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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11100 on: May 13, 2009, 01:59 AM »
Ennis looks at Alma awkwardly, gives her a quick hug, and kisses her on the cheek, says:  See you Sunday, latest. and leaves.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11101 on: May 13, 2009, 06:52 AM »
Alma, holding Jr. in her arms watches the boys drive off together, weakly waves a hand, sniffles and cries as she sees her husband ride off with the man he so clearly loves.

In a new scene the boys head up to the mountains in Jack's snappy red & white pickup. They find the location of the old swimming hole, Jack parks the truck, the boys quickly strip down and, running to the edge of a cliff where, free of their clothes (and any other inhibitions), they jump in.

Ennis (who just can't wait) yells:     LAST ONE IN!

Ennis beats Jack in (of course) by a fraction of a second. When their heads emerge from the water they whoop and holler at each other and the trees and rocks. Their joy of being here again with each other is uninhibited.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11102 on: May 13, 2009, 07:27 AM »
New Scene.  At night, by the camp fire.  Ennis is gazing up to the night sky, and Jack notices.

Jack:  Anything interesting up there in heaven?


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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11103 on: May 13, 2009, 08:02 AM »
Ennis:  Just sending a prayer of thanks.
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"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11104 on: May 13, 2009, 12:17 PM »
Jack:  For what?

Ennis, smiling, replies:  For you forgetting to bring that harmonica.  I'm enjoying the peace and quiet.

Jack laughs at this.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11105 on: May 13, 2009, 03:00 PM »

Jack glances at Ennis and then speaks slowly, carefully choosing his words:  You know, it could be like this.  Just like this, ALWAYS.
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[they were] both high school dropout country boys with no prospects, brought up to hard work and privation, both rough-mannered, rough-spoken, inured to the stoic life.   

(BBM short story)

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11106 on: May 13, 2009, 09:24 PM »
ENNIS: Yeah? . . how da' ya' figure that?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11107 on: May 14, 2009, 12:51 AM »
Jack :(all serious now, looking down)   What if me and you had a little ranch together somewhere, little cow-and-calf operation, it'd be some sweet life.      (pauses, looks at Ennis)    and hell, Lureen's old man, you bet he'd give me a down-payment if I'd get lost, I mean, he already more or less said it....
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"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11108 on: May 14, 2009, 02:18 AM »
Ennis looks at Jack, frowns, shakes his heads, and in a tone of both doubt and sadness:

     No I, . . I told you, . . it ain't gonna' be that way.

Gets up from his recline facing Jack, sits close to Jack, but doesn't look him in the eye, continues . . .

     Ya' know you, . . you got your wife n' baby in Texas, n, . . you know I got my life in Riverton.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11109 on: May 14, 2009, 04:51 AM »
Jack:  Is that so...you and Alma...that's a life?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11110 on: May 14, 2009, 07:10 AM »
Ennis is slightly irritated, and says this as a sullen Jack listens...

Ennis: Now you shut up about Alma -- this ain't her fault.  The bottom line is... we're around each other and this "thing" grabs hold of us again... in the wrong place... at the wrong time... we're dead.


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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11111 on: May 14, 2009, 08:51 AM »
ENNIS:  I'll tell ya', . . . there, there were these two old guys that ranched off together down home, Earl n' Rich . . .
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11112 on: May 14, 2009, 10:34 AM »
(We see in a flashback a little boy Ennis,his brother and father walking from a dusty path).Ennis keeps on talking:

-And they was a joke in town, even though they were pretty tough old birds.Anyway, they... they found Earl dead in an irrigation ditch.

(We see meanwhile young Ennis afraid face by stopping near Earl body).

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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11113 on: May 14, 2009, 05:10 PM »

Ennis, head down, shoulders hunched continues:  They took a tire iron to him...spurred him up, drug him around by his dick 'til it pulled off, 
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[they were] both high school dropout country boys with no prospects, brought up to hard work and privation, both rough-mannered, rough-spoken, inured to the stoic life.   

(BBM short story)

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11114 on: May 15, 2009, 07:33 AM »
Jack (his face vaguely incredulous):  You seen this?
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11115 on: May 15, 2009, 07:42 AM »
ENNIS: Yeah, I wasn't  . . . nine years old. My dad he, he made sure me an' my brother seen it. Hell, for all I know he done the job.
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11116 on: May 15, 2009, 07:45 AM »
Ennis continues.

Ennis: Two guys livin' together?  No way!  Now... we can get together once in a while... way the hell out in the middle of nowhere... but...
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11117 on: May 15, 2009, 11:25 AM »
-Jack(a little angry) : “Once in a while”... every four f@#$ng years?

-Ennis: Well, if you can't fix it, Jack, you gotta stand it...

-Jack:  For how long?



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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11118 on: May 15, 2009, 11:56 AM »
ENNIS: As long as we can ride it.

            There ain’t no reins on this one.


   
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11119 on: May 15, 2009, 12:01 PM »
Ennis looks really sad while saying all this,on the verge of crying.Jack understands this and softly caresses Ennis face.



 *o) Congratulations on your 1000 posts,Jackster ¡
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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
("If I asked")
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Heathcliff Andrew Ledger (1979-2008)/Rajel Karen Ashkenazi (1986-2008)
You will be forever in my heart,friends.

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11120 on: May 15, 2009, 12:04 PM »
Thanks MPJ for noticing.  :^^)
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11121 on: May 15, 2009, 01:03 PM »
New scene:  the back of the Riverton laundromat, where Junior and Jenny are swinging on a swing set.  Inside the Del Mar apartment, the sound of an argument in progress:

Ennis shouting at Alma:  Where the hell do ya think you're going?

Alma replies loudly:  To work!

Ennis:  I thought you had the day off!

Alma:  Well you thought wrong!

Ennis:  The girls need to be fed!

Alma:  You take care of it!

Ennis yells as Alma leaves:  Alma!  Alma!

Alma yells:  Supper is on the stove!

Ennis yells back:  No one's eatin' it unless you're servin' it.  Alma..


Quote from: myprivatejack on May 15, 2009, 12:01 PM
*o) Congratulations on your 100 posts,Jackster ¡

1000 posts, Jackster...wow! Congratulations!
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11122 on: May 15, 2009, 07:08 PM »

Alma, yelling as she walks down the steps leading from the back of the apartment:  I already promised I'd take the extra shift!
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[they were] both high school dropout country boys with no prospects, brought up to hard work and privation, both rough-mannered, rough-spoken, inured to the stoic life.   

(BBM short story)

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11123 on: May 17, 2009, 07:01 AM »
Ennis (shouting):Fu*kin' tell him you made a mistake, then!!
he runs after Alma, passes his girls that are swaying on a swing,angry and frustrated :
 Goddamn it! . . Alma! . . . Alma!

(she ignores him, goes on her way)

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Yay  Jackster.congrats, you are Ennis now!!  :clap:
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"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11124 on: May 18, 2009, 04:50 AM »
Ennis turns around and walks back towards the girls, who have been swinging on the swingset:

Do you girls need a push or somethin'?

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11125 on: May 18, 2009, 09:50 AM »
The two girls (in unison):  No.

They continue swinging (they are evidently used to such scenes).  Ennis kicks a bucket and goes up the stairs...
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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11126 on: May 20, 2009, 07:43 AM »
New scene: A sunny day at the sales lot at Newsome Farm Equipment in Childress, Texas. Jack Climbing aboard what looks like a large red combine. Jack shouting (to be heard) to an assembled group of nine potential buyers:

JACK: Listen to her purr gentleman. You're not gonna' get that with your Caddy. I told you she could do it, now let me show you.

Two ranchers, inside in Lureen's office, are lookin' out the window at Jack put the equipment through it's paces on the lot:

RANCHER 1: Say, isn't that the pissant that used ta' ride the bulls?

RANCHER 2: He used to try.

Lureen looks up from her papers, ignores their comments, says nuthin'.

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11127 on: May 21, 2009, 07:40 AM »
New (wordless) scene.

At the Riverton apartment.  Alma has just come in with the groceries.  She looks at the day's mail, and spies a suspicious postcard.  Yes, it is from Jack.  Message is: 

Ennis

See you in a couple of weeks. Fish should be jumpin'

Jack

Alma hears Ennis parking the truck, so she hides the postcard within the pile of the day's mail...

 

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11128 on: May 23, 2009, 01:35 PM »
New scene:At Jacks' house.

Jack enters :Honey, have you seen my blue parka?
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"What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close,the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger."
"I miss you so much I can hardly stand it."

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Re: BBM Recital
« Reply #11129 on: May 25, 2009, 10:23 AM »
Lureen :Last time I seen it, you was in it...day we had that big ice storm.

Jack :Well, could have sworn I seen it in here.

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Ennis’s eyes gone bright with shock, mouth opening then closing again. “Love?” Ennis said finally, voice strangling in his throat.

Jack smiled sad. “Yeah, Ennis. Love.” Leaned forward and kissed Ennis’s temple, whispered, “What’d you think it was, all this time?”
("If I asked")
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Heathcliff Andrew Ledger (1979-2008)/Rajel Karen Ashkenazi (1986-2008)
You will be forever in my heart,friends.
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