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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #9480 on: Nov 12, 2006, 03:46 PM »
And if you don't, I will...
The most difficult scene was the paragraph where, on the mountain, Ennis holds Jack and rocks back and forth, humming, the moment mixed with childhood loss and his refusal to admit he was holding a man.

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From the vibration of the floorboard on which they both stood, Ennis could feel how hard Jack was shaking.

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #9481 on: Nov 12, 2006, 10:05 PM »
(new scene:  Ennis and Alma are in a tobbogan...)

Ennis:  You all right?
La dictature c'est ''ferme ta geule'', la démocratie c'est ''cause toujours''
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #9482 on: Nov 13, 2006, 12:18 AM »
NEW SCENE:  Ennis working on highway job

Ennis' coworker:  My old lady's trying to get me to quit this job I said weak minds and strong backs run in our family. She didn't think that was too funny...I told her it keeps me fit.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #9483 on: Nov 13, 2006, 12:23 AM »
New scene: Aguirre's trailor Signal, WY.

Well, look what the wind blew in.
There was some open space between what he knew and what he tried to believe, but nothing could be done about it, and if you can't fix it you've got to stand it.

Ennis, riding against the wind back to the sheep in the treacherous, drunken darken light, thought he'd never had such a good time, felt he could paw the white out of the moon.

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #9484 on: Nov 13, 2006, 12:59 AM »
Howdy, Mr Aquirre.
The most difficult scene was the paragraph where, on the mountain, Ennis holds Jack and rocks back and forth, humming, the moment mixed with childhood loss and his refusal to admit he was holding a man.

- Annie Proulx -



From the vibration of the floorboard on which they both stood, Ennis could feel how hard Jack was shaking.

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #9485 on: Nov 13, 2006, 03:54 PM »
Jack:  was wondering if you'd be needing any help this summer?
[they were] both high school dropout country boys with no prospects, brought up to hard work and privation, both rough-mannered, rough-spoken, inured to the stoic life.   

(BBM short story)

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #9486 on: Nov 13, 2006, 04:24 PM »
Wastin' your time here.
For a moment in our lives. Forever in our hearts.

"They were respectful of each other’s opinions, each glad to have a companion where none had been expected." ~ BBM Short Story

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #9487 on: Nov 13, 2006, 04:46 PM »
Jack:  you ain't got nothing...nothing up on Brokeback?
[they were] both high school dropout country boys with no prospects, brought up to hard work and privation, both rough-mannered, rough-spoken, inured to the stoic life.   

(BBM short story)

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #9488 on: Nov 13, 2006, 05:13 PM »
Aguirre:  I ain't got no work for you.
La dictature c'est ''ferme ta geule'', la démocratie c'est ''cause toujours''
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #9489 on: Nov 13, 2006, 05:23 PM »
Jack heads for the door.  Stops and turns back to Aguirre

Jack:  Ennis Del Mar ain't been around, has he?  :clap: <^(

[they were] both high school dropout country boys with no prospects, brought up to hard work and privation, both rough-mannered, rough-spoken, inured to the stoic life.   

(BBM short story)

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #9490 on: Nov 13, 2006, 06:18 PM »
Aguirre:  You boys sure found a way to make the time pass up there.

Twist, you guys wasn't getting to leave the dogs baby-sit the sheep while you stemmed the rose.

Get the hell out of my trailer.  :(
La dictature c'est ''ferme ta geule'', la démocratie c'est ''cause toujours''
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #9491 on: Nov 15, 2006, 01:22 PM »
New scene: Ennis and Alma in the kitchen

Ennis: how my girls doin'?
« Last Edit: Nov 15, 2006, 01:44 PM by keren_b »
The truth is... sometimes I miss you so much I can hardly stand it.

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #9492 on: Nov 15, 2006, 01:50 PM »
Alma: [wearily] All right.  Jenny's still got a runny nose.

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #9493 on: Nov 15, 2006, 05:14 PM »
Ennis, can you wipe alma jr.'s nose?
Why should I be out of mind
because I am out of sight?
I am waiting for you,
for an interval,
somewhere very near,
just around the corner.
All is well.

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #9494 on: Nov 15, 2006, 05:24 PM »
If I had three hands, I could...
La dictature c'est ''ferme ta geule'', la démocratie c'est ''cause toujours''
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #9495 on: Nov 15, 2006, 06:22 PM »
new scene:  later that evening Ennis in a t-shirt and UGLY pajama bottoms is sitting on the  bed, Alma comes up behind him and wraps her arms around him

Alma:  Girls alright?
[they were] both high school dropout country boys with no prospects, brought up to hard work and privation, both rough-mannered, rough-spoken, inured to the stoic life.   

(BBM short story)

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #9496 on: Nov 15, 2006, 06:43 PM »
Ennis:  Jenny stopped her coughin'.  I should take the girls into town this weekend.  Get 'em an ice cream.
La dictature c'est ''ferme ta geule'', la démocratie c'est ''cause toujours''
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #9497 on: Nov 16, 2006, 10:28 AM »
Can we move to town? Tire of these lonesome old ranches…no ones around for junior to play with…besides I’m scared for Jenny, scared if she has another one of them bad asthma spells.

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #9498 on: Nov 16, 2006, 12:07 PM »
Rents in town are too high.

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #9499 on: Nov 16, 2006, 04:36 PM »
Alma:  there's a cheap place in Riverton...over the laundromat.  I bet I could fix it up real nice...
[they were] both high school dropout country boys with no prospects, brought up to hard work and privation, both rough-mannered, rough-spoken, inured to the stoic life.   

(BBM short story)

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #9500 on: Nov 17, 2006, 10:51 PM »
I bet you could fix this place up real nice if you wanted to.

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #9501 on: Nov 19, 2006, 12:17 PM »
Ennis, I know you'd like it too.A real home,somebody for the girls to play with.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #9502 on: Nov 20, 2006, 09:07 AM »
Not so lonely like you was raised. You don't want it to be so lonely, do you?
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This award tonight would have humbly validated Heath's quiet determination to be truly accepted by you all here — his peers within an industry he so loved.

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #9503 on: Nov 20, 2006, 09:57 AM »
It ain't so lonely now is it?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #9504 on: Nov 20, 2006, 01:48 PM »
You sure the girls are asleep?

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #9505 on: Nov 20, 2006, 07:28 PM »
Ennis: I'm sure
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #9506 on: Nov 22, 2006, 08:16 AM »
Alma: come here

after a few kisses Ennis flips her over...on her tummy
"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #9507 on: Nov 22, 2006, 07:25 PM »
(New scene: Rodeo)

Announcer:  Let 'em rip and snort, boys!  This one'll be quick.  Jack Twist. hangin' on for dear life!
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #9508 on: Nov 23, 2006, 10:14 AM »
Oh, and down he goes.

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #9509 on: Nov 23, 2006, 05:28 PM »
Whoa, watch out there, fellah!  He's comin' for ya.  Send in the clowns!  A fine ride for Mr. Twist.  Four seconds for him.
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