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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11010 on: Mar 30, 2009, 02:34 PM »

Aguirre, answers  not even looking at Jack: You're wasting your time here.

Jack, playing nervously with his hat: What,you ain't got nothin'.......  nothin' up on Brokeback?

Aguirre gives Jack a long look: Ain't got no work for YOU.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11011 on: Mar 30, 2009, 11:59 PM »
There is an awkward moment as Jack looks at Aguirre, turns and starts for the door.  He pauses and turns back to Aguirre, and asks:  Ennis del Mar aint been around, has he?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11012 on: Mar 31, 2009, 03:14 AM »

Aguirre : (without even looking at Jack)..... You boys sure found a way to make the time pass up there, (now looking hard at Jack)... Twist, you guys weren't gettin' paid to leave the dogs babysit the sheep while you stemmed the rose......, now get the hell out of my trailer. (Jack turns around and leaves slamming the door)
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11013 on: Mar 31, 2009, 07:54 AM »
New Scene.  Alma is putting up some laundry to dry.  She spies Ennis's truck approaching from the distance...

New scene.  Alma is back inside the ranch house, doing more laundry at the kitchen sink.  The radio blares as she scrubs clothes on the washboard.  From the doorway, we see Ennis get out of the truck and come in.  She approaches Alma from behind and puts his hands on her shoulders.

Ennis:  How are ma' girls doin'?

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11014 on: Mar 31, 2009, 04:30 PM »
Alma:  Alright.  Jenny's still go her runny nose.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11015 on: Apr 01, 2009, 02:27 AM »
Ennis looks out the kitchen window briefly before he heads to the back of the house towards the girls' bedroom.  He gives Junior a kiss before he goes over to the cot to pick up the crying baby.  As he tries to soothe the baby, Junior gets out of her little bed and runs towards Ennis.  Alma calls out:  Ennis, could you wipe Alma Jr's nose?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11016 on: Apr 01, 2009, 03:09 AM »
Ennis: I could if I had three hands.

Ennis holds both babies,kisses and tries to comfort them.

( *o) I must say that he looks so sweet and natural as a father....  <^()
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11017 on: Apr 01, 2009, 08:55 AM »
New Scene.  The bedroom.  Ennis has just come in, after putting the children to sleep in the adjoining room.  He sits on the edge of the bed, tired...

Alma approaches and embraces Ennis from behind.

Am=lam: Girls alright?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11018 on: Apr 01, 2009, 09:47 AM »
-Ennis:Yeah.Jenny stopped her coughing earlier on.I think we should take the girls into town this weekend.Get them an ice-cream or something.
-Alma:Ennis...can't we move to town?
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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11019 on: Apr 01, 2009, 03:34 PM »
Alma: I'm tired of these lonesome old ranches. There's noone for Alma jnr to play with, i'm scairt for jenny, scared she'll have one of them bad asthma spells.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11020 on: Apr 01, 2009, 04:11 PM »

Ennis:  Rent in town is too high
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11021 on: Apr 01, 2009, 04:14 PM »
Alma: there's a cheap place in Riverton, over the laundrymat.  I bet I could fix it up real nice.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11022 on: Apr 02, 2009, 08:43 AM »
Ennis:  I bet you could fix this place up real nice if you wanted to...


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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11023 on: Apr 02, 2009, 08:47 AM »
Alma (not giving up): 
I know you'd like it too.A real home, other kids for the girls to play with..Not so lonely like you were raised....you don't want it so lonely, do you?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11024 on: Apr 03, 2009, 08:24 AM »


Ennis:  Yeah....  Come 'ere....  (They start kissing)  It ain't so lonely now, is it?  ...

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11025 on: Apr 06, 2009, 04:49 PM »

Alma:  You sure the girls are alseep?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11026 on: Apr 07, 2009, 07:17 AM »


Ennis: Yeah.

Alma: Come 'ere... 

Ennis suddenly flips Alma over and proceeds to enter her in the "preferred" manner...

Alma: Ennis...
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11027 on: Apr 10, 2009, 04:43 PM »
New scene:  Jack is astride a bull, in the chute, ready to go...

Announcer over the PA:  Let 'er rip and snort, boys!  Jack Twist, hangin' on for dear life!

Jack rides out of the chute, doing his best to hang on as the bull bucks, but he comes flying off, lands heavily on the ground...
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11028 on: Apr 11, 2009, 07:02 AM »
Jack rolls quickly out a' the way to keep from gettin' trampled by the bull

ANNOUNCER: Ah, send in the clowns . . . OK, . . . a fine ride from Mr. Twist, four seconds . . . .

JACK: (gets up, limping, pained, and disappointed) Shit.

Meanwhile, the clowns run around hollering at and distracting the bull.


ANNOUNCER: Give 'em a hand folks, our very own rodeo clowns . . .

Next scene: Jack's sittin' alone at the rodeo bar drinkin' his beer. One of the men who works as a clown walks to the bar orders a beer. His resemblance to Ennis does not go unnoticed . . .
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11029 on: Apr 12, 2009, 09:15 AM »
Jack leans over and offers to buy rodeo clown a beer.

Jack:I d' like to buy Jimbo a beer. Best rodeo clown I ever worked with.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11030 on: Apr 12, 2009, 03:09 PM »
Jimbo replies:  No thanks, cowboy...if I was to let every rodeo hand I pulled a bull off buy me liquor I'd have been an alcoholic long ago.

Jack is still smiling and looking at him.  He looks back uneasily, stands up, takes his beer:  Pulling bulls off you buckaroos is just my job...save your money for your next entry fee, cowboy...  and walks away to the pool table where his friends gather around and start talking to him...
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11031 on: Apr 13, 2009, 07:34 AM »
Jack stares dejectedly at the bar . . .

Bartender: You ever try calf ropin'?

Jack: Do I look like I can afford a fu**in' ropin' horse?

Jack stomps outta' the bar.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11032 on: Apr 13, 2009, 07:48 AM »
New scene.  July 4 at Riverton.  Evening, at the fireworks display.  Ennis, Alma, and their 2 girls are looking for a spot to watch the fireworks.  They are carrying a picnic basket and seem intent in enjoying the evening with the other people of Riverton who have shown up for the event.

Ennis: Shouldn't we move a little closer?

 

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11033 on: Apr 14, 2009, 10:12 AM »
 
-Alma:No. Come on, let's don't. Jenny'll get scared

Two bikers looking for some mess are sitting next to them.They begin to speak loud:

-Biker 1:Look at this crowd. Bound to be a lot of pussy on the hoof in a crowd like this.

-Biker 2:All swelled up with patriotic feeling and ready to be humped like a frog.
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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11034 on: Apr 15, 2009, 07:40 AM »
Biker 1: So where da ya figure the most pussies at?  Las Vegas or California?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11035 on: Apr 16, 2009, 04:10 PM »

Biker 2:  Hell, how would I know.  But, if I had to pick between Wyoming and Montana, I'd pick Wyoming in a minute.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11036 on: Apr 17, 2009, 06:33 AM »
Ennis ,turns toward the bikers clearly upset: 
 Hey, you wanna keep it down?  I got two little girls over here.!
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11037 on: Apr 17, 2009, 11:07 AM »
Biker 1 : f*** you. Asshole. Probably quit givin' it to his wife after his kids was born.
Biker 2: You know what that's like.
Biker 1. Yeah.



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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11038 on: Apr 17, 2009, 03:53 PM »

The Bikers glare at Ennis.  Ennis glares back at the Bikers.

Alma (nervously):  let's move, Ennis.  Let's just move...
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11039 on: Apr 18, 2009, 03:54 AM »
     Ennis hands Jenny to Alma. Slowly gets up and walks back to where the bikers sit.

ENNIS: Now I don't want any trouble from you, but you need to shut your slop bucket mouth, you hear me?

BIKER 2: You oughta' listen to your old lady then.

ENNIS: That right?

BIKER 2: Yeah, move somewhere else.

      Fireworks explode along with Ennis's emotions . . . .
      Ennis grabs him, throws him to the ground, swings around, kicks Biker 1 in the face, knocking him out.

ENNIS: Whut about it? You wanna’ lose about half your fu**in’ teeth? Huh?

BIKER 2: Not tonight bud, I'd sure rather not.

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« Last Edit: Apr 18, 2009, 08:37 AM by jackster »
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