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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10680 on: Jul 18, 2008, 09:31 AM »
Next scene:
Jack is on the mountain,when Ennis arrives on his truck.They smile at each other.
Jack:You're late.
Ennis:Look what I brought.
Jack:Beans?
Ennis:Yeah,I'm going to cook them the way I used to.

(After this,we can see the both of them riding on the forest and enjoying their time together). <^(
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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10681 on: Jul 18, 2008, 03:51 PM »

New scene

Childress, TX - in the parking lot of Newsome Farm Machinery.  Jack and 4 year old Bobby are in the cab of a big tractor.  Bobby is sitting on Jack's lap and steering the tractor in a circle.

Jack (laughing):  There you go, son.  (Jack. still laughing, holds his hands in the air ).  LOOK NO HANDS!  It's all yours, Bobby
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10682 on: Jul 18, 2008, 04:45 PM »
New scene:Ennis arriving in his blue track,approaching Jack with a smile.
Jack (smiling back): You're late.
"Look what I brought," we hear Ennis mumble in the background, as he and Jack meet up again to spend some time together.

 
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10683 on: Jul 21, 2008, 09:42 AM »
Next scene:
We can see Ennis working,giving grass to the cows.
Another scene:
He's with Alma and the girls in their dinning room,watching TV.Ennis looks like really bored,lying in the sofa.
Alma:It's Saturday night.You know...we could still smarten up and head on over to the church social.
Ennis:That fire and brimstone crowd?
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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10684 on: Jul 21, 2008, 01:34 PM »

Alma is sitting in a chair knitting:  Well, I think it would be nice.

Ennis drinks his beer and doesn't answer.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10685 on: Aug 04, 2008, 09:55 PM »
ENNIS packs and mounts his horse.

JACK watches from a distance, then walks up to Ennis.

JACK: Won't get much sleep. I'll tell you that.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10686 on: Aug 09, 2008, 07:30 AM »
Quote from: lancecowboy on Aug 04, 2008, 09:55 PM
ENNIS packs and mounts his horse.
JACK watches from a distance, then walks up to Ennis.
JACK: Won't get much sleep. I'll tell you that.
I think that the next is the bed scene:

Alma:As far behind as we are on the bills, it makes me nervous not to take no precautions...
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10687 on: Aug 09, 2008, 10:50 PM »
Quote from: hpv on Aug 09, 2008, 07:30 AM
I think that the next is the bed scene:

Alma:As far behind as we are on the bills, it makes me nervous not to take no precautions...


Hmm...I think you skipped a few pages, hpv. They are still on the mountain?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10688 on: Aug 10, 2008, 12:41 PM »
Andrew, I think hpv quoted the scene that followed what jesseanne quoted - look at the post before yours. The bed scene follows the "fire and brimstone" discussion.

Quote from: hpv on Aug 09, 2008, 07:30 AM
Alma:As far behind as we are on the bills, it makes me nervous not to take no precautions...

Ennis: If you don't want no more of my kids, I'd be happy to leave you alone.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10689 on: Aug 10, 2008, 01:24 PM »
Alma: I'd have 'em if you'd support 'em.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10690 on: Aug 10, 2008, 01:28 PM »
Quote from: keren_b on Aug 10, 2008, 12:41 PM
Andrew, I think hpv quoted the scene that followed what jesseanne quoted - look at the post before yours. The bed scene follows the "fire and brimstone" discussion.

Ennis: If you don't want no more of my kids, I'd be happy to leave you alone.

Curious, what the hell happened to August? I thought there was one with Jack saying to Ennis...

You won't get much sleep. I will tell you that.

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Oh well, carry on. I guess Ennis had to work in August.  :8
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10691 on: Aug 10, 2008, 01:42 PM »
 Divorce court scene :
   
     Custody of the two minor children Alma Delmar Jr and Jennifer Delmar is awarded to the plaintiff.   Defendant is ordered to pay child support to the plaintiff in the sum of 125 dollars per month for each of the minor children until they reach the age of 18 years.
 Delmar divorced granted this 6th day of November 1975.


(Lance, they went up the mountain 2-3 times a year..."what the hell happened to August" is from the confrontation scene...  :)  )
     
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10692 on: Aug 10, 2008, 03:53 PM »
sorry for OT, but I am sometimes too much of a bloodhound and not easily letting things go.

I meant what happened to August as in, if you look at the posts, there is a gap between July 21, and August 4. The post that I thought I was responding to, was probably August 3. Anyway, it don't matter much.


New Scene:

Ennis and Jack sitting by the fire after supper. Ennis enjoying his beans, licking his chops, and working his fork to get the last bean.

Jack: Your brothers and sisters do right by you?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10693 on: Aug 11, 2008, 11:25 AM »
Quote from: hpv on Aug 10, 2008, 01:42 PM
Divorce court scene :
   
     Custody of the two minor children Alma Delmar Jr and Jennifer Delmar is awarded to the plaintiff.   Defendant is ordered to pay child support to the plaintiff in the sum of 125 dollars per month for each of the minor children until they reach the age of 18 years.
 Delmar divorced granted this 6th day of November 1975.


(Lance, they went up the mountain 2-3 times a year..."what the hell happened to August" is from the confrontation scene...  :)  )
     

Lance, the scene you are thinking of took place in 1963.  The scene we are up to (Ennis and Alma's divorce) takes place in 1975.

NEW SCENE:  1975, Wyoming - outside Ennis' home

Alma Jr. and Jenny are sitting in Ennis' truck.  Ennis is standing by the truck.  Jack drives up in his truck (King of the Road is playing on the radio).

Jack gets out of his truck and he and Ennis walk toward each other and hug each other tightly.

Ennis (smiling):  "What are you doing here?"
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10694 on: Aug 11, 2008, 05:00 PM »
Jack:
I got your message about the divorce so here I am.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10695 on: Aug 11, 2008, 06:30 PM »
Well Jack, uh... You see, I have the girls this weekend and I already missed last month...
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10696 on: Aug 12, 2008, 11:29 AM »
Quote from: hpv on Aug 11, 2008, 05:00 PM
Jack:
I got your message about the divorce so here I am.


Ennis walks Jack over to his truck and leans in and says to Alma Jr. and Jenny:  "This is my friiend, Jack Twist.  Jack, these are my girls, Alma Jr. and Jenny."

Jr and Jenny look and Jack.
Ennis:  "Say 'hi' girls."
Jr. (shyly) and Jenny (smiling):  "HI!" 
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10697 on: Aug 12, 2008, 01:06 PM »
Quote from: jesseanne21 on Aug 12, 2008, 11:29 AM
Ennis walks Jack over to his truck and leans in and says to Alma Jr. and Jenny:  "This is my friiend, Jack Twist.  Jack, these are my girls, Alma Jr. and Jenny."

Jr and Jenny look and Jack.
Ennis:  "Say 'hi' girls."
Jr. (shyly) and Jenny (smiling):  "HI!" 

Jack and Ennis move away from the truck.

Jack: Your card said the divorce came through, so... here I am. Had to ask about ten different people in Riverton where you'd moved to.

Ennis doesn't answer, looks down.

Jack: ...I guess I thought this means you'd...
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10698 on: Aug 12, 2008, 06:01 PM »

Ennis (looking pained):  Jack, sorry...I don't know what to say.  I got the girls this weekend.  See I only get them once a month and I missed last month because of the roundup.

I'm sorry as hell...you know what I mean
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10699 on: Aug 13, 2008, 04:21 AM »
(We forgot : after Jack says "so here I am " he said: had to ask about ten different people in Riverton where you moved to.)
 Now back to recital.........

JACK (heavily disappointed, looking away):  Yeah, all right . . .

ENNIS:  Jack . . .

JACK: ( with a relinquish in his voice) : So I'll see you next month then.   :-\\
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10700 on: Aug 13, 2008, 06:09 PM »

Jack turns away and walks back to his truck, gets in and drives away.  Ennis, looking miserable, watches him drive away.

New scene: Jack angrily wipes tears from his eyes. 
New scene:  We see Jack's truck on the highway to Mexico.



 
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10701 on: Aug 14, 2008, 08:11 AM »
New scene: Juarez, Mexico.  Night.  A crowded street that opens to a dark alley.

Little girl: Vendo (venda?) chickle(t)!  Vendo (venda?) chickle(t)!

In the background, we here the opening verses of the song:

Siempre que te pregunto
Que, cuándo, cómo y dónde
Tú siempre me respondes
Quizás, quizás, quizás...
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10702 on: Aug 14, 2008, 10:09 AM »
Mexico, an alley with all kind of types...

Jack stops in front of a Mexican male prostitute that asks: :"Senior?"
Jack nods and both men  get lost in the dark alley.
« Last Edit: Aug 14, 2008, 11:54 AM by hpv »
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10703 on: Aug 14, 2008, 10:54 AM »

New Scene:  The home of Jack and Lureen Twist.  Thanksgiving Day

Jack and Lureen are carrying food from the kitchen to the dining room.  Sitting at the dining room table are Lureen's parents, L.D. and Fayette, and Jack and Lureen's son, Bobby.  In the next room a football game is playing on the television.

Jack places a platter with a roasted turkey on the dining room table and prepares to carve the turkey.  L.D. takes the carving knife and fork away from Jack and says:

LD:  Whoa, there Rodeo, the stud duck does the carving around here...
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10704 on: Aug 14, 2008, 12:25 PM »
Jack: You bet L.D... just thought I'd save you the trouble.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10705 on: Aug 14, 2008, 03:42 PM »
Bobby is staring at the TV and eating at the same time.
Lureen:  Bobby, if you don't eat your dinner, I'm gonna have to turn off that television.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10706 on: Aug 15, 2008, 12:53 PM »
Bobby: why mama, we're gonna be eating this food for the next two weeks!
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10707 on: Aug 15, 2008, 01:45 PM »
Jack: You heard your mama, you eat your dinner, then you can watch the game.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10708 on: Aug 15, 2008, 04:04 PM »
L.D.: Hell, we don't eat with our eyes... boys should watch football.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10709 on: Aug 15, 2008, 04:42 PM »
Jack (standing up to turn the tv off): not until he finishes the meal his mama spent 3 hours fixin'
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