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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10830 on: Feb 02, 2009, 05:06 PM »

John Twist continues:  He had some half-baked notion the two of you was going to move up here, build a cabin, help run the place.

John gives Ennis a long cold glance and goes on:  Then this spring he's got another fellow that's going to come up here with him, build a cabin and help run the place.   Some ranch neighbor of his from down in Texas...he's going to split up with his wife and come back here.  A pause, then sarcastically:  So he says.  But like most of Jack's ideas, it never come to pass.
[they were] both high school dropout country boys with no prospects, brought up to hard work and privation, both rough-mannered, rough-spoken, inured to the stoic life.   

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10831 on: Feb 03, 2009, 07:37 AM »
(Ennis looks stricken)

JACK'S MA': (trying to comfort Ennis)
I kept his room . . . like it was when he was a boy.
I think he appreciated that.

You are welcome to go up to his room . . . if ya' want.

ENNIS: (softly)
Yeah I'd like that, Thankyou.

« Last Edit: Feb 03, 2009, 08:32 AM by jackster »
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10832 on: Feb 03, 2009, 11:29 AM »
Ennis goes up the stairs and enters into Jack's room.He takes a look of the full room first to take a little cowboy figure in his hands.His eyes are full with tears.He opens the window,as wishing that some fresh air enters into the room and makes him feel a little less drowned...Then,he realises Jack's wardrobe and goes there;he looks and caresses his clothings and boots.Suddenly,he finds the shirts:his and Jack's of the happy times in BBM.He hugs and caresses Jack's shirt and a slight "I love you" comes from his lips. :\'(
Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10833 on: Feb 03, 2009, 01:23 PM »

Ennis, carrying the two shirts, goes downstairs and enters the kitchen.  John Twist is still sitting at the kitchen table.  Ennis turns his body slightly to keep John Twist from seeing the two shirts, but holds them up slightly to show them to Mrs. Twist.  Mrs Twist pulls a paper bag from the counter and puts the two shirts into the bag.

John Twist (cold and angry):  Tell you what, we got a family plot and he's going in it.

Mrs Twist, with her back to her husband, gently hands the bag to Ennis.
[they were] both high school dropout country boys with no prospects, brought up to hard work and privation, both rough-mannered, rough-spoken, inured to the stoic life.   

(BBM short story)

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10834 on: Feb 04, 2009, 02:39 AM »
Ennis (resigned to this fact), nods at OMT:  Yes sir.

Ma Twist (with sympathy):  You come back and see us again.

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10835 on: Feb 04, 2009, 04:15 AM »
ENNIS: (can barely speak, nods his head, says softly)

OK.

       (Ennis exits the door, turns, holding the bag of shirts and whispers to Mrs. Twist)


Thank you for everything.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10836 on: Feb 04, 2009, 11:01 AM »
Next scene: We see Ennis putting some numbers in his letter box,when Junior arrives in her new car.
Ennis:-Well,hey there,Junior.
Jr.:-Hey,Daddy.
Ennis:-Come here.(They kiis and hug each other).
Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10837 on: Feb 04, 2009, 05:19 PM »
Alma Jr. :Like the car?
Ennis:(nods)
Ugh, yeah, is it yours?
"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10838 on: Feb 05, 2009, 08:26 AM »
Alma Jr.: It's Kurt's.

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10839 on: Feb 05, 2009, 10:29 AM »
ENNIS:

I thought you'r seein' . a . Troy.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10840 on: Feb 05, 2009, 11:00 AM »
Alma Jr: (Surprised) Troy?... Daddy that was 2 years ago!
"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10841 on: Feb 05, 2009, 11:08 AM »
Ennis:  Is Troy still playin' baseball?

Alma Jr:  I don't know what Troy's doin' now.  I'm seein' Kurt.

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10842 on: Feb 05, 2009, 02:17 PM »
Ennis-Well,what does Kurt do?
Jr.-Works out in the oil fields.
Ennis-So,he's a roughneck,huh?
Jr.-Yeah.
Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10843 on: Feb 05, 2009, 03:16 PM »

Ennis and Jr. walk slowly toward his trailer. 

Ennis:  Well, you're 19 now...I guess you can do what you want.

Ennis playfully nudges Jr. with his shoulder to her shoulder.
[they were] both high school dropout country boys with no prospects, brought up to hard work and privation, both rough-mannered, rough-spoken, inured to the stoic life.   

(BBM short story)

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10844 on: Feb 05, 2009, 03:41 PM »
Jr:  Sure.

Ennis and Jr go into the trailer.

Jr sits down and takes her jacket off while Ennis gets coffee.

Jr:  Daddy you need more furniture.

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10845 on: Feb 05, 2009, 04:27 PM »
Ennis: well, if you ain't got nothin, you dont need nothin.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10846 on: Feb 05, 2009, 06:06 PM »

Junior is sitting on Ennis' bed.  Ennis hands her a cup then sits in an armless chair facing her.

Ennis (cheerfully):  So, what's the occasion?
[they were] both high school dropout country boys with no prospects, brought up to hard work and privation, both rough-mannered, rough-spoken, inured to the stoic life.   

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10847 on: Feb 06, 2009, 12:22 AM »
ALMA JR. :Me and Kurt...we're getting married .
"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10848 on: Feb 06, 2009, 06:57 AM »
ENNIS: (his face darkens, utters an undecipherable expression of concern)

Wellngh . . . .
Well how long ya' known this guy for?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10849 on: Feb 06, 2009, 08:19 AM »
Alma Jr: About a year.  The wedding 'll be June 5th at the Methodist church... Jenny 'll be singin',... and Monroe's gonna cater the reception...

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10850 on: Feb 06, 2009, 11:09 AM »
Ennis remains thoughtful,with a sad look in his eyes.Then,he says:

-Now,this Kurt fella...he loves you?
Jr.-Yeah,daddy-she smiles-He loves me.
Ennis looks outside the trailer.He seems at the verge of crying.Jr. keeps on talking:
-Was hoping you'd be there.
Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10851 on: Feb 06, 2009, 03:39 PM »
Ennis: Yeah....I think I'm supposed to be on a round-up near the Tetons...
(pauses, thinks, gets up, goes to the fridge)
You know what, I reckon they can find themselves a new cowboy.
"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10852 on: Feb 06, 2009, 05:07 PM »

Ennis takes two glasses from the cabinet and pours a little whiskey (or wine?) in each of them. 

Ennis:  MY LITTLE GIRL is getting married.  Alma Junior smiles at Ennis with love in her eyes.

He walks back over to Jr. and hands her a glass, then sits back down in the chair. 

Ennis raises his glass:  To Alma and Kurt!
[they were] both high school dropout country boys with no prospects, brought up to hard work and privation, both rough-mannered, rough-spoken, inured to the stoic life.   

(BBM short story)

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10853 on: Feb 06, 2009, 05:16 PM »
Alma Jr and Ennis clink their glasses together and take a drink.

New scene:  Ennis stands outside and watches as Alma Jr drives off down the dusty road.

He turns around and goes back inside the trailer

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10854 on: Feb 06, 2009, 05:32 PM »

Ennis walks slowly toward the back of his trailer.  He sees Alma Jr.'s sweater on his bed.   Ennis picks up the sweater and walks quickly to the door.  He opens the door and looks out, but Alma Jr. is gone.

He goes to his little closet, and opens the closet door.  He folds Jr.'s sweater, gives it a little kiss and places it on the top shelf of the closet.
[they were] both high school dropout country boys with no prospects, brought up to hard work and privation, both rough-mannered, rough-spoken, inured to the stoic life.   

(BBM short story)

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10855 on: Feb 06, 2009, 05:40 PM »
As he opens the closet door wider, we see THE SHIRTS, on a wire hanger suspended from a nail.  Next to them is a postcard of BBM tacked to the door.  Ennis has taken his shirt from inside Jack's and tucked Jack's shirt inside his own.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10856 on: Feb 06, 2009, 06:48 PM »

Ennis gently touches THE SHIRTS.  He buttons the top button on Jack's shirt.  Ennis then reaches up and gently straightens the postcard.

With tears in his eyes, Ennis says quietly:  Jack, I swear...

Ennis stands looking at the shirts and the postcard for a few seconds longer, then slowly closes the closet door and walks away.


[they were] both high school dropout country boys with no prospects, brought up to hard work and privation, both rough-mannered, rough-spoken, inured to the stoic life.   

(BBM short story)

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10857 on: Feb 07, 2009, 03:22 PM »
Sorry....but  :\'( :\'( :\'( :\'( :\'( :\'( :\'(
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10858 on: Feb 08, 2009, 02:09 PM »
The credits rolling...
Song.. performed by Willy Nelson,
:
He was a friend of mine..

then Maker Makes by Rufus Wainwright...


The End....... :\'(
"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10859 on: Feb 08, 2009, 02:27 PM »
Be kind ,   rewind... to the very beginning...
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Truck stops and young Ennis jumps out  put his jacket on,  walks towards Aguirre's trailer. 

1963,  Signal, Wyoming

 Train passes............
"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."