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jackster · « **Reply #10140 on:** Aug 29, 2007, 08:51 AM »

Ennis smiles at Jack, then looks at Alma:

Ennis could feel the vibration of the floor from Jack's shaking,
is eager to leave:

"Jack ‘n me is goin’ out an get a drink.
Might not get back tonight,
we get to drinkin' and talkin’ an all."

chameau · « **Reply #10141 on:** Aug 29, 2007, 09:36 AM »

Alma:

Sure enough.

myprivatejack · « **Reply #10142 on:** Aug 29, 2007, 10:08 AM »

Jack and Ennis go out while Alma is stunned.We see a nocturne view of a motel and after that our two heroes in bed, strongly embraced.Concretely a foreground of Jack that approaches his face to Ennis hair and says:Four years,damn¡

jackster · « **Reply #10143 on:** Aug 29, 2007, 12:14 PM »

Ennis:

Yeah, four years.

Didn't think I'd hear from you again.
Figured you was sore about that punch.

Chico · « **Reply #10144 on:** Aug 29, 2007, 01:23 PM »

Jack: 'Naaaa....well, that next summer I drove back up to Brokeback, talked to Aguirre 'bout a job, an' he told me you hadn't been back, so I left. Went down to Texas for rodeoin'...'s how I met Lureen. Made two thousand dollars bull-ridin' that year, nearly starved. Lureen's ol' man...makes serious money. Farm machine business....'course he hates my guts.

chameau · « **Reply #10145 on:** Aug 29, 2007, 04:38 PM »

Ennis:

Army didn't get you?

jackster · « **Reply #10146 on:** Aug 29, 2007, 05:52 PM »

Jack:

No, too busted up. That rodeoing ain't what it was in my daddy's day.

(Ennis interjects: Nope.)

Got out while I could still walk. (Ennis: Hmmm)

Swear to God I didn't know we's gonna' get into this again (pause) . . . .

Ah yes I did, I redlined it all the way, couldn't get here fast enough (chuckles).

What about you? . . .

Chico · « **Reply #10147 on:** Aug 29, 2007, 06:13 PM »

Ennis struggles with his answer, "Me?, ahh, I dunno...."

Jack whispers in his ear in a hot, soft and sexy voice.

"Ol' Brokeback got us good, don't it?"

chameau · « **Reply #10148 on:** Aug 29, 2007, 07:03 PM »

Jack: So what're we gonna do now?

JT · « **Reply #10149 on:** Aug 29, 2007, 11:14 PM »

Ennis: I doubt there nothin' we can do. Now, I'm stuck here with what I got. Making a living is about all the time I got.

proulxfan · « **Reply #10150 on:** Aug 30, 2007, 06:17 AM »

Del Mar apartment: Riverton, Wyoming

Alma sits at kitchen table drinking coffee. Looks tense, eyes red-rimmed as if she has been crying.

Ennis comes in the door, hurriedly begins packing up clothes etc.

Ennis:
"Me and Jack's heading up to the mountains for a day or two. Do a little fishin'."

Chico · « **Reply #10151 on:** Aug 30, 2007, 09:56 AM »

Alma looks out the window and sees Mr. Sexy-in-a-devil's-red-shirt leaning against his truck in an exquisitely alluring come-jump-my-bones pose.

Alma: 'You know, your friend could come in and have a cup of coffee."

jackster · « **Reply #10152 on:** Aug 31, 2007, 04:18 AM »

Ennis (as if this is explanation enough):

He's from Texas.

bruxa23 · « **Reply #10153 on:** Aug 31, 2007, 04:21 AM »

Alma:Texans don't drink coffee?

jackster · « **Reply #10154 on:** Aug 31, 2007, 01:43 PM »

Alma:

You sure that foreman won't fire you for takin' off?

Chico · « **Reply #10155 on:** Aug 31, 2007, 02:01 PM »

Ennis: "Y' know, that foreman, he owes me. I...I worked thru a blizzard last Christmas, y' remember that?" Ennis said as he picked up his fishing pole, sounding like he didn't even believe himself. He was breathing hard from excitment.

"Besides, I'll only be a coupla days," rushing out of the bedroom, clearing his throat as he escaped Alma, a look of abject misery on her face.

chameau · « **Reply #10156 on:** Sep 03, 2007, 08:41 PM »

Alma Jr.

Bring fish Daddy, a big one!

myprivatejack · « **Reply #10157 on:** Sep 04, 2007, 01:24 PM »

Ennis takes the little girl in his arms,kisses her and gives her to Alma,who is at the point of start crying.Ennis also kisses her and says:See you on Sunday.Then he leaves,while Alma embraces the baby,already crying.

jackster · « **Reply #10158 on:** Sep 04, 2007, 07:37 PM »

Jack (as he crushes his cigarette under his boot and gets in the truck cab):

I'm starving, wanna' get somethin' ta eat?

Ennis (putting his gear in the truck):

Yup.

Chico · « **Reply #10159 on:** Sep 05, 2007, 10:44 AM »

New scene: Jack's red and white truck rolls down the highway toward the mountains. We see it pull up to a lake and our two boys depart the truck.

"Last one in...!" one of them shouts, as they strip down to starkers.

We are then treated to an amazing sight

as both boys run and jump off the cliff into the lake, whoopin' and hollerin' as they surface in the cold water....

hpv · « **Reply #10160 on:** Sep 05, 2007, 12:22 PM »

New scene , night at a campsite,Ennis laying, looking up..

Jack:Is there anything interesting up there in heaven?

jackster · « **Reply #10161 on:** Sep 05, 2007, 02:51 PM »

Ennis:

Just sendin' up a prayer of thanks.

proulxfan · « **Reply #10162 on:** Sep 05, 2007, 02:54 PM »

Jack:

"For what??"

myprivatejack · « **Reply #10163 on:** Sep 05, 2007, 02:59 PM »

-For your forgettin´to bring that harmonica-answers Ennis,wrinkling.

Chico · « **Reply #10164 on:** Sep 05, 2007, 03:15 PM »

(Jack chuckles, and Ennis finishes, "I'm enjoyin' the peace 'n' quiet.")

Jack says, gently, running his fingernail around the label of his beer bottle, a small, wistful smile on his face:

"You know, it could be like this, just like this, always."

jackster · « **Reply #10165 on:** Sep 05, 2007, 04:09 PM »

Ennis (with a sudden look of concern on his face):

Yeah, how do ya' figure that?

Chico · « **Reply #10166 on:** Sep 05, 2007, 04:45 PM »

"Well, what if you an' me had a little ranch, somewhere...little... cow 'n' calf operation. Be a sweet life. An', hell...Lureen's ol' man, you bet he'd give me a down payment to get lost...I mean he more or less already said it." Jack's luminous eyes looked hopefully at Ennis.

jackster · « **Reply #10167 on:** Sep 05, 2007, 05:21 PM »

Ennis (looking at Jack with sorrow in his eyes):

No, I . . . (Ennis gets up and sits close to Jack)

I told you it ain't gonna be that way . . .

hpv · « **Reply #10168 on:** Sep 06, 2007, 02:32 AM »

Ennis: What I'm sayin', you got your wife and baby down in Texas, I got my life in Riverton.

bruxa23 · « **Reply #10169 on:** Sep 06, 2007, 04:47 AM »

Jack: Is that so? You and Alma, that's a life?

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