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Offline Matt Nasty

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10620 on: Jun 14, 2008, 12:52 PM »
Quote from: keren_b on Jun 14, 2008, 12:15 PM
Hey, you have to recite a line, not the whole scene!  ;D
sorry i got  a bit carried away :P
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10621 on: Jun 14, 2008, 01:06 PM »
Quote from: Matt Nasty on Jun 14, 2008, 12:52 PM
sorry i got  a bit carried away :P

Understandable. ;) Go on, it's your turn
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10622 on: Jun 14, 2008, 01:26 PM »
jack: right next summer i drove  back up to brokeback, talked to aguirre about a job, and he told me you hadnt been back so i left.
whent down to texas for bull riding, thats how i met lureen
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10623 on: Jun 14, 2008, 01:43 PM »
Jack: Made two thousand dollars bull-ridin' that year, nearly starved.  Lureen's ol' man...makes serious money.  Farm machine business....'course he hates my guts.
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"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10624 on: Jun 14, 2008, 01:47 PM »
Ennis: umm... the army didnt get ya?

Jack: no to busted up, rodeoin' aint what it was when my daddy did it, got out while i could still walk.

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10625 on: Jun 14, 2008, 01:56 PM »
Ennis: (Hums)... Hmmm

Jack: Swear to god I didn't know we's gonna' get into this again (pause) ...smiles
Oh yes I did, I red lined it all the way, couldn't get here fast enough ...chuckles.
What about you? . . .
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10626 on: Jun 14, 2008, 02:06 PM »
Ennis: me...er...i dunno...

JAck: old brokeback got us good, dont it.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10627 on: Jun 14, 2008, 02:15 PM »
Jack: what we gonna do now?

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10628 on: Jun 14, 2008, 02:17 PM »
Ennis: (pauses looking pretty sad) i dont doubt thers nothing we can do
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10629 on: Jun 14, 2008, 02:31 PM »
Ennis: Now, I'm stuck here with what I got.  Making a living is about all the time I got.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10630 on: Jun 14, 2008, 04:17 PM »
New scene, Del mar apartment. Ennis comes home. Alma is there.

Ennis:  Me and Jack's heading to the mountains for a day or two.  Do a little fishin.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10631 on: Jun 16, 2008, 12:02 PM »

Alma (in her nightgown and robe) walks quickly to the front window and looks out and sees Jack leaning on the side of his truck.

Alma (slowly):  You know, your friend could come in and have a cup of coffee.
Ennis (not meeting Alma's eyes):  He's from Texas
Alma:  Texans don't drink coffee?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10632 on: Jun 16, 2008, 12:57 PM »
Alma:  You sure that foreman won't fire you for takin' off?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10633 on: Jun 16, 2008, 01:45 PM »
Ennis: that foreman he owes me. I worked through a blizzard last christmas, remember that?  Besides, I'll only be a couple days.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10634 on: Jun 16, 2008, 01:47 PM »

Alma, Jr. comes running into the room

Junior:  Bring me a fish Daddy...a BIG FISH!
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10635 on: Jun 20, 2008, 12:04 PM »
Ennis: "c'mere... you be a good girl to your mama"
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10636 on: Jun 20, 2008, 02:43 PM »

Ennis picks Alma Jr. up and gives her a big kiss.  He hands Alma Jr. to Alma and puts one arm around Alma, gives her a quick hug and a kiss on the cheek.

Ennis:  see 'ya Sunday, ladies.

Ennis leaves in a hurry.  Alma, holding Alma Jr., looking sad starts to cry and wipes her tears away.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10637 on: Jun 21, 2008, 01:16 PM »
Jack, as he crushes his cigarette under his boot and gets in the truck cab :
I'm starving, wanna' get somethin' ta eat?
Ennis , putting his gear in the truck: Yup.
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"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10638 on: Jun 24, 2008, 02:13 PM »
New scene:  Jack's truck driving in the mountains.  The truck stops near the edge of a cliff.  Jack and Ennis get out of the truck running (taking off their clothes as they run) toward the cliff.

Jack:   the last one in....

Jack and Ennis, both naked,  jump off the cliff into the river below.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10639 on: Jun 24, 2008, 02:37 PM »
New scene , night at a campsite,Ennis laying, looking up..

Jack:Is there anything interesting up there in heaven?.....

 (Can't help to think about the bitter irony of that question!!!    :\'(  )
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"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10640 on: Jun 24, 2008, 02:59 PM »
Just sending a prayer of thanks.
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From the vibration of the floorboard on which they both stood, Ennis could feel how hard Jack was shaking.

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10641 on: Jun 24, 2008, 04:08 PM »
jack: for what?

ennis: for you forgetting to bring that harmonica (grins and does an almost laugh type thing)
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10642 on: Jun 24, 2008, 05:08 PM »

Ennis (continues):  I'm enjoying the peace and quiet

Jack, glancing over at Ennis:  You know, it could be like this, just like this...Always.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10643 on: Jun 25, 2008, 12:50 AM »
Ennis (with a sudden look of concern on his face):

Yeah, how do ya' figure that?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10644 on: Jun 25, 2008, 01:22 AM »
Jack:What if me and you had a little ranch together somewhere, little cow-and-calf operation, it'd be some sweet life. Hell, Lureen's old man, you bet he'd give me a down-payment if I'd get lost. Already more or less said it....
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10645 on: Jun 25, 2008, 05:25 AM »
Ennis (looking at Jack with sorrow in his eyes):

No, I . . . (Ennis gets up and sits close to Jack)
I told you it ain't gonna be that way . . .what I'm sayin', you got your wife and baby down in Texas, I got my life in Riverton.
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"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10646 on: Jun 25, 2008, 09:10 AM »
Jack: is that so?  you and Alma, thats a life?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10647 on: Jun 25, 2008, 02:17 PM »
Ennis: hey, you shut up about alma, this aint her fault
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10648 on: Jun 25, 2008, 02:19 PM »
Bottom line is, we're around each other, and if this thing grabs hold of us at the wrong place, at the wrong time, we're dead.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10649 on: Jun 25, 2008, 05:45 PM »

Scene switches from Ennis and Jack to a younger Ennis walking down a dirt trail with his older brother and his father.

Ennis:  There was these two old guys who ranched together down home, Earl and Rich.  They was the joke in town, even though they was pretty tough old birds.  They found Earl dead in an irrigation ditch.  They took a tire iron to him, spurred him up, drug him around by his dick till it pulled off...

young Ennis sees Earl's body and his eyes widen in shock
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