.  He stumbles outside the tent, the blanket draped around his shoulders.  The world outside has turned into something out of the Chronicles of Narnia!  The ground is covered with snow.  The mountains are iced in white.  Ennis is freezing cold.
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Offline Dangerina

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11971 on: Feb 19, 2011, 07:15 AM »
Ennis comes to Jack and sees him getting ready to raise the camp.
Ennis: What are you doing?
Jack: Aguirre came back, said my uncle didn't die after all. Said to bring them down.
Ennis: Bring them down? Why? It's the middle of August.
Jack: Said there's a storm coming.
Ennis: That snow barely stuck an hour. That son of a bitch is cutting us of a whole month's pay.
Jack: I'll spare you a loan bud, if you're short on cash. I'll give it to you when we get to Signal.
Ennis (hurt): I don't need your money, I ain't in the poor house.
Jack: Alright.
Ennis looks very angry and upset, pecking at the ground with a stick.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11972 on: Feb 22, 2011, 11:31 AM »
Next scene:Jack is finishing his packing when he looks at Ennis,who looks very upset and sad,sitting on the ground.A compassionate love's glance appears in Jack's face; he approaches to his lover wrapping him with the lasso,by trying to make him smile.

-Jack:-Time to get going, cowboy !

Ennis gets up without a word.While he's going down the hill,Jack wrapps his feet with the lasso again,making him fall on the ground.Ennis then grasps the lasso to make Jack fall also.

-Ennis:-This ain't no rodeo, cowboy!

-Jack (falling in the end):-Oh,shit ¡

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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
("If I asked")
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Offline Dangerina

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11973 on: Feb 24, 2011, 08:37 AM »
The boys are rolling down the hill fighting - first playfully, then Ennis gets angry and starts to beat Jack for serious. Jack hits back. When they get back to their feet Jack hits Ennis's nose with the knee, and looks troubled seeing blood on his lover's face. Jack tries to soothe Ennis, caressing his face, but the cowboy won't have, blows his partner a punch, and goes away. Jack is on the ground moaning - this time from pain  :P :(
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Offline myprivatejack

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11974 on: Feb 25, 2011, 12:50 PM »
Next scene: We see them coming down from the mountain on their horses with very serious faces and Jack's with a bruise.In the following scene,there're an awful mess with Aguirre's sheep,that has been mixed with the ones from others owners.Both boys are leaned against a fence while Aguirre is looking at the mess and at them with an angry look.

-Aguirre : -Some of these never went up there with you. Count ain't what I'd hoped for, neither. You ranch stiffs, you ain't never no good.

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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
("If I asked")
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You will be forever in my heart,friends.

Offline Dangerina

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11975 on: Mar 03, 2011, 04:10 AM »
We see the boys parting now. Ennis rummaging his sack looking for the 'lost' shirt:
- Can't imagine I've lost that damned shirt up there.
Jack looks as innocent as he can in a situation like that  >:D and nods. Ennis looks askance at Jack.
Jack:
- Will come back next year?
- Like I said Alma and me are getting married in November, and I'll find myself a ranch job. You?
- Perhaps, if the army don't get me.
- I guess I'll see you round then?
- Right.
They part, Ennis goes along the road, and Jack drives his car away from that place looking at his lover in the rear-view mirror...
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11976 on: Mar 03, 2011, 11:07 AM »
Ennis passes near an alley.Suddenly,he approaches to the wall where he leans,as if he wanted to puke...Instead of this,he bagins to cry desperately and beat the wall with his fist.He longs for Jack,doubtless.A man who is passing near,stops by looking at him.

-Ennis (angrily) :-What the f*** are you looking at? Huh?

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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
("If I asked")
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You will be forever in my heart,friends.

Offline Dangerina

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11977 on: Mar 04, 2011, 02:26 AM »
Next scene takes us way long to the community church where Ennis and Alma are getting married. They both look serious and a bit worried. The priest pronounces the prayer and asks the groom to kiss his bride:
- Or I'll do it for  you.
Ennis leans forth and kisses Alma - carefully, as if touching smth for the first time, but no tenderness or passion sparkle in his eyes.
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Offline myprivatejack

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11978 on: Mar 08, 2011, 11:00 AM »
In the next scenes we see some aspects of the new life of Ennis and Alma.They are falling down an snowy hill and fall laughing and joking.

-Ennis : -You're all right ? Huh? (He begins to thrown some snow to her)

-Alma : -No... Stop! No please, don't! (Both of them laugh).



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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
("If I asked")
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Heathcliff Andrew Ledger (1979-2008)/Rajel Karen Ashkenazi (1986-2008)
You will be forever in my heart,friends.

Offline min

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11979 on: Mar 19, 2011, 06:59 PM »
New scene:   It is a hot and sunny day...Ennis is laying asphalt on a road with another worker.

Worker, in a joking manner:  My old lady's tryin' to get me to quit this job!  Says I'm gettin' too old to be breakin' my back shoveling asphalt...I told her...strong backs & weak minds runs in the family.

He laughs at his own joke and continues:  She didn't think that was too funny.  I told her it keeps me fit!

Ennis, distracted, looks out in the distance but doesn't reply...
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Offline myprivatejack

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11980 on: Mar 22, 2011, 10:55 AM »
New scene: Ennis and Alma are inside the car watching a movie.She is reclined over her husband's shoulder and takes his hand over her belly;we know she's already pregnant.We heard some of the movie's dialogues:
-Morning...
-Morning.
-Pulled in last night? Didn't want to wake you up.
-Oh no, I was just...
-I thought I'd tell you before the Sergeant showed up. Parking this trailer on the beach is illegal.

Next scene:Jack goes to Aguirre's trailer looking for a job.Aguirre receives him with an ironic smile and tone in his voice.
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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
("If I asked")
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Heathcliff Andrew Ledger (1979-2008)/Rajel Karen Ashkenazi (1986-2008)
You will be forever in my heart,friends.

Offline jackster

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11981 on: Apr 14, 2011, 10:16 AM »
new scene: We see Jack's old truck back in Signal, pulls into Aguirre's parking lot with the radio playin'. Then- bang, bang, bang, on Aguiree's door.

AGUIRRE: Yeah!

     Jack enters the little office again.

AGUIRRE: Well look what the wind blew in.

JACK: Hi Mr. Aguirre. Wonderin' if you need any help this summer.

AGUIRRE: You're wastin' you're time here.

JACK: You ain't got nuthin'? Nuthin' up on Brokeback?

AGUIRRE: (snarls) Ain't got no work for you.

    Jack looks a little stunned, quietly shakes his head, turns to leave. At the door, curiosity (and maybe lust) get to him, he turns back around and asks:

JACK: Ennis DelMar ain't been around has he?
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Offline myprivatejack

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11982 on: Apr 14, 2011, 01:19 PM »
-Aguirre (looking ay him ironically and with some depiction) : -You boys sure found a way to make the time pass up there. Twist... you guys wasn't gettin' paid to leave the dogs baby-sit the sheep while you stemmed the rose. Now get the hell out of my trailer.

Jack leaves the trailer feeling devastated and humiliated.
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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
("If I asked")
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Heathcliff Andrew Ledger (1979-2008)/Rajel Karen Ashkenazi (1986-2008)
You will be forever in my heart,friends.

Offline min

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11983 on: Apr 15, 2011, 06:26 PM »
New scene:  Alma is hanging some freshly washed laundry on the line to dry - it is very windy and cold. She sees Ennis's truck, pulling a horse float, approaching from a distance.

New scene:  Ennis enters the house and approaches Alma, who is scrubbing clothes on a washboard at the kitchen sink.  The radio is blaring, the children are crying. Ennis hugs her from behind.

Ennis asks: How are my girls doing?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11984 on: Apr 20, 2011, 09:21 AM »
-Alma : -All right. Jenny's still got a runny nose.

Ennis goes and see the girls,trying to comfort them.

-Alma : -Ennis, could you wipe Alma Jr.'s nose?

-Ennis (very busy holding the two babies): -If I had three hands, I could! Come here, come here. Oh...

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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
("If I asked")
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Heathcliff Andrew Ledger (1979-2008)/Rajel Karen Ashkenazi (1986-2008)
You will be forever in my heart,friends.

Offline jackster

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11985 on: Sep 06, 2011, 09:09 PM »
New scene. Ennis comes into the bedroom wearing his skimpy "wife-beater" undershirt and sexy pajama bottoms, sits down on the bed, tired and bending forward, he exhales and his shirt rises and pajama pull down to give us a tantalizing view of . . .  :d). Alma comes into the room, and in a recreation of the Dozy Embrace pose, puts her arms around Ennis and asks:

ALMA: Girls alright?

ENNIS: Yeah. Jenny stopped her coughin'. I should take the girls inta town this weekend, get 'em an ice cream . . . . sumthin.
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Offline myprivatejack

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11986 on: Sep 07, 2011, 09:54 AM »
-Alma (kissing and caressing him):-Ennis, can't remove to town ? I'm tired of these lonesome old ranches. No one for Alma Junior to play with. Besides, I'm scared for Jenny...scared if she has another one of them bad asthma spells.

-Ennis : -No, rent in town is too high...

-Alma : -There's a cheap place in Riverton, over the Laundromat. I bet I could fix it up real nice.

-Ennis (looking a little bored) : -I bet you could fix this place up real nice if you wanted to.

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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
("If I asked")
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Heathcliff Andrew Ledger (1979-2008)/Rajel Karen Ashkenazi (1986-2008)
You will be forever in my heart,friends.
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