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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11730 on: Feb 03, 2010, 12:37 PM »
-Alma (seeing that Ennis is getting more and more angry):-Ennis, let's move. Let's just move, okay?

-Ennis (without taking into account his wife's advice): -Now, I don't want any trouble from you. You need to shut your slop-bucket mouths, you hear me?

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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11731 on: Feb 03, 2010, 04:27 PM »
Ennis calmly approaches the two . .

BIKER 1: You ought-ta' listen to your old lady then . .

ENNIS: Is that right? (Ennis staring right at the biker)

BIKER 1: Move somewhere else.

Fireworks are going off in the background and inside Ennis's head. He grabs biker1 by his jacket and throws him to the ground. Simultaneously he swings around and, with an amazing leg lift, kicks biker2 square in the face with his foot, biker2 is now out cold on the ground. Ennis comes at biker1 and shouts at him while waving his fist:

ENNIS: What about it!! You wanna' lose about half your f*ckin' teeth? Huh?

BIKER1: Not tonight bud, I'd sure rather not (as he slinks away).

Alma looks on in horror at Ennis's outburst.

We see Ennis standing alone, explosions all about, a man by himself in a crowd.

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11732 on: Feb 03, 2010, 08:18 PM »

The explosions continue, as does Ennis's solitary pose, while his wife looks on. 

Alma clings to her youngest daughter and shields the older daughter with her body. 

She raises her lip into a snarl of fear and disdain.  She doesn't know this man who now stands alone in the crowd.  She feels she must protect her children from his angry outburst.

New scene: A cute girl wearing a red hat (that a friend of mine now owns ;)) rides a horse into the arena at breakneck speed...


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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11733 on: Feb 04, 2010, 11:49 AM »
Jack is waiting for his turn looking at her career.Meanwhile,the speaker says:

-Here she comes, ladies and gentlemen! Oh boy, look at her fly! This is Lureen Newsome from right here in Childress, Texas! Come on, folks, she's gotta hear it, let's give her a big hand! She's turning on two! She's around three! Come on, folks! Help her home! Come on! Come on! And the time is 16 and 9!
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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
("If I asked")
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11734 on: Feb 04, 2010, 10:06 PM »
The announcer continues:

Here's Cheyenne Hodson from Cody, Wyoming!  Come on girl!  She's headed around two!  Is there anybody here from Wyoming? ... Come on, Cheyenne!  And her time is 17 & 2 ... 



Meanwhile, Lureen's hat is blown off in the speed of her exit.  Jack picks up the hat just when Lureen rides back to retrieve it.

Jack (hands the hat back to Lureen): Ma'am... 

Lureen takes the hat, winks at Jack, and rides off.  Jack looks on as she rides off...
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11735 on: Feb 06, 2010, 05:21 PM »
Now it's Jack's turn.He's preparing for rodeoing,while the speaker announces him:

-Next up is an up-and-comer! Jack Twist from all the way up in Lightning Flat, Wyoming! He's onboard Sleepy today! Let's hope he's not! Okay! There they go, folks! And look at Sleepy go, boy! He's broke free today, folks! Come on, spin and spin and spin! Oh, boy! Good ride, cowboy! Well, let's see what the judges say! I tell you, folks, that sure looked like the winnin' ride to me!

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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11736 on: Feb 06, 2010, 09:52 PM »
New scene.  At the bar, near the dance floor.  jack eyes Lureen.  Lureen is being asked by a man for the next dance.  But she is clearly waiting for someone else...  She looks at Jack, who turns his gaze away.  Jack is clearly abashed.  He asks the bartender about Lureen...

Jack: You know that girl?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11737 on: Feb 07, 2010, 02:36 PM »
Bartender: I sure do...Lureen Newsome...her dad sells farm equipment...I mean big farm equipment...hundred thousand dollar tractors...shit like that...

Jack looks back at Lureen, sees she is still watching him...

Impatient Lureen gets up and walks over to Jack.

Lureen:  What are you waiting for, cowboy?  A matin' call?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11738 on: Feb 08, 2010, 10:54 PM »
New Scene.  On the dance floor.  Jack dances with Lureen, flirting with his hands.fingers.  But clearly, his thoughts are elsewhere.  Out of Lureen's line of sight, we see Jack deep in thought.


No one’s gonna love you like me
No one else, can’t you see?
No one’s gonna love you like me
No one, no one.

No one else, can’t you see?
No one’s gonna love you like me
No one, no one.

I know sometimes you felt so lonely
I know you felt so sad and blue
But this time, you know I’m the only
Love for you that’s coming through
With everything I say and do

No one’s gonna love you like me
No one, no one.

I know sometimes you felt so lonely
I know you felt so sad and blue
But this time, you know I’m the only
Love for you that’s coming through
With everything I say and do

No one’s gonna love you like me
No one, no one.
No one, no one.


Mary McBride (http://www.stlyrics.com/b/brokebackmountain.htm)
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11739 on: Feb 10, 2010, 08:46 AM »
New scene:

We see a flashy, red Thunderbird convertible drive along a deserted piece of road, slow, pull to a stop, the motor is cut. Next we see Jack (with his hat still on) and Lureen (who’s been driving) start to go at it hot n’ heavy. In an action not unlike Jack with Ennis SNIT, Lureen takes Jack’s hat, puts it aside and takes position on Jack. Jack crawls (is pushed) over the seat into the back seat. Lureen follows him like a hungry wolf and gets on top of him. All kind of grappling and smooching is goin’ on. Finally Lureen draws back,

LUREEN: You don’t think I’m too fast do you, maybe we should put the breaks on?

Jack smiles back at her, happy to let her do the drivin’:

JACK: Fast or slow I just like the direction you’re going.

Lureen dives back in, can’t resist Jack’s luscious lips.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11740 on: Feb 10, 2010, 11:50 AM »
Lureen takes her shirt off.
Jack(surprised): You are in a hurry...


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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11741 on: Feb 10, 2010, 12:05 PM »
-Loreen:-My daddy's the hurry. He expects me home with the car by midnight.

They kiss and keep on doing "that thing".

Next scene:We see Ennis with the two girls under his arms entering into the shop where Alma works.

-Ennis( to the girls ):- Come here, come here. Hi, Monroe!

-Monroe : -Hey, Ennis.



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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
("If I asked")
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11742 on: Feb 10, 2010, 01:17 PM »
ENNIS: Is ah, Alma here?

MONROE: Ah, yeah, she's in the condiments aisle.

ENNIS: The wha?

MONROE: Ah . . . ketchup.

ENNIS: Thanks.

  Ennis continues to the back of the store with the girls in arms, still wondering . . .Condom mints?  :s)
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11743 on: Feb 11, 2010, 11:00 AM »
Ennis goes to the condiments aisle in a hurry,almost running people down...

-Alma Jr.:-Excuse us!

-Ennis : -Yeah. Excuse me.

-Alma : -Hey, honey! Honey, what are y'all doing here?

-Ennis : -Big hurry. My boss called and, weel, he wants me to go up to the ranch.


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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
("If I asked")
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11744 on: Feb 11, 2010, 06:15 PM »
Ennis:  I guess all the heifers must have decided to calf at the same time.  I figured I could drop the girls off with you.

Alma, as she takes Jenny from Ennis:  Ennis...I...I've got a million things I've got to do before I can leave.  I don't get off for another three hours.

Alma Jr looking up at Alma and pulling at Alma's smock:  Mama, I need crayons.

Alma looking upset and harrassed:  Not now, Alma.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11745 on: Feb 12, 2010, 02:01 AM »
Turning to Ennis, pleading,
ALMA: Ennis please, . . . you promised you'd take them tonight.

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11746 on: Feb 12, 2010, 09:26 AM »
ENNIS: Alma, I can't afford not ta' be there when the heifers calve. It'd be my job if I lose any of 'em.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11747 on: Feb 12, 2010, 12:02 PM »
-Alma (feeling undervalued): -What about my job? ... (Ennis looks at her as confirming her that her job is not as important as his)-Okay, all right. I'll call my sister. I'll see if she can take them.

-Ennis : -All right. All right.(to Alma Fr.)- You be a good girl for your mama, all right?(to Alma again)- I'll be half the night. Bring home some ground steaks if you think of it.

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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
("If I asked")
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11748 on: Feb 14, 2010, 11:27 PM »
Ennis rushes away.  Alma looks tired and upset.  Alma Jr tries to take a jar of peanuts from the bottom row of a display of peanut jars, causing the whole display to come crashing down.  There are broken glass jars and peanuts all over the floor.  Alma looks on the verge of tears.

Monroe, the store manager, comes running at the sound of breaking glass.

Alma (on the verge of tears):  Monroe, I am so sorry.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11749 on: Feb 15, 2010, 08:54 AM »
MONROE: It's OK, it's OK, I'll get it.

ALMA: I'll, I'll clean this up just as soon as I call my sister to come get the girls.

MONROE: Really Alma, it's OK, I'll get it.

ALMA: Alma come with me.

MONROE: Watch your feet.

ALMA: Alma!
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11750 on: Feb 15, 2010, 11:42 AM »
New scene:

A beautiful Lureen coos over her precious new baby.  She lets him grab her finger in his tiny fist.  And guess what?  Company has arrived.  It is the Newsome grandparents who have come to see their new grandchild.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11751 on: Feb 15, 2010, 02:19 PM »
-Lureen(to Jack):-It's just like my hand.

-Jack : -Honey, I got a surprise for you.

Lureen's parents have just entered into the room.

-Lureen : -Hey.

-Lureen's mom : -I got two whole boxes of formula for you.

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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
("If I asked")
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11752 on: Feb 15, 2010, 07:06 PM »
Lureen's mom continues...

Lureen's mom: ... A hundred and twenty cans!

Lureen:  A hundred and twenty? 

Lureen's mom (To L.D.): Where did you put 'em?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11753 on: Feb 17, 2010, 02:50 AM »
L.D.Newsom: Oh hell, back seat a' the car where I left 'em. Rodeo can get 'em.

L.D. throws the keys at Jack without even looking to see if he gets them. Jack, who's caught off guard, misses the throw and they fall to the floor, he bends down and picks them up, clearly upset lives the room...
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"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11754 on: Feb 17, 2010, 05:21 AM »
Lureen's mother Fayette says:  Oh, L.D., I can already see who little Bobby looks like...
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11755 on: Feb 17, 2010, 01:52 PM »
-L.D. : -Good job, little girl. He's the spittin' image of his grandpa...( to Jack ):- Isn't he just the spittin' image of his grandpa?

Jack nodds with a sad smile in his lips.Loreen,who has been looking at him during the depictful action of his father,tries to take a little of tension off.

-Loreen:-...Yeah... Look at those eyes.





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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
("If I asked")
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11756 on: Feb 17, 2010, 09:59 PM »
New scene.  Ennis drives home from work, parks the truck, and goes up to the litchen where Alma is preparing dinner. 

Alma: Hey!

Ennis: How's it goin'

Pause...  Ennis washes his hands in the sink.

Alma: Hey Ennis... ya know somebody by the name of Jack?

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11757 on: Feb 18, 2010, 11:12 AM »
New scene:  Ennis enters, Alma, standing at the stove, turns toward Ennis and says,
"Ennis, you know somebody named Jack?"
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"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11758 on: Feb 18, 2010, 12:05 PM »
-Ennis : -Maybe, why?

-Alma : -'Cause you got a postcard. It come general delivery. ...

Ennis reaches the postcard and,from that time onwards,the world that surrounds him vanishes.Everything turns around this postcard and Jack handwriting.His Jack...

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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
("If I asked")
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11759 on: Feb 18, 2010, 02:36 PM »
Friend this letter
is long over due.
Coming through
on the 24th.
Drop me a line
say if your there.
     Jack

Ennis stares at the card with some disbelief (unfortunately it won't be the last time he looks at a postcard this way). Flips the card over to see what's on the back, maybe it's a trick? Glances quickly at Alma to see if she's watching him and his reaction (she's not). Reads the card again, mouthing the words to make sure he's got it right. Alma questions him:

ALMA: Is he somebody you cowboyed with or what?

ENNIS: Nah, Jack he rodeos mostly. (then thinkin' really quickly he adds) We wus fishin' buddies.

Ennis probably doesn't realize how helpful this little lie will be in the very near future. Leaves the kitchen with his thoughts on Jack.

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