Gawd!!!... I love this forum....
There are just so many good quotes and scenes that just tore at my heart and sent me ashiverin'!!!
I wanted to add something else to scruffy's great observation of Ennis' last line:
"Jack, I swear..."
You know in the movie and the short story it was left hanging, because we know what the feeling Ennis must have, but it won't be released... so we won't be released either.
... BUT.... take a look at what *scruffy* did, and I thought, whoa... that's brilliant!!
"Jack, I swear."
There is no hanging ellipsis... Scruffy suggests that it is a pledge of sort to another person... and I thought that was so cool, because it adds another depth to his love for Jack *sob*
We can put back the ellipsis, but now it put things in a whole new light... so I thought I would post my thinking about the immediate scene right at that last line (thanks scruffy!!):
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As Ennis opened the little closet in his trailer, he gently, but firmly,
straightened the shirts on the makeshift hook: a single finishing nail
driven in just enough to hold. He had thought he had had a shirt
missing for the darndest time. Then just after Jack's death, he found
it while visiting Jack's parents. The shirts were up in Jack's room in
that hide-away little corner of the closet. There neatly pressed and
hanging on a single hanger was Jack's blue shirt, still bloodied from
the Brokeback days and Ennis' missing black and white plaid shirt, like
a second skin, tucked inside. Nothing could prepare Ennis for that
flood of memories as he held those shirts, smelled it and then silently
collapsed to his knees.
With the shirts in his trailer, Ennis has since then placed his white
and black plaid shirt over Jack's, like the wings of a protecting angel
around a precious soul.
This arrangement did right by Ennis as his eyes ran across the shirts to
the hanger to the finishing nail... and then to the picture of Brokeback
Mountain. He took it all in, his eyes filling to the brim.
"Jack, I swear..."
Ennis had a whole MOUNTAIN of things to say, but what he said was
enough, because it was his turn to take care of Jack... that
sweet-stinkin' guy Jack... the only thing he had now is this private bible,
a testament to his loving truth of Jack.
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What do y'all think?
Peace,
Frank