Author Topic: BBM Recital (Read 2154840 times)

jackster · « **Reply #10410 on:** Feb 25, 2008, 08:45 AM »

NEW SCENE AT TRAILHEAD ON BROKEBACK MOUNTAIN
Sheep trucks unloading, Ennis packing his mules.

BASQUE: (watching Ennis)
Don't let 'em stray. Joe'll have your ass if you do.
Only thing, don't never order soup.

Them soup boxes are real hard to pack.

NoReins · « **Reply #10411 on:** Feb 25, 2008, 08:50 AM »

ENNIS: Well, I don't eat soup

jackster · « **Reply #10412 on:** Feb 25, 2008, 08:08 PM »

ENNIS:
(watching Jack trying to control his skittish mare)

You wanta' watch it there, that horse has a low startle point.

lancecowboy · « **Reply #10413 on:** Feb 25, 2008, 11:39 PM »

JACK:
(cocky)
I doubt there's a filly that can throw me.
Let's get, 'less you wanna stand around and tie knots all day.

ENNIS:
(looks longingly after Jack as his filly trots away)

jackster · « **Reply #10414 on:** Feb 26, 2008, 08:45 AM »

(Several beautiful scenes with no dialog)

The thousand sheep, dogs, horses, Jack and Ennis move up onto the mountainside.

Jack and Ennis tend the sheep, whistle at the dogs, then we see them both alone, lost in their own thoughts.

Ennis and Jack set up their camp by a stream.

Jack slowly rides off to spend the night alone with the sheep, looks longingly down the mountain at Ennis’s bright campfire.

In the morning he comes back to camp for breakfast with Ennis.

lancecowboy · « **Reply #10415 on:** Feb 26, 2008, 09:33 AM »

JACK finishes his breakfast.

JACK (bitching):

Shit. Can't wait 'til I got my own spread, won't have to put up with Joe Aguirre's crap no more.

jackster · « **Reply #10416 on:** Feb 26, 2008, 07:32 PM »

ENNIS:

Uh, I'm savin' for uh place myself. . . . uh, . . .

Alma an' me, we'll . . we'll be gettin' married when I come down off this mountain.

lancecowboy · « **Reply #10417 on:** Feb 26, 2008, 10:22 PM »

JACK:

Shit, that stay with the sheep, no fire bullshit. Aguirre's got no right makin' us do somthin' against the rules.

jackster · « **Reply #10418 on:** Feb 27, 2008, 12:28 PM »

several more beautiful scenes with no dialog -

Jack mounts his horse to head to the sheep, she crow hops a little, meanwhile . . .

Ennis watches him ride off (longingly?).

Jack’s up on the mountain, naps with the dogs and sheep.

Ennis down in camp whittles a wood horse to while away the time.

Next scene:

Ennis cleans up the campfire from a meal, Jack mounts his horse to ride back to the sheep.

JACK shouts back to Ennis as he rides off:

No more beans!

bluebrown · « **Reply #10419 on:** Feb 27, 2008, 05:42 PM »

JACK, up with the sheep now, holds his rifle, takes a bead on a big coyote. Shoots. Misses.
JACK:Dammit!

jackster · « **Reply #10420 on:** Feb 28, 2008, 06:50 AM »

New Scene
Ennis at the bridge with the Basque and the pack mules, Ennis shakes his head, steps back . . .

ENNIS

Uh, I dunno . . .

BASQUE

Sumthing wrong?

lancecowboy · « **Reply #10421 on:** Feb 28, 2008, 11:01 AM »

ENNIS: ( a look of disappointment )

Where's the powdered milk and the spuds?

NoReins · « **Reply #10422 on:** Feb 28, 2008, 11:05 AM »

BASQUE: It's all we got

jackster · « **Reply #10423 on:** Feb 28, 2008, 12:27 PM »

ENNIS:

Well, eh . . . ?

ah, well here's next weeks.

lancecowboy · « **Reply #10424 on:** Feb 28, 2008, 12:44 PM »

BASQUE: (looks at the list, and looks at Ennis with a knowing grin)

Thought you didn't eat soup!

hpv · « **Reply #10425 on:** Feb 28, 2008, 01:38 PM »

Ennis: Well, I'm sick of beans.

jackster · « **Reply #10426 on:** Feb 28, 2008, 03:52 PM »

BASQUE: (still grinning)

Too early in the summer to be sick a' beans.

myprivatejack · « **Reply #10427 on:** Mar 03, 2008, 11:34 AM »

Ennis leaves with the animals.Suddenly,a bear appears and the mule throw him on the ground.Ennis runs, trying also to pick some of the supplies.
Meanwhile,Jack returns to the camp and gets surprised of not finding Ennis.We see him,already by night,sitting next to the bonfire and drinking whiskey.At the end,Ennis arrives groaning and in bad humour.He doesn´t seem to realise his fellow is there.

NoReins · « **Reply #10428 on:** Mar 04, 2008, 06:59 AM »

JACK (in full on bitch mode): Where the hell you been? I'm up with the sheep all day, come back here hungry as hell and all I find is beans.

Ennis storms past him and Jack catches sight of the cut on his head. His tone softens and he continues,

What in the hell happened, Ennis?

keren_b · « **Reply #10429 on:** Mar 04, 2008, 07:04 AM »

Came upon a bear is what happened. Goddamn horse spooked and the mules took off, scattered food everywhere. Beans 'bout all we got left.

NoReins · « **Reply #10430 on:** Mar 04, 2008, 07:06 AM »

Jack takes off his bandana, wets it and presses it to Ennis's head. Ennis takes it off him, their fingers brushing. Jack then offers Ennis the water canteen but Ennis wants something stronger

ENNIS: You got whiskey or somethin'?

hpv · « **Reply #10431 on:** Mar 04, 2008, 10:48 AM »

Ennis takes the whiskey, all grumpy...mumbles... "Dumb ass mule."

Jack: Well, we gotta do somethin' about this food situation.....Maybe I'll shoot one of the sheep.

jackster · « **Reply #10432 on:** Mar 04, 2008, 11:04 AM »

ENNIS:

Whut if Aguirre finds out, huh? We're
supposed to guard the sheep, not eat 'em.

NoReins · « **Reply #10433 on:** Mar 04, 2008, 12:17 PM »

JACK: What's the matter with you? There's 1000 of 'em.

jackster · « **Reply #10434 on:** Mar 04, 2008, 01:09 PM »

ENNIS:

I'll stick with beans.

NoReins · « **Reply #10435 on:** Mar 04, 2008, 01:14 PM »

JACK: Well I won't.

jackster · « **Reply #10436 on:** Mar 04, 2008, 01:17 PM »

We see Ennis take aim, hear a gunshot, smoke, and see a large elk drop.

Jack smiling yells: Whoeee! Yeah! Hits Ennis on the shoulder.

Ennis turns and hits Jack back as he get up. They both laugh.

ENNIS:

Was gettin’ tired of your dumbass missin’.

NoReins · « **Reply #10437 on:** Mar 05, 2008, 07:54 AM »

JACK: Let's get a move on. Don't want the Fish and Game catch us with no elk.

myprivatejack · « **Reply #10438 on:** Mar 05, 2008, 09:56 AM »

Next secene:

We see them eating the elk,sitting by their side one to another.

jackster · « **Reply #10439 on:** Mar 06, 2008, 09:18 AM »

New scene:
Jack comes riding into camp on his horse while Ennis fixes supper.
Groans like an old man as he dismounts . . .

JACK:
Shit. Agh, Ugh. Ya' I'm commuting four hours a day.
I come in for breakfast, I go back to the sheep.
Evenin' get 'em bedded down, come in for supper,
Go back to the sheep,
Spend half the night checkin' for damn coyotes,
Aguirre got no right make me do this.

Author Topic: BBM Recital (Read 2154840 times)

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