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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10050 on: Jun 18, 2007, 06:40 PM »
Next scene, Ennis working with the road work team, Timmy, one of the co-worker talks incessantly:

My old lady's tryin' to get me to quit this job, says I'm getting too old to be breakin' my back shoveling asphalt...

I told her strong backs and weak minds run in my family.  Didn't think that was too funny...

I told her keeps me fit.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10051 on: Jun 20, 2007, 08:23 AM »
New scene, Joe Aguirre's Farm & Ranch Employment trailer early summer 1964, he hears a knock on the door:

Aguirre:

Yeah?

    Jack enters, door slams behind him.

Well, look what the wind blew in.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10052 on: Jun 20, 2007, 12:21 PM »
Jack:
Hi Mr. Aquirre, wonderin' if you was needin' any help this summer.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10053 on: Jun 23, 2007, 05:18 AM »
Joe Aguirre:

You're wastin' your time here.
« Last Edit: Jun 23, 2007, 11:30 AM by jackster »
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10054 on: Jun 23, 2007, 02:29 PM »
You got nothing? nothing up on Brokeback?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10055 on: Jun 23, 2007, 04:47 PM »
Joe Aguirre:

Ain't got no work for you.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10056 on: Jun 23, 2007, 05:38 PM »
Jack nods politely, starts to leave, then stops, turns back to Aguirre,

"Hey, Ennis Del Mar ain't been around, has he?" he says, with hope shimmering softly in his voice.
« Last Edit: Jun 23, 2007, 05:47 PM by Chico »
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'You know, it could be like this, just like this...always."

"Well, what's the point of ridin' a piece a stock fer eight seconds?"   *Grin*

"Our husbands ain't  the least bit interested in dancin'.  They ain't got a smidgeon a rhythm between 'em!"

(Ennis) "Well, speak fer yerself.  You may be a sinner, but I ain't yet had the opportunity."   (Jack) "Hmmm," handing Ennis the whiskey bottle.  *he chuckles* "

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10057 on: Jun 25, 2007, 05:12 PM »
Aguirre:  You boys sure found a way to make the time pass up here...

Twist, you guys wasn't gettin' paid to leave the dogs baby-sit the sheep while you stemmed the rose...

Get the hell out of my trailer!
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10058 on: Jun 25, 2007, 08:28 PM »
new scene: Lonesome line cabin on the vast high plains, Alma doing wash at the sink with a washboard. Radio playing, babies crying in the background. Ennis comes in from work on a ranch . . . .

Ennis:

How my girls doin'?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10059 on: Jun 26, 2007, 10:58 AM »
"They're alright...Jennie's still got her runny nose..." Alma replies.
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"Well, what's the point of ridin' a piece a stock fer eight seconds?"   *Grin*

"Our husbands ain't  the least bit interested in dancin'.  They ain't got a smidgeon a rhythm between 'em!"

(Ennis) "Well, speak fer yerself.  You may be a sinner, but I ain't yet had the opportunity."   (Jack) "Hmmm," handing Ennis the whiskey bottle.  *he chuckles* "

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10060 on: Jun 26, 2007, 04:19 PM »
Ennis goes over to the girls room, they're both crying, he picks up Jenny, tries to calm her down.

Alma (shouting from the kitchen): Ennis could you wipe Alma Jr's nose?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10061 on: Jun 26, 2007, 04:32 PM »
I could if i had three hands
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10062 on: Jun 26, 2007, 07:36 PM »
Ennis comforts both squalling babies, then, later, he wearily sits on his and Alma's bed in his pajama bottoms where we see just a hint of lovely buttcheek cleavage...

"Th' girls alright?" Alma murmurs as she comes up behind Ennis across the bed. She lovingly puts her arms around his shoulders from behind...Ennis closes his eyes and  longingly remembers a much too long ago dozy embrace in the arms of his beloved...
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'You know, it could be like this, just like this...always."

"Well, what's the point of ridin' a piece a stock fer eight seconds?"   *Grin*

"Our husbands ain't  the least bit interested in dancin'.  They ain't got a smidgeon a rhythm between 'em!"

(Ennis) "Well, speak fer yerself.  You may be a sinner, but I ain't yet had the opportunity."   (Jack) "Hmmm," handing Ennis the whiskey bottle.  *he chuckles* "

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10063 on: Jun 28, 2007, 09:09 PM »
Ennis:  Jenny stopped her coughin'.  I should take the girls into town this weekend.  Get 'em an ice cream.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10064 on: Jun 29, 2007, 10:12 AM »
"Oh, Ennis," Alma whispers, seductively against his neck, as Ennis heaves a deep sigh, "Can't we move to town?  Tired of these lonesome ol' ranches.   No one for Alma Jr to play with...besides, I'm scared for Jenny. I'm scared if she has one a them bad asthma spells..."
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'You know, it could be like this, just like this...always."

"Well, what's the point of ridin' a piece a stock fer eight seconds?"   *Grin*

"Our husbands ain't  the least bit interested in dancin'.  They ain't got a smidgeon a rhythm between 'em!"

(Ennis) "Well, speak fer yerself.  You may be a sinner, but I ain't yet had the opportunity."   (Jack) "Hmmm," handing Ennis the whiskey bottle.  *he chuckles* "

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10065 on: Jun 29, 2007, 10:42 AM »
Ennis:

No, rent in town's too high.
« Last Edit: Jun 30, 2007, 05:47 PM by jackster »
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10066 on: Jun 30, 2007, 05:40 PM »
Alma:

There's a cheap place in Riverton, over the laundrymat.  I bet I could fix it up real nice.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10067 on: Jul 01, 2007, 01:19 PM »
Ennis: (closing his eyes, bending and stretching his neck in the sexiest way imaginable  :d))

I bet you could fix this place up real nice if ya' wanted to.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10068 on: Jul 01, 2007, 09:19 PM »
Ennis, I know you'd like it too. A real home. Other kids for the girls to play with. Not so lonely, like you were raised. You don't want it so lonely, do you?  ::)
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10069 on: Jul 01, 2007, 09:23 PM »
Ennis:

Ths ain't to lonely, now, is it?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10070 on: Jul 03, 2007, 08:44 AM »
"Are you sure the girls are asleep?" Alma murmurs on a soft gasp as Ennis cups her breast and rolls his body partially over and on top of hers. 
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'You know, it could be like this, just like this...always."

"Well, what's the point of ridin' a piece a stock fer eight seconds?"   *Grin*

"Our husbands ain't  the least bit interested in dancin'.  They ain't got a smidgeon a rhythm between 'em!"

(Ennis) "Well, speak fer yerself.  You may be a sinner, but I ain't yet had the opportunity."   (Jack) "Hmmm," handing Ennis the whiskey bottle.  *he chuckles* "

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10071 on: Jul 04, 2007, 04:43 AM »
Ennis:

I'm sure.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10072 on: Jul 05, 2007, 05:07 PM »
Sighs, moans and kisses as Ennis and Alma begin their lovemaking.  "C'mere" Alma whimpers as she pulls Ennis closer, facing her. 

Ennis, however, perhaps aching to be with his one true beloved, closes his eyes, flips Alma  over onto her stomach and takes her, desperately trying to imagine he is making love to Jack, again, back up on Brokeback, that summer that got 'em good. 

Cut to rodeo as Jack and the bull he is riding crash out of the gate.     

"Let 'er rip and snort, boys, Twist hangin' on fer dear life..."  After Jack is dumped from the bull, the rodeo clowns take over and allow him to head for the fence. 

"...Fine ride for Mr. Twist, four seconds for him..."

"SHIT!"  Jack curses, frustrated.

"Give 'em a hand, folks, our very own rodeo clowns..."
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'You know, it could be like this, just like this...always."

"Well, what's the point of ridin' a piece a stock fer eight seconds?"   *Grin*

"Our husbands ain't  the least bit interested in dancin'.  They ain't got a smidgeon a rhythm between 'em!"

(Ennis) "Well, speak fer yerself.  You may be a sinner, but I ain't yet had the opportunity."   (Jack) "Hmmm," handing Ennis the whiskey bottle.  *he chuckles* "

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10073 on: Jul 07, 2007, 08:34 AM »
New scene: Jack at the bar.

Jack: Like to buy Jimbo here a bear. best rodeo clown I've ever worked with.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10074 on: Jul 08, 2007, 09:31 PM »
Jimbo:  No thanks, cowboy.  If I was to let every rodeo hand I pulled a bull off of buy me a beer I'd been an alcoholic long ago...
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10075 on: Jul 09, 2007, 02:58 AM »
They both laugh, but then Jimbo senses something he doesn't like...

"pulling bulls off you buckaroos is just my job. So save your money for your next entry fee, cowboy."
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10076 on: Jul 09, 2007, 10:35 AM »
Jimbo tosses a dollar bill onto the bar, rolls his eyes at the bartender and strolls over to his buddies at the pool table, who gather around him in a protective circle.

Jack, humiliated, turns his head and stares at the group of macho he-men. 


"Y'ever try calf ropin'?"  the bartender snidely asks. 
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"Well, what's the point of ridin' a piece a stock fer eight seconds?"   *Grin*

"Our husbands ain't  the least bit interested in dancin'.  They ain't got a smidgeon a rhythm between 'em!"

(Ennis) "Well, speak fer yerself.  You may be a sinner, but I ain't yet had the opportunity."   (Jack) "Hmmm," handing Ennis the whiskey bottle.  *he chuckles* "

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10077 on: Jul 09, 2007, 01:23 PM »
do I look like I can afford a fing calfing horse?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10078 on: Jul 09, 2007, 11:23 PM »
Next scene, 4th of July, Ennis, Alma and the girls are looking for a place to sit in the crowd.

Ennis:  We should move closer
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10079 on: Jul 11, 2007, 02:52 PM »
Alma:  "No, c'mon, let's don't.  Jennie'll get scared"
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'You know, it could be like this, just like this...always."

"Well, what's the point of ridin' a piece a stock fer eight seconds?"   *Grin*

"Our husbands ain't  the least bit interested in dancin'.  They ain't got a smidgeon a rhythm between 'em!"

(Ennis) "Well, speak fer yerself.  You may be a sinner, but I ain't yet had the opportunity."   (Jack) "Hmmm," handing Ennis the whiskey bottle.  *he chuckles* "
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