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Excerpt from BBM screenplay -- spoiler ---
« on: Jan 14, 2006, 04:28 PM »
Excerpts from BBM screenplays.

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Written by Larry McMurtry and Diana Ossana


When Jack Twist (Jake Gyllenhaal) shows up to visit Ennis Del Mar (Heath Ledger) in the bare-bones apartment he shares with his wife and daughters, Alma Del Mar (Michelle Williams) accidentally discovers that the friendship between them is a lot closer than is considered decent in small-town Wyoming in 1967. After being out all night with Jack, Ennis returns, and Alma is there, quietly waiting.

Interior: Riverton, Wyo.: Del Mar apartment.

Alma sits at the kitchen table, disheveled, nervous, hasn't slept all night, a cup of coffee in front of her.

Ennis comes through the door.

Alma stands ... confused yet relieved Ennis came back home, struggles with complex feelings. Keeps big emotion inside. Tries to catch his eye.

Ennis tries to ignore her.

Alma looks out the window ... sees Jack outside his pickup, he leans against the driver door.

ENNIS Me and Jack's heading up to the mountains for a day or two. Do a little fishin'.

ALMA (cautious) You know, your friend could come inside, have a cup of coffee ... we ain't poison or nothin'.

ENNIS (as if this is explanation enough) He's from Texas.

ALMA Texans don't drink coffee?

Ennis opens the hall closet. Takes out a duffel bag. Starts to pack.

Alma's eyes widen. ...

ALMA You sure that foreman won't fire you for taking off?

Ennis takes his rod, reel and creel case out of the closet.

ENNIS That foreman owes me. I worked through a blizzard last Christmas, remember? Besides, I'll only be a couple of days.

Alma Jr. hears her father's voice, stumbles out of the bedroom, rubs sleep out of her eyes.

ALMA JR. Bring me a fish, Daddy, a big fish.

ENNIS (to Alma Jr.) Come here.

Gives her a big kiss. Turns to Alma.

Awkward.

Gives her a quick one-arm hug, kisses her on the cheek.

ENNIS See you Sunday, latest.

Leaves.

Alma goes to the window.

Looks out ... sees Ennis throw his stuff in the back of Jack's truck. Gets in the passenger side, Jack gets in the driver's side.

Pale, filled with disquiet, anguish, watches them go.

Cries.

Michelle Williams is brilliant in this scene. I could certainly feel her struggle, pain, and confusion. I cried for her too
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Re: Excerpt from BBM screenplay
« Reply #1 on: Jan 14, 2006, 04:37 PM »
I've really tried to think how she must have felt seeing that in 1966.  Wow, I mean she must have been pretty disgusted in him.
But at the same time confused.  It wasn't  like it was discussed, and back then it was even treated as a medical problem.  did anyone
see the movie, can't remember the name with Dennis Quaid and Julianne Moore where it was the 50's and she caught her husband with a man?  They went to therapy and took meds!  Of course it didn't work...
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Re: Excerpt from BBM screenplay -- spoiler ---
« Reply #2 on: Jan 14, 2006, 04:59 PM »
It's called "Far From Heaven".  Great movie

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Re: Excerpt from BBM screenplay
« Reply #3 on: Jan 14, 2006, 05:00 PM »
I've really tried to think how she must have felt seeing that in 1966.  Wow, I mean she must have been pretty disgusted in him.
But at the same time confused.  It wasn't  like it was discussed, and back then it was even treated as a medical problem.  did anyone
see the movie, can't remember the name with Dennis Quaid and Julianne Moore where it was the 50's and she caught her husband with a man?  They went to therapy and took meds!  Of course it didn't work...

I don't know how I would have felt back in 1966. Michelle's delivery as Alma --- her initial reaction was more shocking and confused than disgusting. It could be possible that the term homosexuality/queer/gay was not part of Alma's vocabulary. Only after she had some time to digest - her disgust was displayed during her confrontation with Ennis later.

I always knew that I am attracted to guys at very young age - but didn't know what and why it was. Simple there was no proper explanation for my orientation. Confusion, I guess, is the word.

Far from Heaven is the name and it was great movie. I was rooting for Julianne Moore for Best Actress that year. Well..another story.
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Re: Excerpt from BBM screenplay
« Reply #4 on: Jan 14, 2006, 07:46 PM »
I've really tried to think how she must have felt seeing that in 1966.  Wow, I mean she must have been pretty disgusted in him.
But at the same time confused.  It wasn't  like it was discussed, and back then it was even treated as a medical problem.  did anyone
see the movie, can't remember the name with Dennis Quaid and Julianne Moore where it was the 50's and she caught her husband with a man?  They went to therapy and took meds!  Of course it didn't work...

I don't know how I would have felt back in 1966. Michelle's delivery as Alma --- her initial reaction was more shocking and confused than disgusting. It could be possible that the term homosexuality/queer/gay was not part of Alma's vocabulary. Only after she had some time to digest - her disgust was displayed during her confrontation with Ennis later.


Wasn't there a Rock Hudson and Lana Turner or Particia Neal or somebody movie about the same thing...?  He was a gardener and she was a rich widow,  it's so vague to me, does anyone remember...?

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Far from Heaven is the name and it was great movie. I was rooting for Julianne Moore for Best Actress that year. Well..another story.

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Re: Excerpt from BBM screenplay
« Reply #5 on: Jan 15, 2006, 02:19 PM »



Wasn't there a Rock Hudson and Lana Turner or Particia Neal or somebody movie about the same thing...?  He was a gardener and she was a rich widow,  it's so vague to me, does anyone remember...?

Jim


I found it.  It was called "All that Heaven Allows" and it was Rock Hudson and Jane Wyman.  What a Coincidence, it's on Turner Classic Movies this afternoon.  "A place in the Sun" with Montgomery Clift and the most beautiful Elizebeth Taylor is on now.  Talk to you guys later...

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Re: Excerpt from BBM screenplay
« Reply #6 on: Jan 15, 2006, 02:34 PM »



Wasn't there a Rock Hudson and Lana Turner or Particia Neal or somebody movie about the same thing...?  He was a gardener and she was a rich widow,  it's so vague to me, does anyone remember...?

Jim


I found it.  It was called "All that Heaven Allows" and it was Rock Hudson and Jane Wyman.  What a Coincidence, it's on Turner Classic Movies this afternoon.  "A place in the Sun" with Montgomery Clift and the most beautiful Elizebeth Taylor is on now.  Talk to you guys later...

Jim

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Re: Excerpt from BBM screenplay -- spoiler ---
« Reply #7 on: Jan 18, 2006, 08:32 AM »
Michelle Williams is brilliant in this scene. I could certainly feel her struggle, pain, and confusion. I cried for her too

This entire scene leaves me feeling conflicted.  On one hand, I feel happy that Ennis and Jack had found each other again; on the other hand, the anguish that Alma must have felt on this clear and rapid betrayal must have been unimaginable -- especially when one considers that nothing in her past has prepared her for this.  And you DO get this sense of helplessness in Michelle Williams' brilliant acting.  This and the powerful Thanksgiving scene should have earned her the Best Supporting Actress honor in the GG.

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Re: Excerpt from BBM screenplay -- spoiler ---
« Reply #8 on: Jan 18, 2006, 12:08 PM »
This entire scene leaves me feeling conflicted.  On one hand, I feel happy that Ennis and Jack had found each other again; on the other hand, the anguish that Alma must have felt on this clear and rapid betrayal must have been unimaginable -- especially when one considers that nothing in her past has prepared her for this.  And you DO get this sense of helplessness in Michelle Williams' brilliant acting.  This and the powerful Thanksgiving scene should have earned her the Best Supporting Actress honor in the GG.

That is right. We should start a new topic to discuss the female characters in this movie since Michelle and Anna did an amazing job as well. Michelle was robbed for GG Best Supporting Actress.  >:(

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Re: Excerpt from BBM screenplay
« Reply #9 on: Jan 27, 2006, 12:44 PM »
I always knew that I am attracted to guys at very young age - but didn't know what and why it was. Simple there was no proper explanation for my orientation. Confusion, I guess, is the word.

Very true, and my experience as well. Sometimes I blame my cultural environment for not having provided the tools to find out who I was myself sooner - but this is a different and OT story.

I think not only Alma, but also Ennis experiences the same - at least in the first part of the story.
To say "I'm not no queer" is not really a relief to him - he actually knows nothing but what he is experiencing first hand.

This is also I kike a lot one of the latest fishin trip scene (first one with Jack with his pornstache maybe), whne Ennis asks Jack if he sometimes has a feeling that somebody around him "knows".
I think Ennis is somehow accepting what he is - and what the two fo them are - at that point.
Of course what he can do and what he can't to change his life/lifestyle is another story but now he "knows" too.

To get back to the main topic, Michelle is outstanding in that scene. I won't have to many hopes about the Oscars but the four of them would really deserve it.
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Re: Excerpt from BBM screenplay -- spoiler ---
« Reply #10 on: Mar 10, 2006, 02:47 PM »
Michelle Williams gave a stunning performance. Her best moment in the film is when she sees Ennis and Jack kissing. I've seen the movie twice and both times, the audience laughed during that scene, but I think it was nervous laughter, because they know what she's going to see when she opens the door.  But it's amazing how in just a matter of seconds she transforms from a trusting, if confused, housewife, to a person filled with shock and anxiety, all without speaking a word.

Entertainment Weekly describes it like this:

Ang Lee admits that if he knew Michelle Williams only from her TV work, six long years on the teen sudser Dawson's Creek, he probably wouldn't ever have considered her for Brokeback Mountain. Luckily for her, Lee's never heard of Capeside. Instead, he fell hard for Williams' small and graceful turn in The Station Agent, and later for her keen sense of vulnerability in person. "Something about her," he says, "you look at her and you wish her happiness."

As Alma, a Wyoming ranch hand's afterthought of a wife, Williams is a revelation. In the Annie Proulx story on which the movie is based, Alma is an angry flint of a woman who turns to steel when she realizes that her husband may be gay. Williams plays her instead as a lost, lonely girl, in over her head with bills and two babies, desperate for some returned loyalty and affection from her man (played by real-life love Heath Ledger). In one of the film's many gut-punch moments, she opens the door and sees her husband kissing another man. Williams' face pools with color, and then tightens and blanches - the vision of her life as she knew it evaporating right there - before she retreats into their apartment without a word. "Both she and Heath were so understated," marvels Lee. "But for her, it's even less work. It feels like no performing, like she was living in that place. I really love that. It doesn't come very often. Trust me - I've made nine movies."

Williams knows what a gift of a role she received. "They're the kind of words you wait you whole life to be able to say," she says of the script. And now, at 25, with her first Oscar nomination, maybe people will finally let her leave Dawson's Creek in the past.



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Re: Excerpt from BBM screenplay -- spoiler ---
« Reply #11 on: Mar 11, 2006, 02:13 PM »
Thanks for posting that, Johnny,

it gets what I always felt about Alma and Michelle perfectly!

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Re: Excerpt from BBM screenplay -- spoiler ---
« Reply #12 on: Mar 15, 2006, 07:00 PM »
Michelle's understated performance was perfection.  Her role was not a big one, compared to Heath's and Jake's roles...but a very important one to the story as a whole.  I am glad that they chose to portray her in the 'soft and quiet' way that they did, instead of the 'steely, bitter' woman as in the short story...

If they did that, I think that it would have taken away from the powerful "Love Story" theme between Ennis and Jack...

I also personally think that Anne Hathaway's performance as Lureen was brilliant.  She played the character perfectly!  With all the commotion around Ennis, Jack and Alma, people often forget Lureen...

But then again...the whole cast in this movie was marvelous.  Perfect in every way!

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Re: Excerpt from BBM screenplay -- spoiler ---
« Reply #13 on: Mar 18, 2006, 07:00 PM »
I agree with Johnny completely about how great that scene was with Alma at the door.

Except for maybe the part about it being nervous laughter. The first two times I saw the movie at a daytime matinee, an older audience, there was no laughter at that scene and the audience was very sombre when the movie ended, very touched. The last time I saw it, on a half price Tuesday night, a much younger audience, young 20s, I think the entire audience laughed at the scene, and they chattered like crazy happily after the movie. I was very annoyed and surprised by the laughter, but upon reflection, it occured to me that humour is basically the element of surprise. And what bigger surprise than to open the door and see your reticent hubby in a full mouth passionate kiss with another man, in those days, when you probably never even knew that thing occured? From that perspective, it is funny. Its just that we're too involved in the movie, take it too seriously, to see the humour. That audience must have been less involved, either because they were younger, more straight, unmarried, or they didnt personally relate to the movie as much.  I dont think it was nervous laughter, it was very loud and lasted too long.  To a lot of people, unfortunately, this is just another movie.

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Re: Excerpt from BBM screenplay -- spoiler ---
« Reply #14 on: Mar 18, 2006, 07:06 PM »
I agree with you. I had the same experience when I watched BBM in Paris. The audience laughed quite often, but in a good way.
And I remember the first time I saw this scene, I couldn't help smiling. It's true that this situation is at first glance a litlle bit funny. It's just few seconds later when you see Alma's distress and tears that you're feeling what she goes through.
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« Reply #15 on: Jul 04, 2006, 02:13 PM »
Doesn't anyone have the script for the kissing scene? In all interviews, Jake's always going on about the exact coreography ("then I'll throw you to the wall" and so on).. would be fun to read

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« Reply #16 on: Jul 15, 2006, 02:49 PM »
wow thAT WAS GREAT i cried also in that scene :\'( it really showed the relationship between ennis and alma and between ennis and jack
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