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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10890 on: Feb 17, 2009, 09:50 AM »
Jack is with the sheep and dogs having a nap, while Ennis down in camp  whittles a little wood horse looks up to the sky...
Next scene:
Ennis cleans up the campfire from a meal, Jack is on his horse preparing to ride back to the sheep, 
shouts back to Ennis as he rides off:

  No more beans!  :)
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10891 on: Feb 17, 2009, 05:49 PM »

New scene: 

Jack is up with the sheep and spots a coyote.  He take the rifle, aims and shoots.  He misses the coyote.

Jack:  Damn it!
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10892 on: Feb 18, 2009, 01:10 AM »
New scene:

Ennis is down at the bridge getting his supplies, finishes packing the mules, steps back, looks at the mules and shakes his head.

Basque:  Something wrong?

Ennis:  Yes sir...why didn't we get the powdered milk and the spuds?

Basque:  That's all we got.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10893 on: Feb 18, 2009, 08:21 AM »
Ennis: Here's next week's...
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10894 on: Feb 18, 2009, 10:38 AM »
The chilean looks at the list and says:

-Thought you didn't eat soup.
Ennis:-Yeah,well,I'm sick of beans.
Chilean:-Too early in the summer to be sick of beans.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10895 on: Feb 18, 2009, 12:34 PM »
Ennis grabs the mules' reins, gives the Chilean a dirty look,
heads back to camp after instructing the mules . . . .


ENNIS:  Come On!


Ennis heads back up the mountain enjoying the scenery,
being horseback, humming to himself . . .
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10896 on: Feb 18, 2009, 07:32 PM »

New scene:  Ennis is riding his horse and leading two mules.  He comes to a clearing which has a small stream.  On the far bank of the stream is a bear looking for fish.  The bear growls loudly at Ennis.  The sight and sound  of the bear scares Ennis' horse.  The horse rears up and throws Ennis.  The horse and mules run away from the bear (and Ennis).   The running causes the packs on the mules to come off and food is scattered all over the trail.  Ennis, with blood on his forehead, goes chasing after the horse and mules.

Ennis (angrily):  Come back here...
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10897 on: Feb 19, 2009, 08:45 AM »
New Scene.  Jack is seen riding back to camp at the end of the day.  He remains on the saddle as he scans around looking for Ennis.  There is a worried and puzzled expression on his face even as he dismounts...
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10898 on: Feb 19, 2009, 12:03 PM »
Jack, sitting next to the bonfire and drinking whiskey, finely Ennis arrives groaning and in bad humor.
JACK (in full on bitch mode): Where the hell you been? I'm up with the sheep all day, come back here hungry as hell and all I find is beans.

Ennis storms past him and Jack catches sight of the cut on his head. His tone softens and he continues,

What in the hell happened, Ennis?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10899 on: Feb 20, 2009, 09:16 AM »

Ennis: I come on a bear is what happened...  Goddamn horse spooked and the mules took off, and scattered food everywhere.  Beans is about all we got left. ... Got a whiskey or somethin'? ...  Dumbass mule...


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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10900 on: Feb 20, 2009, 09:29 AM »
Jack dips his bandana in a pot of water then goes to tend to the cut on Ennis's head. Ennis grabs the bandana away from him and does it himself...but their fingers touch for a brief second before he does.

Jack: Well, we gotta do somethin' 'bout this food situation. Maybe I'll shoot one a the sheep.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10901 on: Feb 20, 2009, 11:35 AM »
Ennis:  What if Aguirre finds out, huh?  We're supposed to guard the sheep, not eat 'em.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10902 on: Feb 20, 2009, 01:47 PM »

Jack:  What's the matter with you?  There's a thousand of them...
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10903 on: Feb 20, 2009, 01:57 PM »
ENNIS:

I'll stick with beans . . .
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10904 on: Feb 20, 2009, 02:40 PM »
Jack:  Well I won't....
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10905 on: Feb 20, 2009, 02:48 PM »

Ennis levels his gun, fires. Elk falls.

JACK: Whoeee!! Yeah!!


ENNIS: Gettin' tired a' your dumbass missin' . . .

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10906 on: Feb 20, 2009, 05:23 PM »
Jack:  Let's get a move on...don't want the Game and Fish to catch us with no elk!
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10907 on: Feb 20, 2009, 05:44 PM »

New scene:  Night on Brokeback

A campfire is burning and Jack and Ennis are eating ellk meat.  And eating...and chewing...and swallowing...and eating.  :8
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10908 on: Feb 21, 2009, 09:00 AM »
new scene, daylight: We see Ennis cooking an Elk dinner, we hear Jack and his horse before we see them:

JACK: (to his horse) Come on . . . shu . . .

Then we see Jack dismount . . .

JACK: (groaning)  Agh . . , oh . . .

(continues in a pissy mood)

 Yeah, I'm commutin' four hours a day . . .
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10909 on: Feb 21, 2009, 12:17 PM »
Jack continues:  I come in for breakfast, I go back to the sheep, evenin' get 'em bedded down, come in for supper, go back to the sheep, spend half the night checkin' for damn coyotes.  Aguirre got no right makin' me do this...
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10910 on: Feb 23, 2009, 08:49 AM »


Ennis: Ya wanna switch?  I wouldn't mind sleepin' out there...

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10911 on: Feb 23, 2009, 12:34 PM »
JACK:
That ain't the point . . . (yeah Jack, we Know what your point is . .ed.  ;))
Point is, we Both oughtta' be in this camp.
Goddamn pup tent smells like cat piss or worse.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10912 on: Feb 23, 2009, 04:07 PM »

Ennis:  I wouldn't mind being out there...
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10913 on: Feb 23, 2009, 04:27 PM »
Jack:  Well I'm happy to switch but I warn you...I can't cook worth a damn...But I'm pretty good with a can opener...
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10914 on: Feb 23, 2009, 05:08 PM »

Ennis:  Can't be no worse than me, then.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10915 on: Feb 24, 2009, 08:14 AM »


Ennis: (Handing Jack his dinner) Here ya go!
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10916 on: Feb 24, 2009, 09:40 AM »
new scene, later after supper.
Ennis is preparing to mount his horse,
Jack walks up looking pretty morose that his plan for both spending the night in camp has come to naught.
Looks at Ennis . . .

Ennis, smoking, coughs, clears his throat.

JACK: Won't get much sleep I can tell ya' that.

ENNIS: Yup.
            (then to his horse) Come on . . .
            (begins his journey to the sheep)

Jack for the first (but not the last) time watches as Ennis rides slowly away . . .
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10917 on: Feb 25, 2009, 09:21 AM »
The "can of beans" scene.  ;)

As jack was trying to open a can of beans...  Ennis undresses...

ENNIS  Shot a coyote up there...  Big son of a bitch... balls the size of apples....  Looked like he could eat himself a camel...  You want some of this hot water?



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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10918 on: Feb 25, 2009, 01:35 PM »
Jack, spilling the beans,says:  No it's all yours.

Jack studiously keeps his eyes on the potato he is peeling as Ennis, totally naked, washes himself in the background.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10919 on: Feb 25, 2009, 04:23 PM »
Yet another, ahem, riveting scene with absolutely no dialogue . . . .

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