I am SURE that, when Ennis enters the tent on the second night and he and Jack begin to kiss, Ennis is muttering 'I'm sorry, I'm sorry' - as I said, barely audible and they are kissing when he says it so may be difficult to hear, but I'm sure he does say this or something similar. And Jack responds with something like 'It's alright'.. Although someone did say earlier that this isn't the case so maybe I am hearing things but I do think something is whispered. Dam!! - can someone who is planning on seeing it again soon please listen carefully and check this? I found a lot of the dialogue difficult to hear but I'm sure I heard this.
I also have another question re. whispered dialogue: when Jack and Ennis are in bed in the Motel. Jack whispers something in Ennis's ear - quite a long sentence and I didn't catch any of it..what the hell is he saying?! Sorry moderators - let me know if I should post a new thread for this.
You are probably refering to the sentence at the Motel Siesta where Jack, after saying something like 'I swear I didn't know we would get into this again' says that hell, he DID plan it...red-lined it all the way (i.e., getting in bed with Ennis.)
If I remember correctly, the screenplay does not say anything about Jack saying 'I'm sorry' during the 2nd tent scene.
But Gyllenhaal could have been ad-libbing here, so someone should check this out.
In the last fight scene between Ennis and Jack, when Ennis collapses into Jack's arms, I thought I heard Gyllenhaal say 'Sorry' before saying 'It's alright...Damn you Ennis...'. I am almost sure that in the screenplay, Jack should have said 'Come here...It's alright...Damn you Ennis' -- he does not say sorry. But I will have to check the screenplay, to be sure. In any case, can someone verify that Gyllenhaal ad-libbed here by saying 'Sorry' instead of 'Come here'?