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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10560 on: Apr 18, 2008, 05:09 PM »

Jack looks at Jimbo, lowers his eyes and looks at Jimbo again

Jimbo tightens up a little and says:  No thanks, Cowboy.  If I let every buckaroo I pulled a bull off of buy me a beer I'd a been an alcoholic long ago.

Jimbo takes his beer and walks away
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10561 on: Apr 19, 2008, 02:03 PM »
Barman looks at Jack, who's clearly embarrassed

Barman: Ever try calf-roping?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10562 on: Apr 19, 2008, 02:14 PM »
Jack (angrily): do i look like i can afford a f**king ropeing horse?
( he leaves in a bad mood )
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10563 on: Apr 19, 2008, 02:16 PM »
New scene: 4th July fireworks, night time.

Ennis and Alma are there for a picnic with Alma Jnr and Jenny. 

Ennis: we should move closer

Alma: Let's not, Jenny'll get scairt.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10564 on: Apr 20, 2008, 11:06 AM »
Ennis:  (holding Junior) Here we go darlin'
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10565 on: Apr 21, 2008, 11:57 AM »

Two scraggly looking guys in leather jackets sit down near Ennis and Alma

Guy #1:  Whoopee!  Look at this crowd.  There's bound to be lots of p**sy on the hoof in a crowd like this.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10566 on: Apr 27, 2008, 01:10 PM »
Biker #2 All swelled up with patriotic feeling and ready to be humped like a frog.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10567 on: May 01, 2008, 12:43 PM »

Biker #1:  Where do you think the most pu**y's at?  Las Vegas or California?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10568 on: May 05, 2008, 01:26 PM »
Biker #2:  Hell, how would I know....but if you make it between Wyoming and Montana, I'd pick Wyoming in a minute.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10569 on: May 05, 2008, 03:16 PM »

Ennis, sitting down, turns slowly and looks over his shoulder at the two bikers

Ennis:  hey, you wanna keep it down?  I got two little girls over here.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10570 on: May 07, 2008, 09:25 AM »
Biker:  "F*ck you..."   Turning to his buddy, he mutters, "Asshole, probably stopped puttin' it to his wife after the kids come, you know how that is..."  as his buddy chuckles.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10571 on: May 07, 2008, 12:45 PM »

Ennis starts to get up, and Alma grabs his arm

Alma:  Let's move, Ennis.  Let's just move.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10572 on: May 07, 2008, 12:49 PM »
Ennis  gets up, goes toward the bikers and growls, "Now, I don't want any trouble from you, you need to shut your slopbucket mouth, ya' hear me?" showing his fist...
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10573 on: May 08, 2008, 11:34 AM »

One of the bikers stands up and faces Ennis.

Biker #1:  You should listen to your old lady...

Ennis:       Yeah, is that right?

Biker #1:   and move somewhere else...
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10574 on: May 08, 2008, 11:55 AM »
Ennis grabs him, shoves him aside roughly.  He gives a roundhouse kick at the other one, who goes a-flyin'.

"Whut about it?  You wanta lose half your fu**in' teeth, huh?"  he growls at the first biker.
"Not tonight Bud, I'd sure rather not,"

Fireworks explode,  Alma is in shock, and Ennis just stands there, silhouetted against the brightly lit-up sky.
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"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10575 on: May 08, 2008, 01:12 PM »

New scene:  Childress, TX (at a rodeo)

Lureen Newsome (wearing a bright red rodeo shirt and red cowboy hat) is riding a brown quarter horse and barrel racing

Announcer:  There she goes, Ladies and Gentlemen, from right here in CHILDRESS, TEXAS!  Miss Lureen Newsome!  And her time is....(pause)...Sixteen and nine.  Let's give her a big hand!
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10576 on: May 09, 2008, 08:06 AM »
Jack grabs Lureen's red cowgirl hat that flew off her head .  As she rides back to Jack to retrieve it, he holds it out to her and simply says, "Ma'am?"

Lureen clicks her tongue at him , gives him a smile and then rides off.
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"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10577 on: May 09, 2008, 01:02 PM »

Later:  at the rodeo, Jack is bull riding, hanging on for dear life

Announcer:  Next up, is newcomer Jack Twist, all the way from Lightning Flat, Wyoming!  He's on board Sleepy tonight...let's hope he's not!

Jack is thrown, rolls over, stands up and runs to the fence, but the bull is not chasing him.

Announcer:  Let's see what our judges have to say.  That sure looked like the winning ride to me!

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10578 on: May 13, 2008, 01:18 PM »
Announcer:
Whoa, watch out there, fellah!  He's comin' for ya.  Send in the clowns!  A fine ride for Mr. Twist.  Four seconds for him.Give 'em a hand, folks, our very own rodeo clowns!
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10579 on: May 13, 2008, 01:51 PM »
Scene changes to the Bar

Jack: I'd like to buy Jimbo a beer. Best rodeo clown I ever worked with.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10580 on: May 13, 2008, 02:28 PM »
Jimbo:No thanks, cowboy.  If I was to let every rodeo hand I pulled a bull off of buy me liquor I'd been an alcoholic long ago... (there is something, a frisson, a vibe, that gives the clown an uneasy feeling... although he remains perfectly friendly... takes his beer, stands up) pulling bulls off you buckaroos is just my job.  Save your money for your next entry fee, cowboy.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10581 on: May 13, 2008, 05:20 PM »
Quote from: jesseanne21 on May 09, 2008, 01:02 PM
Later:  at the rodeo, Jack is bull riding, hanging on for dear life

Announcer:  Next up, is newcomer Jack Twist, all the way from Lightning Flat, Wyoming!  He's on board Sleepy tonight...let's hope he's not!

Jack is thrown, rolls over, stands up and runs to the fence, but the bull is not chasing him.

Announcer:  Let's see what our judges have to say.  That sure looked like the winning ride to me!



hpv, LuvJackNasty, and bruxa23 - you are repeating an earlier scene (see TOP OF PAGE - reply #10560)

NEW SCENE:  In rodeo bar

Lureen Newsome is talking to a tall, fair-haired cowboy. She shakes her head the cowboy walks away.

 Jack Twist is seated at the bar.  Jack glances at Lureen and she smiles at him.

Jack (to Bartender):  You know that girl?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10582 on: May 14, 2008, 10:09 AM »
Bartender:I sure do.Lureen Newsome.Her dad sells farm equipment.I mean,big farm equipment.100,000-dollars tractors,shit like that.
Lureen realises Jack is looking at her and walks to him,smiling.He's a little timid and tries to dissimulate.
Lureen:What are you waiting for,cowboy? A mating call?.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10583 on: May 14, 2008, 01:04 PM »

New scene:  Jack and Lureen dancing (and smiling and talking) to "No One's Gonna Love You Like Me."  Jack pulls Lureen close.
Jack looks really SAD.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10584 on: May 14, 2008, 01:18 PM »
Next scene, Jack and Lureen are making out in the car.

Lureen:
You don't think I'm too fast, do you? Maybe I should put on the brakes?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10585 on: May 14, 2008, 01:38 PM »

Jack is lying on his back in the back seat of the car and Lureen is on top of him.  Jack smiles up at Lureen.

Jack:  Fast or Slow, I just like the direction you're going in.

Lureen looks a little startled for a moment, then gives Jack a big smile. 
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10586 on: May 16, 2008, 08:21 AM »
Jack looks back at her and with a smile answers:
 I guess you're in a hurry.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10587 on: May 16, 2008, 12:14 PM »

Lureen:  My daddy's the hurry.  He expects me home with his car by midnight.

Lureen leans down and kisses Jack.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10588 on: May 22, 2008, 05:38 PM »
New Scene:  Enniss' truck pulls  in front of the super market, with his two daughters ,
enters in, meets Monroe, then a short dialogue evolves :
"Hey, Monroe,"
"Hey, Ennis"
"Is Alma here?"
"Uh, yeah, she's in the condiments aisle"
"The whut?"
"Ketchup."
"Thanks."       :)
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"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10589 on: May 27, 2008, 02:09 PM »

Ennis, carrying Alma Jr. and Jenny in his arms, walks up to Alma who is putting cans on shelves

Alma:  Hi, Honey?  What are you all doing here?
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