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Offline jackster

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10740 on: Sep 26, 2008, 07:15 AM »
New Scene, cowboy bar:

Ennis finishes his beer, gets up. Waitress grabs his hand:

CASSIE: Just finished my shift, . . . wanna dance?

ENNIS: Well, uh, I was just (points to the men's room) on my way to the . .

CASSIE: I'm Cassie, Cassie Cartwright.

ENNIS: Ennis . . . DelMar.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10741 on: Sep 26, 2008, 09:06 AM »
They dance for while....


Ennis returns to the table, sits.
Ennis:  No more dancin' for me... I hope..
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"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10742 on: Sep 26, 2008, 09:36 AM »
Cassie: You're safe. My feet hurt.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10743 on: Sep 26, 2008, 04:03 PM »

Cassie and Ennis sit down opposite each other at a table.  Cassie takes off her shoes and rubbing one of her feet.  Ennis smiles at her.

Ennis:  Hard work, is it?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10744 on: Sep 27, 2008, 08:33 PM »
Yeah, drunks like you demanding beer after beer, smoking. Gets tiresome.
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You may say I'm a dreamer But I'm not the only one I hope someday you'll join us And the world will live as one ~ Imagine- J. Lennon

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10745 on: Sep 28, 2008, 01:22 AM »
Cassie:  So... What do you do Ennis Del Mar?
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"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10746 on: Sep 29, 2008, 05:45 AM »
 Cassie puts her feet in Ennis's, ahem, lap.

ENNIS:

What a' you doin'?

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10747 on: Sep 29, 2008, 09:10 AM »
Cassie: Trying to get a foot rub,dummy.

Ennis: Allright.(He begins to rub her foot).That's good?

Cassie:Huum.
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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
("If I asked")
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10748 on: Sep 29, 2008, 04:31 PM »
New scene, the Childress Dance Hall.

LaShawn:  Pledged Tri Delt a SMU and I sure never tought I'd end up in a pokey little place like Childress, but then I met Randall at an Aggie game, .......blah,blah,blah.......... Like it or not, here I am!
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"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10749 on: Sep 30, 2008, 11:07 AM »
 ;D blah blah blah

Lureen: Oh you was Tri Delt? I was Kappa Phi myself.
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You may say I'm a dreamer But I'm not the only one I hope someday you'll join us And the world will live as one ~ Imagine- J. Lennon

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10750 on: Sep 30, 2008, 06:25 PM »

Lashawn (dramatically):  Well, even though we ain't quite sorority sisters, we my just have to dance with ourselves, Lureen!  Our husbands ain't the least bit interested in dancing.   They probably don't have a smidgin of rhythm between them.


*(I LOVE Lashawn!  She totally cracks me up!)  &**) BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10751 on: Sep 30, 2008, 09:11 PM »
Lureen: It's funny isn't it? Husbands don't never seem to want to dance with their wives.
Why do you think that is Jack?
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“What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close, the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."

You may say I'm a dreamer But I'm not the only one I hope someday you'll join us And the world will live as one ~ Imagine- J. Lennon

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10752 on: Oct 01, 2008, 12:08 PM »

Jack brushes cigarette ash off his shirt and refuses to meet Lureen's eyes as he says:  Ain't never gave it any thought.

Jack then turns to Lashawn and says:  Wanna dance?
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[they were] both high school dropout country boys with no prospects, brought up to hard work and privation, both rough-mannered, rough-spoken, inured to the stoic life.   

(BBM short story)

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10753 on: Oct 14, 2008, 10:21 AM »
Lashawn (a little surprised):Yes,thank you.

Jack(to Randall): Do you mind?

Randall:No it's allright.

Jack(repeats):Alright.
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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
("If I asked")
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10754 on: Oct 14, 2008, 06:22 PM »

Jack makes eye contact with Randall then follows Lashawn to the dance floor as she just chatters away:  Thank you for asking me to dance.  I really appreciate that...I really do.

Lureen, sitting at the table, looks upset, rolls her eyes in Jack's direction and continues to smoke her cigarette.

Jack and Lashawn start to dance and she continues to just chatter away:  It's a good think that you and Lureen happened along when you did or else we'd still be stuck on the side of the road in that darn old pick-up.  I told Randall that we should take the car but he don't never listen to me.  He wouldn't listen to me if he was going deaf tomorrow. 

Lashawn laughs nervously and continues to chatter:  I told Randall that it would take more than chewing gum and bailing wire to fix that pick-up.

Jack looks over Lashawn's shoulder at Randall as Lashawn continues to chatter:  Well, he's never been very mechanical...

 >:D  :8  >:D  :8  >:D  :8  >:D  :8  >:D  :8  >:D  :8  >:D  :8  >:D  :8  >:D  :8  >:D  :8  >:D  :8  >:D  :8  >:D  :8  >:D  :8  >:D  :8
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(BBM short story)

Offline jackster

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10755 on: Oct 22, 2008, 11:46 AM »
New scene outside the dance hall (finally), Jack an' Randall sittin' on a bench.

JACK:

Ever notice how a woman will powder her nose before she goes to a party,
then she'll powder it again once the party's over?

I mean, why powder your nose just to go home an' go to bed?

(some a Jacks most riveting dialog, here  ;) )
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10756 on: Oct 22, 2008, 04:46 PM »

Randall:  Don't know.

Randall takes a puff of his cigarette:  Even if I  wanted to know I couldn't get a word in with Lashawn...woman talks a blue streak.
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[they were] both high school dropout country boys with no prospects, brought up to hard work and privation, both rough-mannered, rough-spoken, inured to the stoic life.   

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10757 on: Oct 24, 2008, 10:44 AM »
Jack: Lively little gal.

(A few seconds of silence,that Jack breaks):
You'll like working for Roy Taylor.He's solid,Roy.
Randall: Oh,yeah,Roy,he's a...He's a good old boy.
Another silence's seconds,that Randall breaks this time):
He's got a little cabin down on Lake Kemp.Got a croppie house,little boat.Said I could use it whenever I want.
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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
("If I asked")
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You will be forever in my heart,friends.

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10758 on: Oct 24, 2008, 12:39 PM »

Randall, not looking at Jack, continues speaking quietly:  We ought to down there some weekend.  Drink a little whiskey...fish some.  Get away...you know?

Jack doesn't answer him but looks straight ahead and blinks his eyes rapidly.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10759 on: Nov 14, 2008, 12:31 PM »
We see Jack's surprised and a little anxious face while the two women are coming,of course speaking:

-LaShawn:And that was right out of SMU,I could've had my pick of pretty much any job in North Dallas,so my pick was Neiman Marcus...which was a desaster because,honey,where clothes is concerned...I got no resistance.I was spending more than I made.(bla,bla,bla).

The two men,a little uneasy,get up when the women are coming down the stairs.They don't say a word.
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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
("If I asked")
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Heathcliff Andrew Ledger (1979-2008)/Rajel Karen Ashkenazi (1986-2008)
You will be forever in my heart,friends.

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10760 on: Nov 14, 2008, 02:36 PM »

New scene: Alma Jr. is standing on the steps of  the home she shares with her mother, sister and stepfather.  Ennis drives up in in his  truck.  Cassie is sitting in the passenger seat.

Ennis:  Hey there, Junior.  You ready?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10761 on: Nov 14, 2008, 05:02 PM »

At the bar,

Cassie to Alma Jr. :  What do you think?  Is your daddy ever going to see fit to settle down again?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10762 on: Nov 20, 2008, 03:28 PM »

Alma Jr. stares at the table, not wanting to look Cassie in the eye: Don't know...maybe Daddy's not the marrying kind.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10763 on: Dec 13, 2008, 01:32 PM »
Cassie (looking disappointed) : You don't say much but you get your point across....
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"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10764 on: Dec 15, 2008, 01:58 PM »

Alma, Jr. (looking embarrassed):  Sorry, I didn't mean to be rude.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10765 on: Dec 15, 2008, 05:01 PM »
Ennis returns to the table,
Cassie to Ennis: C'mon cowboy you're stayin' on your feet.
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"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10766 on: Dec 15, 2008, 06:12 PM »

New scene:  Ennis driving his truck with Alma, Jr. riding in the passenger seat.

Ennis glances at Junior and says:  So, I'll pick you and Jenny up next weekend after church...
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10767 on: Dec 17, 2008, 12:53 PM »
Alma Jr.:  Fine.
Ennis:  You alright?
Alma Jr:  Yes
Ennis:  Sure?
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"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10768 on: Dec 17, 2008, 04:18 PM »

Alma, Jr. licks her lips quickly and looks nervously at Ennis:  Daddy, I was thinking.  With the new baby, Mom and Monroe have been awful strict on me.  More on me than on Jenny even.

Jr. continues:  I was thinking, maybe I could, may I could come and stay with you, Daddy.  I'd be an awful big help to you, I know I would.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #10769 on: Dec 27, 2008, 07:19 AM »
Ennis:(Sighs deeply, stops the car in front of Almas' Jr. house then says,stressed and even not looking at her) : 
 Now honey, you know I ain't really set up for that.  And with the round up coming, I won't ever be home.....   

Alma Jr. (sad and with resignation): It's all right, daddy...

Ennis: (looks at her) : Well, you know, I'm not sayin' I wouldn't....
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"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."
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