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Offline jesseanne21

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11310 on: Jul 24, 2009, 03:23 PM »

Jack is irritated when Ennis takes the bandanna away so quickly.  Jack sits down near Ennis and looks in the fire.

Jack:  Well, we've got to do something about this food situation.  Maybe I'll shoot one of the sheep.

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11311 on: Jul 24, 2009, 08:22 PM »
Ennis:  What if Aguirre finds out, huh?  We're supposed to guard the sheep, not eat 'em.

Jack, irritated:  What's the matter with you?  There's a thousand  of 'em.

Ennis:  I'll stick with beans.

Jack, determined:  Well I won't.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11312 on: Jul 25, 2009, 02:37 AM »
New scene: Ennis carefully aims at an elk, levels his gun, fires. elk falls.

Jack: Whoeee!! Yeah!!
Ennis: Gettin' tired a' your dumbass missin' . . .    :)


(But we all know that he'll do anything at this point to please Jack...)
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11313 on: Jul 25, 2009, 02:45 AM »
Jack:Let's get a move on. Don't want the Game and Fish catch us with no deer.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11314 on: Jul 25, 2009, 08:16 AM »
The boys sit side-by-side in front of the fire and silently enjoy a meal of "grilled" elk.

New Scene. Ennis, camp tender, is fixin' the meal as Jack slowly saunters in a horseback. Jack groans loudly like an old man as he dismounts, then begins his gripe . . .

JACK: Arghh, ugh. . . . yeah, I'm commutin' four hours a day. (Ennis pays little attention keeps busy with the meal) I come in for breakfast, I go back to the sheep. Evening get 'em bedded down, come in for supper, go back to the sheep. Spend half the night checkin' for damn coyotes'. (slams his rifle down next to Ennis to get his attention) Aguirre got no right ta' make me do this! 
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11315 on: Jul 25, 2009, 01:26 PM »
Ennis:You wanna switch?  I wouldn't mind sleepin' out there.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11316 on: Jul 25, 2009, 03:39 PM »
Jack, still complaining:  That aint the point.  The point is, we both oughta be in this camp.  And the goddam pup tent smells like cat piss or worse...
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11317 on: Jul 27, 2009, 07:04 AM »
Ennis: I wouldn't mind bein' out there...


Jack looks momentarily incredulous.


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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11318 on: Jul 27, 2009, 08:49 AM »
JACK: Well, I'm happy to switch w' you, but, I warn ya' I can't cook worth a damn. . . . I am pretty good with a can opener though. (Jack cracks a little smile at his own little joke)

ENNIS: Um, you can't be no worse than me then. . . . Here ya' go. (Ennis "serves" up dinner)
« Last Edit: Jul 27, 2009, 09:08 AM by jackster »
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11319 on: Jul 27, 2009, 11:12 AM »
Next scene.Ennis rides on his horse for going up in the mountain.

-Jack :-You won't get much sleep, I'll tell you that.

-Ennis :-Yup. ( to his horse ) Come on...

He gets farther while Jack is looking at him with a little smile.

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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11320 on: Jul 28, 2009, 07:59 AM »
New scene.  Jack is opening a can of beans for supper while Ennis takes his shirt and socks off prior to washing himself...

Ennis (to Jack):  Shot a coyote up there... big SOB... balls the size a' apples... he looked like he could eat himself a camel!  Y'want some of this hot water?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11321 on: Jul 28, 2009, 09:35 AM »
Jack,who is supposed to be a little nervous before the little striptease of his fellow,gets soaked with the tin's sauce.

-Jack:Shit...It's all yours.

Inmediately,we see how Ennis takes off all his clothes and takes a bath,while Jack,near to us,is trying to take a look while peeling potatoes.We can observe he's rather excited.
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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11322 on: Jul 29, 2009, 06:39 AM »
You can sense that Jack is watching Ennis from the corner of his eyes -- watching Ennis wash his armpits and privates.  jack gulps ever so slightly, indicating the suppressed measure of his unease/excitement...

New Scene.  Jack has just finished making water.  He zips up and approaches Ennis, who is finishing up his can of beans. 

Ennis: Hmmmmmm...

Jack's hands frame the rodeo bet buckle, raps it for emphasis, and shows it proudly to Ennis.  Ennis continues:

Ennis:  Don''t rodeo much m'self... I mean... what's the point of ridin' some piece of stock for 8 seconds?




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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11323 on: Jul 29, 2009, 08:40 AM »
their friendly banter continues . . . .

JACK: Money's a good point.

ENNIS: True enough.  If you don't get stomped winnin' it.  Huh?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11324 on: Jul 29, 2009, 03:01 PM »

Jack takes a drink from the whiskey bottle:  My old man was bull rider, pretty well known in his day, though he kept his secrets to himself.  NEVER taught me a thing, NEVER once come to see me ride.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11325 on: Jul 30, 2009, 06:29 AM »
A momentary awkward pause.  jack tries to transfer the focus of the conversation away from himself.

Jack: Your brother and sister do right by you?


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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11326 on: Jul 30, 2009, 03:17 PM »

Ennis clears his throat and replies:  They did the best they could after my folks was gone, considering they didn't leave us nother but $24 in a coffee can. 
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11327 on: Jul 31, 2009, 06:26 AM »


Ennis continues...

Ennis: I got me a year of high school before the transmission went on the pickup...  my sis left... married a roughneck... moved to Casper...  me and ma brother... we got ourselves some work on a ranch up near Worland until I was 19 and then he got married!  No more room for me!  That's how come me end up here....

He notices Jack grinning.

Ennis: Whut?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11328 on: Jul 31, 2009, 08:25 AM »
JACK: Friend, that's more words than you spoke in the past two weeks.

   Jack crack a little smile, realizing he's just let Ennis know that he'd noticed.


ENNIS: Hell, that's the most I spoke in a year.

    Ennis smiles back, happy to learn that Jack had noticed.
                    They both seem pleased and surprised by this new found intimacy.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11329 on: Jul 31, 2009, 12:30 PM »

There is a short silence.

Ennis, continues with a small smile on his face:  My dad, now, he was a fine roper...didn't rodeo much, though.  Without moving his head, Ennis gives Jack a quick, sideways glance.  He thought rodeo cowboys was all f*ck-ups.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11330 on: Jul 31, 2009, 06:14 PM »
Jack, smiling:  The hell they are!
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11331 on: Jul 31, 2009, 07:09 PM »

Jack, laughing, gets up and walks toward Ennis and yells:  Yee-haw, yee-haw! 

Jack starts jumping around, twisting and waving his hat in the air:   I'm spurring his guts out, waving at the girls in the stands!  He's kicking to high heaven, but he can't dashboard ME!  No way!  Yee-haw!

Ennis is watching Jack and laughing.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11332 on: Aug 01, 2009, 12:16 AM »
Quote from: jesseanne21 on Jul 31, 2009, 07:09 PM
Ennis is watching Jack and laughing.

OT - it is the most beautiful smile from Ennis in the entire movie.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11333 on: Aug 02, 2009, 11:38 AM »

ENNIS:laughin' as he watches Jack fall over himself in the pile of supplies..

I think my dad wus right .
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11334 on: Aug 03, 2009, 07:42 AM »
New scene. Boys are moving camp to a new location, we see 'em slowly herding the sheep up the mountain with Santaolalla's beautiful background music. They find a new spot near a stream, begin to set up camp. Jack take's a break, stretches out and plays his harmonica while Ennis finishes erecting the tent. Ennis stands back, looking at his work (while Jack's lounging):

ENNIS: Tent don't look right.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11335 on: Aug 03, 2009, 08:20 AM »
(hpv, thanks so much for that pic of beautiful smile - I love it and who won't fall for Ennis with that smile?)

Jack, let it be..it ain't going anywhere.

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11336 on: Aug 03, 2009, 11:03 AM »
Quote from: ethan on Aug 03, 2009, 08:20 AM
(hpv, thanks so much for that pic of beautiful smile - I love it and who won't fall for Ennis with that smile?)
I couldn't resist... and you right.that is a most adorable smile...  <^(
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Ennis(continues to complain):
 .... that harmonica don't sound quite right either.....


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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11337 on: Aug 04, 2009, 08:36 AM »
Ennis (listens to Jack's harmonica playing):  That harmonica don't sound quite right either... 
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11338 on: Aug 04, 2009, 08:58 AM »
Jack: That's 'cause it got kinda flattened when that mare threw me.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11339 on: Aug 04, 2009, 10:24 AM »
Ennis continues to fuss with the tent, ignoring Jack's "let it be" plea.

ENNIS: Oh yeah? Thought you said that mare couldn't throw you!
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