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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11910 on: Nov 10, 2010, 10:27 AM »
Jack:  Shit...that's hard.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11911 on: Nov 11, 2010, 08:09 AM »
Both boys stare straight ahead for awhile while Ennis's words sink in. Maybe Ennis never realized how hard it was either until he had to speak the words just now. Finally, Ennis reaches in his jacket pocket for the remains of the cig he'd flicked out earlier while waiting in front of the trailer. Puts it in his mouth and reaches towards Jack whose been fingering the lighter in his right hand while it rests on the bar.

ENNIS: Can I?

Jack awakes from his thoughts, glances at Ennis, hands him the lighter. Ennis lights the butt.
Scene fades out.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11912 on: Nov 11, 2010, 11:10 AM »
New scene; the boys are preparing for their trip to the mountain.Ennis is tying the saddle of his horse,while the Basque is talking without stopping:

-Basque:-Don't let them stray. Joe will have your ass if you do. Only thing, don't never order soup. Them soup boxes are hard to pack.

-Ennis :-I don't eat soup. ( to Jack,shouting ) :-You wanna watch it there! That horse has a low startle point.
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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11913 on: Nov 12, 2010, 10:44 AM »
Jack gets his horse under control, rides up to Ennis, says confidently:  I doubt there's a filly that can throw me.  Let's git unless you wanna stand around tyin' knots all day.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11914 on: Nov 12, 2010, 01:20 PM »
In the first of many wordless scenes, Ennis "replies" to Jack with a look filled with expression . . . .

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11915 on: Nov 14, 2010, 12:57 PM »
You forgot:

 Jack is trying out his horse while Ennis checks with the Basque on the sheep and supplies,

Basque:  Don't let them stray...  Joe will have your a** if you do!  One more thing...  Don't never order soup... Them soup boxes are hard to pack!

Ennis:  Don't eat soup.

( Only then he  turns to Jack about a horse...   :)  )
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11916 on: Nov 14, 2010, 03:05 PM »
huh? see #11912  ???
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11917 on: Nov 17, 2010, 10:22 AM »
Next scene: We see our boys beginning the journey to the mountain,driving the sheep through hills and rivers.Once there we see them also doing some tasks for the campside.After,Jack is alone on the mountain by night,sitting in a trunk and smoking;he looks at the campside,trying to feel himself closer to Ennis,but only the fire is seen.
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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11918 on: Nov 21, 2010, 11:55 PM »
New Scene:  In the main camp.  Ennis is cooking breakfast, heating cans of beans and frying food. Jack is sitting on a log, yawns, after a long night with the sheep.

Jack: Oh sh*t!  I can't wait until I get my own spread and I won't have to put up with Joe Aguirre's crap no more!
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11919 on: Nov 23, 2010, 09:19 AM »
-Ennis :-I'm saving for a place myself. Alma and me, we're gonna get married when I come down off this mountain.


-Jack(he seems not to hear his fellow) :-Shit, that "Stay with the sheep, no fire" bullshit. Aguirre got no right making us do something against the rules.

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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11920 on: Nov 27, 2010, 09:41 AM »
Two wordless Ennis scenes (where he's trying to figure out this guy he's spending the summer with), follow . . .

Ennis silently reflects on Jack's complaint about Aguirre:


Jack mounts his horse to return to the sheep, his horse chop-hops a bit,
Ennis looks on, silently watches Jack ride away.


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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11921 on: Nov 28, 2010, 01:37 PM »
The next scenes are wordless too and they show us the boys daily life.In the first one,we see Jack sleeping up on the mountain while taking care of the sheep.In the second one,Ennis is inside the tent in a rainy day; while he's carving a little wooden horse he looks up to the mountain as if he was looking for Jack.In the third scene,this last one is going to the mountain again on his horse after having had dinner with Ennis.

-Jack:-No more beans ¡
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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11922 on: Dec 05, 2010, 08:28 AM »
The montage of scenes from daily life on the mountain continues with the camp tender, Ennis, scrubbing out the coffee pot in the stream, looking up at the mountain (in envy?) and in Annie's words . ". . Ennis looked across a great gulf and sometimes saw Jack, a small dot moving across a high meadow, as an insect moves across a tablecloth . . ."

Next we see Jack, up on the mountain moving the sheep, he spies a coyote and impulsively jumps into action, takes aim, fires, and misses, the coyote trots away . . .

JACK (to himself): Dammit. . . Shit!

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11923 on: Dec 05, 2010, 03:08 PM »
Next scene: Ennis has gone to the place under the bridge where he must meet the Basque in order to command the food supplies.He is looking the supplie's list a little surprised.

-Ennis : -I don't know.

-Basque :-Something wrong?

-Ennis : -Yeah, so what... Why didn't we get the powdered milk and the spuds?

-Basque : -That's all we got!

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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11924 on: Dec 06, 2010, 05:48 AM »
- But you didn't eat soup.
- Yeah, but I'm sick of beans.
- Too early in this summer to be sick a'beans (love that line).
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11925 on: Dec 10, 2010, 10:50 AM »
Next scene: We see Ennis coming back to the campfire with the supplies,when a bear appears in front of him.The horse begins to fear and jump and the mules want to run away.

-Ennis ( to the mules ) :-Hold on! Whoa... Shit! Whoa! Come back here!

Meanwhile,Jack returns to the campfire and,surprised by seeing there's nobody there,sits on a trunk drinking whiskey and waiting for Ennis...and the food ¡.

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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11926 on: Dec 29, 2010, 07:17 AM »
We hear the breaking of small branches and the approach of horses hooves.

ENNIS: Whoa there, whoa. Ah, . (as Ennis dismounts). . f**kit. There ya' bast . . .

JACK: (Indignant) Where the hell you been? Been up with the sheep all day I get down here hungry as hell and all I find is beans.

ENNIS: (muttering something) storms past Jack, his head all bloodied.

JACK: Whut in the hell happened Ennis?

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11927 on: Dec 29, 2010, 07:25 AM »
Ennis: - I came on a bear is what happened.
Jack gives him a flask.
Ennis: - Got whisky or some?

Jack wets his necktie and tries to wipe Ennis's blood off. Ennis, angry, takes the necktie from Jack and starts wiping himself.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11928 on: Dec 29, 2010, 10:16 AM »
Ennis keeps on explaining what has happenned with the bear:

-Goddamn horse spooked and the mules took off...and scattered food everywhere. Beans is about all we got left. Got whiskey or something? Dumb-ass mule! I can't believe that...God damn...

When he insists in wiping himself,Jack looks deceived for a while.After that,he talks about the food's problem:

-Well, we gotta do something about this food situation. Maybe I'll shoot one of the sheep.

-Ennis : -Yeah, what if Aguirre finds out, huh? We're supposed to guard the sheep, not eat them.

-Jack : -What's the matter with you? There are a thousand of them.



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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
("If I asked")
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11929 on: Dec 29, 2010, 11:21 AM »
    Ennis continues to wipe his head, looks even more troubled

ENNIS: I'll stick with beans.

    Jack turns away from Ennis, and almost like a pouting child declares.

JACK: Well I won't.

    New scene. New day. Ennis is carefully staring down the barrel of his rifle while Jack watches on. Fires a shot and an elk drops to the ground.
    Jack overcome with excitement jumps up, gives Ennis a friendly shove.

JACK: Whooee! Yeah!

    Ennis turns and returns the favor landing Jack on his butt, then confidently turns back and grinning confidently says:

ENNIS: Gettin' tired a your dumbass missin'.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11930 on: Dec 30, 2010, 12:45 PM »
-Jack(laughing very happily):-What...? (Immediately,he gets closer to Ennis-actually,it seems as if he was going to kiss him...-to tell him almost in a whisper:-Let's get a move on. Don't want the Game and Fish to catch us with no elk.

In the following scene,we see the two of them sitting one by the other's side and eating eagerly the elk this night.

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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11931 on: Jan 02, 2011, 08:44 AM »
JACK complaining..: Arghh, ugh. . . . yeah, I'm commutin' four hours a day, I come in for breakfast, I go back to the sheep. Evening get 'em bedded down, come in for supper, go back to the sheep. Spend half the night checkin' for damn coyotes'.
slams his rifle down next to Ennis to get his attention, continues...   Aguirre got no right ta' make me do this!  
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11932 on: Jan 02, 2011, 09:24 AM »
ENNIS: You wanna' switch - I wouldn't mind sleepin' out there.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11933 on: Jan 02, 2011, 10:40 AM »
JACK:  That ain't the point . . .
Point is, we both oughtta' be in this camp.
Goddamn pup tent smells like cat piss or worse.

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11934 on: Jan 03, 2011, 10:58 AM »
ENNIS: I wouldn't mind bein' out there.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11935 on: Jan 04, 2011, 04:00 AM »
Jack:  Well I'm happy to switch but I warn you...I can't cook worth a damn...But I'm pretty good with a can opener...   :)
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11936 on: Jan 04, 2011, 01:23 PM »
-Ennis : -You can't be no worse than me, then.

Next scene:Ennis is preparing his horse to ride up to the mountain with the sheep.Jack approaches.

-Jack : -You won't get much sleep, I'll tell you that.

-Ennis : -Yup. ( to his horse ) Come on...

Jack remains looking at him as he's riding away,with an expression mixed with pleasure when admires his friend's look and with satisfaction for having got something more from him.



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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11937 on: Jan 13, 2011, 09:53 AM »
Ennis comes back and starts undressing, taking off his shirt and socks:
- I've shot a coyote up there. Big son of a bitch. Balls are the size of apples, looked as if he could eat himself a camel. Do you need some of that hot water?
- No, it's all yours.
Jack is peeling potatoes, and Ennis - absolutely nacked with only his hat on - is washing himself - every part of his body. Jack keeps peeling and smoking, trying not to look at his partner, but the way he swallows and chews the cigar butt shows his excitement...
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11938 on: Jan 13, 2011, 10:52 AM »
Next scene:Jack is pissing giving his back to Ennis,who is eating beans.He murmures an ambiguous "Mmmmmh" that we can't atribute only to how good the beans are...Jack finishes and approaches to his friend showing in an exxaggerated way his buckle and,maybe,something else where he wants him to put his eyes.

-Ennis:-I don't rodeo much myself. I mean, what's the point of riding some piece of stock for eight seconds ?

-Jack (sitting on a truck):-Money's a good point.



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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
("If I asked")
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11939 on: Jan 14, 2011, 07:18 AM »
Quote from: myprivatejack on Jan 13, 2011, 10:52 AM
Jack is pissing giving his back to Ennis,who is eating beans.He murmures an ambiguous "Mmmmmh" that we can't atribute only to how good the beans are...Jack finishes and approaches to his friend showing in an exxaggerated way his buckle and,maybe,something else where he wants him to put his eyes.
;D ;D ;D :^^) I LOVE YOU, MPJ!!!! &**)

Ennis speaks about his parents death and his sister getting married, no more room for him...
- That's how me end up here.
Jack looks a bit puzzled and pleased at the same time.
Ennis: What?
- That's more words that you spoke in the past two weeks.
- That's the most that I speak in a year. (continuing) Don't rodeo much myself, my dad said rodeos were all fuckups.
- The hell they are.
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