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Offline jesseanne21

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10770 on: Jan 07, 2009, 03:25 PM »

Alma, Jr., opens the door of the truck and gets out.  She looks sad and says:  No, it's alright.

Ennis:  See you next Sunday then

Junior:  Bye

Ennis:  Bye sweetheart.

Junior goes into the house.  Ennis drives away
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[they were] both high school dropout country boys with no prospects, brought up to hard work and privation, both rough-mannered, rough-spoken, inured to the stoic life.   

(BBM short story)

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10771 on: Jan 08, 2009, 12:25 PM »
Next scene: Ennis and Jack sitting at the campfire by the lake, it's night.

Jack:  It's gonna snow tonight for sure. looks at Ennis
All this time, and you ain't found nobody else to marry?
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"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10772 on: Jan 08, 2009, 07:37 PM »

Ennis:  I been putting the blocks to a good looking little gal over in Riverton.  Waitress.  Wants to go to nursing school.
Ennis shrugs and mumbles:  I don't know...   What about you and Lureen?
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[they were] both high school dropout country boys with no prospects, brought up to hard work and privation, both rough-mannered, rough-spoken, inured to the stoic life.   

(BBM short story)

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10773 on: Jan 11, 2009, 11:37 AM »
Jack: Lureen's good at making hard deals in the machinery business, but as far as our marriage is concerned, we could do it over the phone.
I kinda got a thing goin' with a ranch foreman's wife over in Childress.  Expect to get shot by Lureen or the husband one, ever' time I slip off to see her... chuckles
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"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10774 on: Jan 12, 2009, 02:10 PM »

Ennis, laughing, too, replies:  Yeah, you probably deserve it.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10775 on: Jan 16, 2009, 01:27 PM »
Jack smiles at Ennis then he get's serious and melancholic, 
Jack: Tell you what.....the truth is..........sometimes I miss you so much I can hardly stand it. 

I can't believe I got this line to recital... sigh..  :\'(
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"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10776 on: Jan 16, 2009, 02:35 PM »

Ennis gives Jack a sad little smile and looks at the fire.

New scene:  Later that night in the tent.  Jack is asleep on his right side.  Ennis is spooned up behind Jack with his left arm around Jack.

New scene:  The next morning.  Jack and Ennis are loading their trucks, preparing to leave.  Jack and Ennis are standing near Jack's truck.

Jack:  Guess I'll head on up to Lighting Flat...see the folks for a day or two?

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10777 on: Jan 18, 2009, 06:38 PM »
ENNIS: (uncomfortable,says, not looking at Jack and rubs the cars' handle) Somethin' I been meanin' to tell you, bud.  It's likely November before I can get away again, after we ship stock and before the winter feedin' starts. (biting his nails looks at Jack)
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"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10778 on: Jan 20, 2009, 01:55 PM »

Jack: (surprised) November?  What the hell happened to August? (now angry) Christ, Ennis!  You had a whole f**cking week to say some little word about this.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10779 on: Jan 21, 2009, 07:35 AM »
JACK: And why's it we're always in the friggin' cold weather? We oughta go south, where it's warm. We oughta go to Mexico.
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"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10780 on: Jan 21, 2009, 03:00 PM »

Jack walks away from his truck and stands with his back to Ennis.

Ennis:  Mexico?  Hell, you know me, Jack...'bout all the travelling I ever done is going around the coffeepot, looking for the handle. 

Ennis continues:  Lighten up on me, Jack.  We can hunt in November, kill us a nice elk.  Try if I can get Don Wroe's cabin again...we had a nice time that year, didn't we?
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(BBM short story)

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10781 on: Jan 21, 2009, 04:28 PM »
Jack:  There aint never enough time...never enough...
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10782 on: Jan 21, 2009, 05:04 PM »

Jack turns and looks at Ennis and says agitatedly:  You know, Friend, this is a godd*mn b*tch of an unsatisfactory situation. You used to come away easy...NOW it's like seeing The Pope!
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10783 on: Jan 23, 2009, 10:39 AM »
Ennis shrugs his shoulders and says:

-Jack,I got to work,huh?.I mean,in them earlier days,I'd just quit the job.I mean,you...You forget what it's like being broke all the time.
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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
("If I asked")
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10784 on: Jan 23, 2009, 12:19 PM »
Ennis: (continues)Let me tell you, I can't quit this one. And I can't get the time off.
Was tough enough gettin' this time. The trade off was August.

Ennis:(frustrated that Jack ain't buying it)     You got a better idea?

JACK: (bitter, accusatory) I did, once....
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"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10785 on: Jan 23, 2009, 01:28 PM »

Jack is angry and now facing Ennis.

Ennis:  (quietly) You did once.

Ennis begins to walk SLOWLY toward Jack.  He looks Jack in the eye while speaking slowly and carefully:  You been to Mexico, Jack?  Cause I heard what they got in Mexico for boys like you.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10786 on: Jan 24, 2009, 02:48 AM »
Jack (defiantly):Hell yeah, I been in Mexico... Is that a f***in problem??
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"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10787 on: Jan 24, 2009, 11:08 AM »
They look at each other defiantly for some instants.Ennis gets closer to Jack and tells him in a threatening way:

-I'm going to tell you this one time,Jack !@#$ Twist.And I ain't fooling.What I don't know...All them things that I don't know...-he pushes Jack by saying that-could get you killed if I get to know them.I ain't joking.
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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
("If I asked")
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You will be forever in my heart,friends.

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10788 on: Jan 24, 2009, 01:57 PM »
JACK:

Yeah, Well try this one, an' I'll say it just once.


ENNIS:

Go ahead!
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10789 on: Jan 25, 2009, 04:03 AM »
Jack:  Tell you what...we coulda had a good life together...a f!@#ing real good life, had us a place of our own.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10790 on: Jan 25, 2009, 12:36 PM »
Jack: (continues with an accusatory voice...his back to Ennis)
But you didn't want it Ennis! So so all we've got now is  Brokeback Mountain!
Everything's built on that! That's all we got, boy, fu**in' all. So I hope you know that, even if you don't never know the rest!

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"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10791 on: Jan 25, 2009, 12:58 PM »
ENNIS: (turns towards the truck and mutters something only the horses can understand)



JACK: (still shouting at Ennis)

You count the damn few times that we've been together in nearly twenty years, and you measure the short f**kin' leash you keep me on, an' then you ask me 'bout Mexico an' you tell me you kill me for needin' something that I don't hardly never get.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10792 on: Jan 25, 2009, 01:02 PM »
Jack: You have no idea how bad it gets!!!!I'm not like you I can't make it in a couple of high altitude f*cks once or twice a year..You're too much for me Ennis, you son of a whoreson bitch.
I wish I knew how to quit you...
............
( I'm a wreck right now...  :\'( )
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"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10793 on: Jan 25, 2009, 01:19 PM »
ENNIS: (turning back to Jack with tears in his eyes, but accusation in his voice)

Then why don't you?

Why don't you just let me be, huh?

'Cause a' you Jack - that I'm like this.

I'm nuthin' . . .  I'm nowhere . . .

argh . . .
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10794 on: Jan 26, 2009, 06:44 AM »
Ennis is crying and Jack,then,go back to him,noddling his head and tying to embrace him.
-Ennis...
-Get the f*** off me ¡
He pushes Jack who,however,tries again to embrace him.Ennis runs down in his arms while Jack comfort him.
-It's allright...(Ennis is crying desperately)Goddamn,Ennis.
-I just can't stand this anymore,Jack...
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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
("If I asked")
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You will be forever in my heart,friends.

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10795 on: Jan 26, 2009, 12:34 PM »
Flashback Brokeback Mountain 1963
The dozy embrace scene: 
Ennis hugs Jack from behind and says:
And now you're sleepin' on your feet like a horse..
My mama used to sing that to me when I was little . . .   hums....
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"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10796 on: Jan 26, 2009, 12:37 PM »

Ennis: and sing to me...

Ennis starts humming a lullaby while nuzzling Jack's neck.
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(BBM short story)

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10797 on: Jan 26, 2009, 01:07 PM »
ENNIS:

I gotta' go.

     (Jack nods)

See ya' in the mornin'.


(Ennis slowly walks away, mounts his horse, rides off)

(Jack watches him ride-off with longing and love in his eyes)
« Last Edit: Jan 26, 2009, 01:24 PM by jackster »
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10798 on: Jan 26, 2009, 03:30 PM »

Flashforward to 1983.

Jack is standing by his truck watching Ennis drive away.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10799 on: Jan 27, 2009, 01:03 AM »
New scene,  diner in Riverton, Ennis is eating a piece of pie, when  Cassie walks into the diner with a man,
she notices Ennis and with a bitter expression on her face approaches his table.

Cassie:  Hey, Ennis del Mar...where you been?
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"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."
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